Nicola tensed. Old, weasely, Hort. She once said she loved him. But now, as his girlfriend and close friend, she didn’t really feel comfortable around him anymore. They had never kissed, or flirted too much… it’s not like they had time with a war going on. Plus… he was a history teacher, a fourth year, while she was just a tiny first year. The…[Read more]
Mia awakened in a pool of sweat. Her eyes glistened. Straightaway she turned to her right… only to find Cardilily snoring softly in her cot. Mia exhaled. It was just a dream, she reassured herself. Just a dream.
But she kept thinking about that same dream, the dream that she had over and over again, as long as she new Cardilily…
She gasped.…[Read more]
Mia waded through the huge crowd of people. What was all the commotion for? She really just wanted to sit in her room and read. She had never wanted to be here. Cardilily, her roommate, had dragged her here.
As she shoved through the mass of people, she noticed Cardilily streaking past her, running towards the headmaster’s quarters. Well, she h…[Read more]
You should create a bio for your character so that we could know the character better.
Anyway, this is a really good first chapter.
Mia woke up to her buzzing alarm clock.
Her body filled with adrenalin.
Last night she had snuck out the back door of the common room and walked into the cobblestone courtyard. As her bare feet swept along the rough rocks, she heard a soft whispering.
Who is that? She thought.
All the students were locked in their dorms; surely no one else could…[Read more]
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Important! Read the first two chapters first!
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you need to do it like this!
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so like this
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Great keep doing the story it is enjoyable. The other chapters really explained how some people are feeling!