agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 9 months, 1 week ago

    Hey guys! Today I just gathered all of the chapters written so far into one post, and added a bit more.

    Taggies:

    @Dream-Faerie
    @Effie
    @Pearly-Waddles
    @Maddy101
    @Ever1Never8
    @everimagine
    @merqueen23
    @hester112
    @lilbugs

    Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on…[Read more]

        princezzdot replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        This is really good! However, there is a lot of plot holes, why is she suddenly in beautification after sitting on a pink bed moments before? Tag me though, this is interesting!

          agatha79 replied 9 months, 1 week ago

          Thanks for the tips! I’ll tag you. I was kinda in a hurry, so I didn’t get to space it well, but there’s actually three and a half chapters in here. Each of the *** is separating the chapters. Sorry if it was a bit confusing, I’ll try to make it better! Overall, thanks a lot for the criticism, it helps me become a better writer!

        princezzdot replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        Your welcome!

        effie replied 5 months ago

        Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I haven’t been on here in a while. But I really like it!

          princezzdot replied 5 months ago

          I remember you from, like, when I very first joined!

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 9 months, 2 weeks ago

    Lol sorry this is really short. I didn’t have a lot of free time today

    Taggies:

    @Dream-Faerie

    @Effie

    @Pearly-Waddles

    @Maddy101

    @Ever1Never8

    @everimagine

    @merqueen23

    Chapter 3

    Neveah was already awake when Rosilla and her other roommates woke up. She couldn’t go back to sleep after her dream last night. A dark figure had come to her and…[Read more]

        merqueen23 replied 9 months, 2 weeks ago

        That.Was.AWESOME!!!

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 9 months, 2 weeks ago

        yeah, that was super good!

        hetherthenever replied 9 months, 2 weeks ago

        how is that short????!!!!!!

        hester112 replied 9 months, 2 weeks ago

        Please tag me!!!!

        lilbugs replied 9 months, 2 weeks ago

        Pls tagg meeeeehhhhhhhh

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 1 week ago

    @DREAM-FAERIE
    @EFFIE
    @PEARLY-WADDLES
    @MADDY101
    @NEVER11EVER8

    Chapter 2:
    Neveah sat open mouthed in her first class at the School for Good. Beautification. Her teacher, Professor Emma Anemone had wild neon yellow hair, a blindingly pink dress, and from what Neveah has gathered from the lecture she had given, was obsessed with being the prettiest.…[Read more]

        everimagine replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        This is so good! Taggles please!

          sohamw replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          this is amazing

        merqueen23 replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        Plz tag me, that was amazing!!

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months, 3 weeks ago

    Sry for not doing this earlier: here’s a profile for my character Neveah.
    Name: Neveah
    Age:13
    Gender: Female
    Parents: Her father is the owner of Mr. Deavilles shop. Her mother was once the Princess of Altazara, but was kicked out once a new king took the throne.
    School: School for Good
    Personality: Shy, but when she gets to know you, she will be…[Read more]

        dream-faerie replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        I love this!!!

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months, 3 weeks ago

    Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on top of her. Neveah sat up in the pink bed. On the walls of the room were enormous murals of fairy tale endings, True Love’s Kiss, beautiful princes beating back hideous beasts. Footsteps echoed in the halls. Neveah lay back…[Read more]

        lilystarling replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        Wow

          agatha79 replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

          Thanks so much!

        dream-faerie replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        I love it, tag me please!!!

          agatha79 replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

          Sry for me asking, but what do I do to tag you, and what do I use it for?

          dream-faerie replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

          That’s okay, you just put @dream-faerie and that’s it. you tag people so that they can see your chapters right away

        effie replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        Tag me!!

        pearly-waddles replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        Tag me!! That was amazing!

        maddy101 replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        This is fantastic stuff! Please tag me!

        never11ever8 replied 11 months, 3 weeks ago

        Tag!