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It had been almost a week since “princess” scene in the lunch room, Lee was more popular than ever. Evers were coming up too him and saying, wow, good job or smiling and saying you looked hot even in that dress(usually what evergrils said). Lee had finally set up the date for the three of us. It went…[Read more]
Hmm just noticed your tags change every chapter. You should keep all your tags, y’know? Also, I didn’t ask to be tagged, and I’m sorry about that. I just check in on all of your writing on Lvl 0 once in awhile…
Nice chapter! 🙂 I also recommend that you break your chapter into smaller paragraphs so it can help the reader to read more easily.
Lee tried to talk to me multiple time today but i ignored it. The next day was the same and the next day. Until i finally let him talk to me.
“Alexandra how can i make up too you”?
“I don’t know”.
“Anything you want”
“Fine, i would like two things”.
“One you actually set up a…[Read more]
I felt awful the next day. Did Keenan forget about last night? I kept giving him looks but he didn’t seem worried. Finally in surviving fairy tales with Yuba the old gnome i got the courage to ask him. I walk up to him.
“hey Keenan”, i say.
“Hi Alexandra, and yes i know your…[Read more]
I tried to study extra hard in classes today. I perfected our blind all flaws mask in beautification, did not drop any books in princess etiquette, and in good deeds i gave a illusion of Lilly a makeover(i only got a 4 in that class). I finally had 1 class left. Swordplay(which as now…[Read more]
sorry there was a bunch of errors in this, i was rushing(as usual). Next time there won’t be as many.
NO ONE! 🙁
Forbidden, Chapter 3
The rest of the assembly was a blur. Pollux dismissed everyone to their dorms. I lie in my bed listening to Cassie’s loud snores. I toss and turn. I cant get the fact that a ever and a never threw me their rose. Slowing my thoughts drifted to my mother. Did she face this when she was in school. Soon…[Read more]
Before i get on with the chapter i am introducing some new characters!
Name: Lilly of Maidenville
Appearance: hazelnut colored skin, black shoulder length ringlets, brown eyes,5’1”
Name:Cassie of Putsi
:appearance: a bit plump, shoulder length blonde hair cut in a bob,pale…[Read more]
This is the very first chapter in my book: forrbidden hope you like!
Dissapointment. What my dad thinks of me.”Why am i good?” When i got my flowerground pas my parents begged Dean Sophie to take me into Evil, but Dean Anemone(former Dean since Dovey passed) said “i was meant for good”. My mother started…[Read more]
Nice job! Maybe try and work on your grammar and paragraph breaks, a.k.a. creating a new line anytime there’s dialougue. For example:
“Are you alright”, she says.
“Ya just homesick all ready.”
“It will be ok.” she says,”I am Lilly of maidenville. Who are you?”
“Alexandra of ginnymill”.
“Wait, have I heard about you before?”
“Probably because my…[Read more]
Hey guys, so this is my new main characters bio.Hope you like!
Name: Alexandra Perinia
Family: three brothers, Jax, Noah,Kinli all evil, Amuza(mother good) juilius(father evil)
Hair color: Brown and wavy
height: 5′ 2”
Tell me if you would like more info and i will give some more. thanks…[Read more]
HEY PEEEEPS, since my last story kinda got ended by a case of writers block, so i decided to start over. New people, plots, romances, all that stuff. Feel free to give me some ideas on the story, i am open to all new ideas. If you do not feel comfortable with me maybe using your idea then don’t post.…[Read more]
Hello fellow roleplayers(no i am not posting this on open chat for all those people who want to be rude). I am currently expierIencing some writer block and don’t know when i will be posting again. Ty for reading! 🙂
You can try to get inspiration from reading, listening to music, or go do some exploring in your free time…