jafaristhebest posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 1 day, 16 hours ago

    Esther’s POV
    Esther watched with wide eyes as the Bloodrose was arched to the attacking ship. She didn’t know what exactly Captain Red had compromised, but whatever she had said had gotten the enemies to stop attacking.
    ‘What do I do?‘ she signed to herself, bored of simply thinking her thoughts and not moving much.
    She crouched in a corner,…[Read more]

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 15 hours ago

        I was going to have Katelyn escape too. Imagine if the two work together!

        jafaristhebest replied 1 day, 15 hours ago

        Ooh yeah haha

    foxgirl25 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 1 day, 17 hours ago

    Okay, I just have to address this. It’s one of my biggest pet-peeves. GRAMMAR!!! I’m not getting mad at anyone, I SWEAR! I just want to give a few quick pointers. 😀 When you are writing dialogue:
    “Hi,” she said. ~ there is a comma, and then the quotation mark. Notice the “she ” part is not capitalized. (If it was someone’s name, you would…[Read more]

        lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        I agree completely, everyone read this.

        queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        In a bit i going to add an entire book to this post, just you wait.

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          Yeeesss! I look forward to the grammar book XD

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          I don’t care who you are, or ANYTHING. You will use the Oxford Comma or face my wrath.

          delilahkitty replied 1 day, 15 hours ago

          DITTO

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        You’re not being bossy at all! Thanks for this!

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          Np!

          delilahkitty replied 1 day, 9 hours ago

          And this really annoys me:
          ‘Ellie took a deep breath. She stared at the deep, blue, scary, void.’ If you put a comma before ‘void,’ people-
          It really annoys me because you don’t write or say it like that.

        jafaristhebest replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        Ahh thank you so much!! Grammar gets on my nerves too.
        Also, everyone, please remember: It’s is the same as it is, whereas ‘its’ is belonging to someone. Hehe sorry I just find that very annoying when someone mixes up the two and then doesn’t correct it.

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          ^^^^^^^^^^ YES ^^^^^^^^^^

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          YES YES YES YES YES!

        foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        Also sorry it’s a bit basic…I didn’t want to give a full-blown grammar tutorial XD
        (I picked dialogue because it’s just something I noticed happening a lot)

        queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        Guys— SPELLING. SPELLING, SPELLING, SPELLING. People in this level forget the dental fricative every. friking. time.

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 13 hours ago

          I try to make sure I spell things right.
          Oop it would just be embarrassing if I go post something with bad grammar or spelling after making this post XD (Sorry if I do spell thing wrong or have nad grammar oof)

        queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        use the order of adjectives. i am no longer asking.

        queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        There/They’re/Their. There is a place. They’re means they are. Their is something that belongs to them.

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 13 hours ago

          Yeeeeessss

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 day, 15 hours ago

        Thank you, I totally agree!!
        Also, for punctuation, something that gets on my nerves- You can’t end a sentence with a comma. Of course you can use them in between, but the end of a sentence has to be a period, question mark, or exclamation mark. It can’t be open-ended, punctuated with a comma, or anything besides those three (at least while wri…[Read more]

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 13 hours ago

          I completely agree. Punctuation is SUPER important (Although sry, when I’m commenting not posting, sometimes I leave my sentences open-ended and use abbreviations).

          ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 day, 12 hours ago

          Yep! (Oh personally I think that’s fine- sry I think I do it too, my comment mainly meant for POV’s :))

        anadilforever7 replied 1 day, 15 hours ago

        Thank you! Whenever people say grammar I have no idea what to fix so thank you for this

          foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 13 hours ago

          Np!

          ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 1 day, 12 hours ago

          :))

    Jun posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 1 day, 19 hours ago

    As we head into the New Years, we’re looking back and taking a blast to the past in our new Special Assignment, Book 1 Mysteries: https://schoolforgoodandevil.com/special-assignment-book-1-mysteries/

    Head on over and give us your best shot at Book 1’s unsolved mysteries!

    Plus, as we head into these colder months, we have a new Contest for you…[Read more]

    lizziebennet posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 8 hours ago

    i am not gone! i am still here with an updated bio yet again!

    Name: Rhysand
    Age: 17
    School: He doesn’t go to the schools but would be good
    Fairy tale relative: He doesn’t have a real one but can i just say he inherited a small city in the woods from his parents, a secret city named ✨velaris✨
    Appearance: He is heartbreakingly handsome and has sho…[Read more]

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 21 hours ago

        This actually hella cool! Melody would love to hang out with him. Approved!

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 19 hours ago

        I will include him in my next POV, ok?

          lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          Uh… but he’s working for kyrion?

        foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 19 hours ago

        Also quick Q…do we know who was catured on the bloodrose and who is not? (AHEM NO ONE HAS DECIDED YET AHEM DECIDE PEOPLE) (Sorry, I’m getting impatient XD)

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 19 hours ago

        Uh we just need Jafar to write what happened to Esther then we’ll move on

        lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        pronounced rees-und. reezund? basically Reasoned :/

          lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          Nickname: Rhys

        lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        I wanted to add, his eyes look blue unless you see them in starlight.

        queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        *wheezes at the harry potter reference* *more wheezing* I have not forgotten my last, dUmbLeDore! I love him, lies and him shall be shipped even though there is no ship name 🙁 @julianaarthur ship name, pls

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          *liesl

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 17 hours ago
          lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          this is a picture reference
          https://tinyurl.com/y4esjt3n

          lizziebennet replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          works for mee

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          sure!

    queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 9 hours ago

    Liesl’s PoV

    I looked around and started at seeing a girl with aegean hair and tanned skin, her in the cell that I was in. ‘Merlina?’ I asked, recognizing . Her purple eyes that were focused on her hands flicked to me.
    ‘That’s your name, right?’ she nodded.
    ‘Yours?’ she inquired (wowie big words)
    ‘Liesl. Do you know how we got trapped in here?’…[Read more]

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 19 hours ago

        Merli’s eyes are a mix of blue and green. I think you mistook her appearance for my story’s Merlina

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

          do you think i have enough patience to scroll through your activity and find a bio

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 17 hours ago

        It’s in my favs XD

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          nor do I nor do I have enough patience to go through your favourites!

        julianaarthur replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        XD fair enough

        foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        Me: *reading the comments ~ randomly starts laughing*

        foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

        Me: *reads diolouge* *extremley amused*

          queendeansophieofwoodsbeyond replied 1 day, 16 hours ago

          it’s extremely

        foxgirl25 replied 1 day, 13 hours ago

        oop sry

    anadilforever7 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 11 hours ago

    Eliza pov
    Eliza grinned “Alright but you will see me again” she stated. Then Eliza turned into a swan and flew away.
    @FOXGIRL25

    foxgirl25 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 12 hours ago

    Twilight PoV
    “Leave us alone unless you want me to curse you. I would gladly do it,” I say to her. “If you really want to know what’s going on, we’re just going to test some potion. Now please just leave us be. Or I’ll curse you or something.”
    @anadilforever7

    anadilforever7 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 12 hours ago

    Eliza pov
    Eliza smiled as a butterfly. She zipped around happily. Then she turned into a swan and got out of the jar. She turned back into a human and grinned. “Thanks for that” she said.
    @FOXGIRL25

    foxgirl25 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 12 hours ago

    Twilight PoV
    Elize seemed determined to find out what was going on. Nothing was, except we were going to test some potions. I watched as she waddled away and then morgified into a butterfly. I took a jar out and then caught the butterfly in the jar.
    “I’m going to keep you in here because you seem determined to sneak into the school for evil,” I…[Read more]

    anadilforever7 posted an update in the group RP Level 3: The Endless Woods 2 days, 15 hours ago

    Eliza POV
    Eliza figured out they knew she was following them and walked back into the forest. Then she morgrifyed into a butterfly. With a red dot on its head and blue wings along with a very red tongue. She fluttered after them silently.

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