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Esther watched with wide eyes as the Bloodrose was arched to the attacking ship. She didn’t know what exactly Captain Red had compromised, but whatever she had said had gotten the enemies to stop attacking.
‘What do I do?‘ she signed to herself, bored of simply thinking her thoughts and not moving much.
She crouched in a corner,…[Read more]
Okay, I just have to address this. It’s one of my biggest pet-peeves. GRAMMAR!!! I’m not getting mad at anyone, I SWEAR! I just want to give a few quick pointers. 😀 When you are writing dialogue:
“Hi,” she said. ~ there is a comma, and then the quotation mark. Notice the “she ” part is not capitalized. (If it was someone’s name, you would…[Read more]
In a bit i going to add an entire book to this post, just you wait.
I don’t care who you are, or ANYTHING. You will use the Oxford Comma or face my wrath.
Ahh thank you so much!! Grammar gets on my nerves too.
Also, everyone, please remember: It’s is the same as it is, whereas ‘its’ is belonging to someone. Hehe sorry I just find that very annoying when someone mixes up the two and then doesn’t correct it.
Also sorry it’s a bit basic…I didn’t want to give a full-blown grammar tutorial XD
(I picked dialogue because it’s just something I noticed happening a lot)
Guys— SPELLING. SPELLING, SPELLING, SPELLING. People in this level forget the dental fricative every. friking. time.
use the order of adjectives. i am no longer asking.
There/They’re/Their. There is a place. They’re means they are. Their is something that belongs to them.
Thank you, I totally agree!!
Also, for punctuation, something that gets on my nerves- You can’t end a sentence with a comma. Of course you can use them in between, but the end of a sentence has to be a period, question mark, or exclamation mark. It can’t be open-ended, punctuated with a comma, or anything besides those three (at least while wri…[Read more]
I completely agree. Punctuation is SUPER important (Although sry, when I’m commenting not posting, sometimes I leave my sentences open-ended and use abbreviations).
Thank you! Whenever people say grammar I have no idea what to fix so thank you for this
As we head into the New Years, we’re looking back and taking a blast to the past in our new Special Assignment, Book 1 Mysteries: https://schoolforgoodandevil.com/special-assignment-book-1-mysteries/
Head on over and give us your best shot at Book 1’s unsolved mysteries!
Plus, as we head into these colder months, we have a new Contest for you…[Read more]
i am not gone! i am still here with an updated bio yet again!
School: He doesn’t go to the schools but would be good
Fairy tale relative: He doesn’t have a real one but can i just say he inherited a small city in the woods from his parents, a secret city named ✨velaris✨
Appearance: He is heartbreakingly handsome and has sho…[Read more]
This actually hella cool! Melody would love to hang out with him. Approved!
Also quick Q…do we know who was catured on the bloodrose and who is not? (AHEM NO ONE HAS DECIDED YET AHEM DECIDE PEOPLE) (Sorry, I’m getting impatient XD)
Uh we just need Jafar to write what happened to Esther then we’ll move on
I wanted to add, his eyes look blue unless you see them in starlight.
*wheezes at the harry potter reference* *more wheezing* I have not forgotten my last, dUmbLeDore! I love him, lies and him shall be shipped even though there is no ship name 🙁 @julianaarthur ship name, pls
I looked around and started at seeing a girl with aegean hair and tanned skin, her in the cell that I was in. ‘Merlina?’ I asked, recognizing . Her purple eyes that were focused on her hands flicked to me.
‘That’s your name, right?’ she nodded.
‘Yours?’ she inquired (wowie big words)
‘Liesl. Do you know how we got trapped in here?’…[Read more]
Merli’s eyes are a mix of blue and green. I think you mistook her appearance for my story’s Merlina
Eliza grinned “Alright but you will see me again” she stated. Then Eliza turned into a swan and flew away.
“Leave us alone unless you want me to curse you. I would gladly do it,” I say to her. “If you really want to know what’s going on, we’re just going to test some potion. Now please just leave us be. Or I’ll curse you or something.”
Eliza smiled as a butterfly. She zipped around happily. Then she turned into a swan and got out of the jar. She turned back into a human and grinned. “Thanks for that” she said.
Elize seemed determined to find out what was going on. Nothing was, except we were going to test some potions. I watched as she waddled away and then morgified into a butterfly. I took a jar out and then caught the butterfly in the jar.
“I’m going to keep you in here because you seem determined to sneak into the school for evil,” I…[Read more]
Eliza figured out they knew she was following them and walked back into the forest. Then she morgrifyed into a butterfly. With a red dot on its head and blue wings along with a very red tongue. She fluttered after them silently.