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Hello everyone!! Got something different for ✨Syreni✨ this evening. It’s a spoiler I wrote for a chapter thats coming in the near-far future. Better go find your weapons, snacks, tissues, and pillows to take your inexpressible anger out on, because it’s time!
🎬ACTION!🎬
🔱💎🌊💦💧~~Syreni~~💧💦🌊💎🔱
read at thy own risk
~~~SPOILERS~~~
I knew how to h…[Read more]
OH MY WORD!! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!! Is Alana a descendant of King Triton? Is she going to die and what what what???? I need more this spoiler is next level!! How are you soo good at writing?
OH MY GOOOOOOODNESS INCROYABLE!!!!!! SO AMAZING!!!!!
Yes Bry tis very INCROYABLE
spdjhouk YOUR MOTHER IS SENTENCING YOU TO DEATH? MAYBE SHE’S ONE OF THE SYRENI – AND HOW WILL YOU END UP IN A DUNGEON?
I have never been so grateful for spoilers.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA THE QUEEN IS AFAKLSJDLAKSJDLKASHDJASHD AND ASDJHLAKSJDLKASJD THE SPOILERS ARE AMAZING AND AKFLJALKSJDAS
OMG YESSS THIS WAS SO INTERESTING AND AAAH THIS WAS WRITTEN SO WELLLL
:DDD I NEED MORE WRITING
OH MY GOSHHHHH THIS IS TOO GOOD! HOW IS THIS YOUR WRITING?? ARE YOU A FAMOUS AUTHOR UNDERCOVER OR SOMETHING?? Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH WOW YOUR MOTHER IS SENTENCING YOU TO DEATH THAT’S REALLY MESSED UP–I SEVERELY DISLIKE YOUR MOTHER—
OH MY GINGERBREAD THIS WAS FANTASTIC SPOILERS ARE GREAT XD –EVERYONE’S GONNA HAVE TO COME BREAK YOU OUT OF PRISON–
I—IM SORRY WHAT- THE GOOSEBUMPS OF THIS SCENE- OH MAH GOODNESS
gaSPETH
Yo mom is mean…
DW WE’LL SAVE YOU!!!
…right?
lol I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THERE ARE NO WORDS I’M SERIOUS… wait there are….. I NEED MORE
Your mother has issues-
Anyways
Amazing spoiler Ally and I need you to keep writing so I can read 😁
(also, my theories are still going strong 😉 )
Alana, this is amazing. I won’t say much more because these comments basically summed it up, but you are an amazing writer Ally. Love you, and never stop!!❤️
@Mindlle
Hi Emma! Havent heard from you in ages. Any filming updates?
Jtjfjf Ahhhh I meant to check in a while ago! Yeah, any updates? Id love to hear about it!
Hey!! So sorry for no updates, I am not really sure why, but the director never responded… 🙁 I just had my agency seminar though!! I really hope I get picked up by them, I couldnt make it to the actual seminar though because I had a vball tournament, but I filmed a self tape audition.
Hello everyone!! This is the moment you’ve been patiently awaiting. Welcome back to another super dramatic chapter of ✨Syreni✨ Better go find your weapons, snacks, tissues, and pillows to take your inexpressible anger out on, because it’s time!
🎬ACTION!🎬
🔱💎🌊💦💧~~Syreni~~💧💦🌊💎🔱
~~~Chapter Nineteen~~~
We had sunk into a hysterically blissful sor…[Read more]
Ahhhh I loved this chapter!!! This is so amazing awesome job 👏👏👏💛💛
Ahhhh, beautifully written! I just have one tip, and it’s that I noticed your tense was changing a bit every now and then. For example, in one place you’d have past tense, but the next, you’d have present. It can be a liiiittle bit tricky to catch, so maybe when rereading your chapter, try to pay special attention to that. However, I’m not as good…[Read more]
Oh my gosh, I love your writing! It’s so beautiful!! This is absolutely amazing!!
AAAAAAAAA this is so good!!!!!
Awesome alana!!!!!
Ally, this was awesome! I legit need another chapter right away, and I love the way you portray me(:
YES THE SYRENI IS UP TO SOMETHING
WHY ELSE WOULD THEY SEND ANYA AND A BACK, LIKE THAT DOESN’T EVEN MAKE SENSE-
BE SUSPICIOUS ALLY BE SUSPICIOUS YOU TOO HAYCH
AND THIS CHAPTER WAS SUPERB I LOVE IT (though make sure that you’re not switching between present and past tense, like Maria said; it can get a bit confusing and interrupt the flow of the…[Read more]
THIS IS AMAZING!!
shoot i guessed wrong i thought kayla was evil or smth maybe she is but there’s a less percentage now so 🤷 but she’s still a tad bit sus
AMAZING CHAPTER!! SYRENI IS SO CONFUSING AND MYSTERIOUS AND AAAH LOVE IT
AWESOME JOB 👏👏
Ahahaha Ally!!!! *cries* I didn’t get this notif though-
AnYwAyS
That was amazingggggg
And yes, we are on to youuu Ally and Kaylaaaaaa (Cancer zodiac’s-We’re physiccc)
#AwkwardNautumnmoments XD
and since Maria won’t do it, will you make me kill myself in the story please please please?? 🥺👉👈
no one is killing you in their story.
but it’d make things so much easier plus I don’t need to be in the story alive and well anyways
sngngngngn no
sngngngngngn yes
Ally, will you write por favor? Yes ik you’re in English but like-
Nah jk
But srsly, I do need your writing
🥺👉👈🙏
Bahahhaahha yes I need to read more
I NEED MORE ENDGAME TOO MARA
JEEP WITING ENDGAME
AAAAAAAAAAAAA I’M SO EXCITED FOR MORE!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!
The Syreni being super suspicious right now…
I feel really bad for the newbies who show up while the site is like this-
I promise it gets better if you stick around!
It really is an amazing site just wait and see
Absolutely! I can’t imagine what it must be like; roleplaying was definitely the highlight for most people.
Hello everyone!! Welcome to the next chapter of ‘Syreni.’ Please tell me if I don’t portray you right!
💎🌊💦💧🌀~~Syreni~~🌀💧💦🌊💎
~~~Chapter Eighteen~~~
I opened my eyes to blinding white light.
“H-hello?” I called into the emptiness, narrowing my eyes with curiosity as I looked around. The ground beneath my feet had vanished to nothing, so I was ess…[Read more]
aHHHH AMAZING AS USUAL
IT’S SO VIVID AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND I LOVE EETTTT
HOW DID ANYA AND AUTUMN COME BACK
HMMMM
OKAY THIS WAS SUPER GOOD (AGAIN)
*backflips into a cave to wait for the next chapter*
nash ran away to find me and brought us back
ew no-
BAHAHAHA YES AUTUMN
Yessir 😎😂🙈🤭🤫
ugh I’m starting to wonder if you are secretly a famous author because of how good ur writing is
Legit-
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I-
This is wonderful!!!!
AAAAAAAAA THE WAY YOU WRITE JUST MAKES ME SMILE EVERY TIME… even when it’s about people… dying… *evil smirk*
KEEP. WRITING.
Am I in yet? I don’t see me-
She put in the names of all of us and whatever she got it will go in that order randomized so you might be able to ask for the order in which all the people will get their challenge
I mean am I in the story or just not in the group-
sorry Lil, you didnt submit a bio! If you want, I can include you if you submit one!
ahhhhhhhh thanks for all your comments guys!
ALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
OH MY GOD
ARE YOU AN INFLICTOR??????????????????????????????????????????????
My hands no longer work-which is a slight problem but who cares-
Yo-
jeep Keep writing because this is and Maria’s story is what’s keeping me alive rn
Skkdnfhnrhtudhfs my story I—
OH MY LORD— SISSSSSS I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS— ITS SO AMAZING 😭😭
HELP ME THIS IS TO GOOD OF A STORY. THE WRITING IS PHENOMENAL- ITS JUST TOO AMAZING TO BE REAL
OMG YES THAT WAS SO COOOOLLLL!!!!!! ALKSDFJALKSDFJA AMAZING AS USUAL
OMG OMG OMG *you should know what that stands for in my head by now-* OMG THIS WAS DARK BUT ALSO ENCHANTING AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
ALSO WHEN YOU SAID DAE’S ARM HAD DISSOLVED INTO BLACK ASHES I IMMEDIATELY THOUGHT OF THE BLIP IN MARVEL
And I went straight to being dead ahaha XDD
NOW I REALLYYYY WANT OT READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!! :DD
*To
AHAHA YES THE GOOD OLD MARVEL BLIP
*snaps*
*blips away*
Yes the Marvel Blip; I mean we just watched Infinity War and Endgame over the weekend and now I actually really like Marvel hehe
OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO AMAZING AND VIVID!!!!!!!
Woah incredible!!!!!
OML- SOOOOOO GODD AHH
WAIT I-
I SWEAR I DID
OKAY
Bio:
Name: Delilah Mistral
Nickname: Dee/D, Liley, Kit, Kitty, Lila/Lilah, Del, Lil
Age: 13
Pronouns: She/her
Gender: Female
Orientation: Bi
School: Good
Fingerglow: Azure
Appearance: For most of the time I have long red waves, violet eyes and a Keefeish smirk
Backstory:
Fairy tale relative: Rhian Mistral is my father…[Read more]
Hello everyone!! Welcome to the next chapter of ‘Syreni.’ Sorry, I’m no longer accepting bios. Don’t worry if you’re not included straight away, I promise you will be eventually! Please tell me if I don’t portray you right!
🌂🍁💔🌹🪁~~Syreni~~🪁🌹💔🍁🌂
Challenge: MARIA
~~~Chapter Seventeen~~~
“Alana! ****** Alana wake up!”
I gasped awake from a dr…[Read more]
dam.mit
Girl, I need another chapter, pronto! *claps hands* Oh and happy late Valentines day btw(:❤️
yay first now time to read
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!
happy valentines day Anya!! 💖💖💖
That was AWESOME I LOVED IT
Awesome!! 💛
AAAAAA
OKAY
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAA
ALANA, YOU HAVE BEEN BLESSED BY THE LITERARY GODS
THIS. IS. SO. GOD. FREAKING. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.
I LOVED IT
I LOVED THE FIGHTING
I LOVED THE CHALLENGED
I LOVED THE TALKING
I LOVED EVERYTHING
I LOVE THIS STORY AHHHHHHH AJFHGJDJFIDJF YOU HAVE DONE ME JUSTICE. I AM PROUD.
THANK YOU.
NOW GO WRITE SOME MORE—
haha Maria I was nervous to see what you thought-
I LOVE IT.
THAT’S ALL I’M THINKING RIGHT NOW—
Aaaaaamazing!!!!!
Oh my gosh that was so good! Your writing is so beautiful!
SO AWESOME AAAAAAAA YESSSS
OH MY GOD THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING I LOVE HOW YOU SIMULATED THAT ALANA!!!! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL TO READ
Oooooooooooooooooooo MARIA!!!!!!!!!
AHAHAHA ALLY YOU MADE THE ONE AND ONLY MARA SURRENDER BAHAHA
ANYWAYS
THAT. WAS. PERFECTION. OMG. I. NEED. MORE.
*sigh* yeah, I wish that was different but… yOu GeT wHaT yOu GeT
aNd YoU dOn’T tHrOw A fIt
(also tohas???)
Happy belated Valentine’s Day! AND AHHH ALLY THAT WAS TERRIFIC!! I love this rp so much!
DUDE THIS IS LIKE, SERIOUSLY AMAZING Plus I’m enjoying you calling me an amazing swimmer when I’m probably only like mediocre– BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND I FEEL ALL THE CHALLENGES WILL BE SO, SO INTERESTING TO READ ABOUT BEAUSE THEY AHVE THUS FAR
Plus they kind of evil a deeper insight on the character, which I think is totally wonderlandiful!
AAAAAAAAAAAH YESSSSSSSSSS YOU GO MARIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I LOVE THIS SO SO SO SO SO MUCH ALANAAAAAA
It makes your story more… personal… AND I LOVE IT KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST
AW *hairflip* THANK YOU, THANK YOU—
AJSFHBUIDFHB
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!
I really want to post a rp chapter-
arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
im sorry if this is annoying for yall…
🦋🐙🔥🍂🪐~~Syreni~~🪐🍂🔥🐙🦋
~~~Chapter Seventeen~~~
Congratulations on your completion of the first challenge
As a reward, no deaths will follow
Your next test takes place tonight
It will find you
Be prepared
-The Syreni
We left Avalon immediately, not…[Read more]
ha.rd on
OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO AMAZING ALANA!!!!!!!!!!💖💖💖
So… Maddie is distantly related to Snow White, but she doesn’t know at all! 😀
I’m squealing this is so good! I can’t wait for the next chapter!
YESSSS THIS WAS BRILLIANT!!! I KNEW IT KAYLA’S SO FISHY I KNEW IT SINCE Y’ALL CAUGHT HER
YASSS I’M SO HAPPY TO BE READING STORIES AGAIN I LOVE ITTT
(Am I in it haha)
YES YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY IT MADE ME TO SEE THAT SOMEONE TAGGED ME I MISS READING FICS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ALANA!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAH THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE ITTTTTTTT
BEAUTIFULSTUNNINGAMAZINGBRILLIANT
GOT ME DOWN PERFECTLY AS USUAL
I CAN’T WAIT TO READ MORE ADHGNTJVJ
AMAZINGG I LOVE IT ALLY
THIS IS SO AMAZINGGGGG I LOVE IT!!!!!!
Ahhhh OMG OMG I love it!!! The fairy tale relative talking about them was so interesting and you portrayed me perfectly!! I really can’t wait to see who gets the next challenge!
ALLYYYYYYY OMGGGG
THAT WAS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
I’VE MISSED THIS SO MUCH OML
*continues dying in the background*
dont worry Autumn, you will be back very soon…
OoOoOoOoOoOoOo
Creepyyyyy
(alsoooooo Allyyyyy very dramatic chapter of TOHAS is coming your way shortly!!)
This is amazing! You incorporated all of our fairy-tale relatives perfectly, and I wonder what Kayla mouthed…
ooooh, im excited!!
ALANAAAAA ARE YOU WRITING LE NEXT
HURRYHURRYHURRY
DON’T OVERWORK YOURSELF
BUT HURRY-
WRITE WRITE WRITE
I AMMMMMM IT WILL BE DONE VERY SOON I PROMISE
YAYAYAYAY
🎶Pretending everythings alright
Is detention🎶
AAA I WAS PLAYING THAT YESTERDAY BUT IDK ALL YHE LYRICSSSS
YESSSSSSSSSS HAYCH I THOUGHT I WAS ALONE
YESSSS AAAAAAAA
@Patronus16
Hey Keira! I know its a week since your post about The rainbow Squad, and since I cant comment on it hers my bio!
Name: Alana Triton
Nickname (if so): Ally
Grade (9-12): 10th
Orientation: Pansexual
Gender: Female
Pronouns: she/her
Appearance: Slightly curly red hair in a down just past her shoulders, ringlet bangs, really big yellow…[Read more]
Thank you!!
Hello everyone!! This is the moment you’ve been patiently awaiting. Welcome back to another super dramatic chapter of ✨Syreni✨Better go find your weapons, snacks, tissues, and pillows to take your inexpressible anger out on, because it’s time!
🎬ACTION!🎬
🔱💎🌊💦💧~~Syreni~~💧💦🌊💎🔱
Challenge: PENELOPE
~~~Chapter Twenty~~~
Another girl had turned up…[Read more]
*their knee
sorry penelope!
slo.pe
blo.ody
Oh my gosh this is so addicting!! I can’t wait to find out what happens next!!