Hey guys! Today I just gathered all of the chapters written so far into one post, and added a bit more.
Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on…[Read more]
This is really good! However, there is a lot of plot holes, why is she suddenly in beautification after sitting on a pink bed moments before? Tag me though, this is interesting!
Thanks for the tips! I’ll tag you. I was kinda in a hurry, so I didn’t get to space it well, but there’s actually three and a half chapters in here. Each of the *** is separating the chapters. Sorry if it was a bit confusing, I’ll try to make it better! Overall, thanks a lot for the criticism, it helps me become a better writer!
Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I haven’t been on here in a while. But I really like it!
Lol sorry this is really short. I didn’t have a lot of free time today
Neveah was already awake when Rosilla and her other roommates woke up. She couldn’t go back to sleep after her dream last night. A dark figure had come to her and…[Read more]
Neveah sat open mouthed in her first class at the School for Good. Beautification. Her teacher, Professor Emma Anemone had wild neon yellow hair, a blindingly pink dress, and from what Neveah has gathered from the lecture she had given, was obsessed with being the prettiest.…[Read more]
Sry for not doing this earlier: here’s a profile for my character Neveah.
Parents: Her father is the owner of Mr. Deavilles shop. Her mother was once the Princess of Altazara, but was kicked out once a new king took the throne.
School: School for Good
Personality: Shy, but when she gets to know you, she will be…[Read more]
Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on top of her. Neveah sat up in the pink bed. On the walls of the room were enormous murals of fairy tale endings, True Love’s Kiss, beautiful princes beating back hideous beasts. Footsteps echoed in the halls. Neveah lay back…[Read more]
Sry for me asking, but what do I do to tag you, and what do I use it for?