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This has chapters : 1,2,3 and 4, enjoy 🙂 and feel free to leave any constructive critisism
Chapter 1 : A Child is Born and A Bound is Torn
After the Last Ever After, Agatha went to live with Tedros in his Camelot ,of course, time to time, she visited Sophie. Sophie was having a very fun time as Dean of evil, she gave evil style and not every fairy tail had a happy ending thanks to Sophie of Woods Beyond, she also got feeling for Hort. After everyone graduated, they went off to find their own fairy tales, and after that, most of them settled down. Hester explored the world, doing things that she never allowed herself to do in the past, and during all of this, she ended up dating Aric, yes Aric, the same one who stabbed his in her stomach and the same one she gave a epic beat down in the Last Ever After. They fell in love and after their travels, they got married, (Sophie had a very fun time decorating the wedding and sewing Hester’s wedding dress).
Hester and Aric loved each other, and three years after marriage, they were blessed to find out that Hester was pregnant. Aric however was scared that he would never be a good father and that he would end up like his mother and his child would end up like him because when he was younger, only one thing mattered and that was killing his mother, which didn’t feel all that good a week after, because he realized that he was now fully alone in the world and then he found Hester and he wasn’t alone anymore. In nine months time, their baby girl was born, she was beautiful in their eyes. She had kinda spiky black hair, one black eyes and one violet eye lastly, she had deadly pale skin. They decided to name her Ally Hester Lesso and she was the top witch in her parents eyes.But always remember, No matter how hard Evil may try, they can never have a happy ending.
Two years after Ally was born, Hester came back home, only to see her beloved husband packing his and their daughter clothing. She was confused.
” Aric, what’s with all of this, are we going on vacation ? ” Hester asked
” Hester, we have to talk. ” Aric sighed sitting down.
” What about ? ” She asked sitting next to him.
” I have decided to go back to the School of Evil to become a Teacher, and I want Ally to come with me, so she will learn the way to be Truly Evil ” He said with a fire in his violet eyes, a type of fire that Hester had only seen once, in the Trial by Tale.
” Aric, she is only a baby, she is not ready for this yet. ” She said, trying to reason.
” You can’t keep my away from my daughter Hester. ” Aric Glared.
” No, I can’t, why don’t you let her stay with me, and you can visit ” Hester reasoned.
” No, it won’t work that way, she has to come with me! ” Aric yelled
Hester’s demon tattoo exploded off her neck and attacked Aric, while he was distracted, Hester ran and grabbed Ally, along with some money and ran away, as she fled from the house, her tattoo went back on her neck and the last thing she heard was her husband yelling ” You can’t run Hester, she has to find her father very soon ! ” Hester ran and ran with her child in her arms, until she made it to the Blue Forest, where she found the biggest tree and made a home out of it, where she raised her child for six years until Hester disappeared and never came back, the young child’s once red heart turned black, Her mother had left her, father abandoned her, she had nobody, all she had was herself, she then made a vow ‘Never trust and never love ‘ .
Chapter 2 : A Unexpected Encounter and The Letter
A young girl, around twelve years of age walked around the forest, she looked deep in thought, her waist length raven hair looked messy and tangled however, one part of it fell over her right eye, ghostly pale skin glowed in the night and a tattoo of two wings, one black and one purple was visible on her neck (remind anyone of somebody) she wore black ripped jeans,knee high black boots with purple laces, a black vest and a purple cloak. Suddenly she stopped and looked at the night sky.
“Curse you moon, why must you look down and mock those that ask for your wisdom.” She said seldomly, sighing, she walked back to her home, a big oak tree . As she walked, she saw a flash of black hair ‘mother?’ she thought as she followed it. The black hair quickened it paste, making the girl run towards it, hope shinning in her black orb.
” Wait! ” She yelled, suddenly, it came to a stop.
She went up to the horse, only to see curly black haired figure on a white horse ‘ this can’t be mother…’ she thought as she was about to turn around, the curly haired figure yelled ” Stop!” it sounded masculine. The girl turned looked to meet glowing blue eyes. It was a boy,with bright blue eyes and sun kissed tan skin, his curly black hair looked like those of Prince’s in Fairy Tales. He was chard in Black boots,Black pants, a black shirt and a blue cloak that brought out his shinning orbs, everything about him looked princely, except the frown on his face. He jumped off his horse and glared at the girl as if she were gum on his shoe.
” Why are you following me witch? ” He asked, pulling out a very shiny dagger.
” Sorry, I though you were someone else, no need to be a **** about it..” She said glaring back with equal amount of hate.
” A what ? ” He asked clearly confused, yet the frown remained on his face.
“A ****, its a piece of **** or for people with your pea-nut sized Brian too-too ” She smirked as she said this and he looked taken back when she said this to him.
“Who do you think your talking to witch ?” He glared , holding his dagger to her neck.
“I am talking to a boy that thinks that he is better than everybody else ” She smirked.
” I don’t have time for the likes of you.” He sighed, getting back on his horse.
” You had time for me Fifteen seconds ago ! ” She yelled as he rod off.
The girl smiled, knowing that she had out smarted him, whoever he was and walked back to her house. As she arrived back home, she saw a letter pecking out of her door, it was white with a black swan on it and in cursive writing it read ‘Ally Hester Baker ‘ The girl looked confused at the letter and picked it up, reading through it, she laughed ” School for Good and Evil, what a joke ! ” She exclaimed as she threw the letter into the fire place and watched it burn.
” Least this joke letter can do is keep me warm.” She muttered, however the swan didn’t burn, in-fact it fell to her feet and watched he, it was creepy. “hmm, oh yell, it can stay there and rot on the floor..” She sighed only to see it transform into a hideous beast with black boney wings, she looked frightened and began to scream as the swan-beast picked he up and flew away, torns sprouted out of its back, and wrapped around her body, keeping her from trying to get out.
” What the- Help!!! Let go of me you stupid animal!! ” She yelled, only to see one of the torns come up to her face and grow a flower, the flower looked very beautiful, but then it exploded, pink dust fell from that and sprinkled over the girl, making her fall into a deep sleep.
Chapter 3 : Welcome and Meeting the Dean
“Did you kill her ? ” A Enraged voice yelled.
“I-I don’t know Mistress, I just brought you here as you said ” A scared voice whimpered.
” -Sigh- The whole idea of the letter and the swan was for the students to have a safe and comfortable trip here ” The Voice paused, the continued again, ” NOT A TRIP THAT LED TO THE POSSIBLE DEATH OF THEM, WHAT WILL I TELL…..you know who..” The voice yelled this time.
” I am sorry Mistress , I shall wait for you in the doom room now….” the voice mumbled defeatedly until it heard a groan , they both looked to see the ******* the floor shaking her head.
” Well, you got lucky this time, change into a more…….appealing form and do the procedure, I shall go deal with the other students, understood ? ” The voice said sternly.
” yes Mistress. ” The voice muttered again.
” Good . ” The now satisfied voice said as it walked away, heels being heard as whoever that was left the room.
Ally groaned as she opened her eyes, looking around to see some sort of……empty store room.
” Hello? ” She yelled, but nobody answered and she couldn’t see anything, sighing defeatedly, she waited.
” Welcome! ” A voice exclaimed, looking up, she saw the door open and a man, he had light brown skin, white stringy hair that feel over his eyes and he wore a welcoming smile on his face.
” Hello…….where am I ? ” She asked, glaring at the man as she stood up.
” Why don’t I bring you to the dean ? ” He asked nervously under her evil glare.
” Yes, take me to your dean, right now or I will take my knife and slice you up, with your family. ” She said very sweetly, it just made her even more frightening to the poor man, after gulping he ushered her to follow him.
” Welcome, to our school, here you will learn all of the basics to being a excellent villain such as History Of Villainy, Surviving Fairy Tales and Henchmen Training. ” He exclaimed welcome-ly.
“Um…sorry if I am being rude but where the fairy dust am I ? ” She pulled out a rusty looking dagger and pointed it at him.
” As I said….. the dean will explain it all ” He said nervosuly, looking at the girl who was coming dangerously close to him with the rusty yet sharp looking dagger.
” You know, I wonder what you would look like with nine fingers..” She mused as she was about to cut off his finger, someone cleared their throat rather loudly, the two turned their attention to the source.
It was a beautiful woman with blonde wavy hair that fell perfectly on her waist, beautiful jade green eyes stood out with the black eye liner that surrounded her eyes, luscious ruby red lips frowned at the child last but not least, her creamy peach skin brought out all of this, she was very beautiful, chard in black high heels, a belly-bearing black leather halter shirt and skin-tight leather pants, this woman just looked to beautiful to be true.
” Now child, is that any way to treat your elders. ” She asked, looking at her confused.
“Umm….no miss, I am sorry..” Ally suddenly found herself cowering in fear at hearing to woman’s voice, smooth and elegant, yes it was but it held some kind of power that could even maleficent cower in fear.
” Don’t apologize, evil never apologizes, oh well, you have plenty potential, follow me child ” She said, turning around, Ally instantly followed, to scared to disobey.
They walked down an eerie hall, the only light was by lamps that were here and there, Ally found herself stumbling a few times yet the woman walked as if she had done this A-million times ‘she probably has..’ Ally thought, to caught up in her own thoughts, she didn’t notice when the woman stopped walked until she walked right into her, falling on her behind. Ally looked up to see the woman looking down on her in disappointment.
” If you weren’t who you were, I would have sent you to the doom room and given you twenty strokes across the back. ” She spat, grabbing Ally by her sleeve, she pulled her up and dropped her on a chair. Ally looked up to see a office, it was black with a portrait of her over the desk, on the desk there were some papers and five photo frames, seeing as the lady was preoccupied by looking at what seemed like clothing, Ally picked up one and looked at it to see the same blonde woman smiling with a lady with black hair , dark eyes, pale skin and a bright smile on her face with her arm around the blonde woman.
‘ This lady can smile ? ‘ Ally thought as she blew a strand of her hair out of her eyes.
” Please stop touching things on my desk young girl, an addition of ten strokes to your list. ” The blonde woman said. Ally did as she said, the woman frowned again.
” OK, I am your Dean, basically I make all of the rules and if you break them, I will break a whip across your pale back young lady, have I made myself clear? ” she asked.
” Yes Madam. ” She said
” Now, what is your name ? ” The dean said as she looked at the girl and sat down at a sewing machine.
” I’m Ally Hester Baker Miss ” The spiky haired girl introduced herself.
“I was expecting you, but i didn’t think you would be like…well…this…no worries, after I finish your uniforms for your first week, and give you one of my home-made face cleansers, girl, those ever boys are going to wish they could get with that. ” The dean said, eyes glittering with a new look of…evil?
” Where am I miss…” Ally asked.
” Oh, yes, how rude of me, welcome to The School For Evil Edification And Propagation of Sin, as you already know dear, I am your dean, Sophie of Woods Beyond. ”
Chapter 4 : Uniform and Dorm mates
After Sophie introduced herself, Ally sat down looking at her while she sewed together the uniform.
‘Sophie of Woods Beyond……where have i heard that before…or have I read it ? “‘ Ally thought as she looked at Sophie.
” OK, I need you to put of this, when you put it down, I will explain some of the rules, and then a wolf will be here to show you your dorm room. ” Sophie said as she gave Ally a outfit. After Ally put it on, Sophie pushed her in front of a body length mirror. Ally looked at herself, she was in Black skinny ripped jeans with chains of the pocket, knee length boots with laces and a black and purple striped vest, there was a pocket on the vest with a white swan on it. Sophie observed her handy work, frowning at the vest.
” Hmm….the shirt looks out of place, but this on over it. ” Sophie said, Ally did as Sophie said, suddenly, Sophie’s finger glowed hot pink and the best turned completely black, the over shirt that Ally had put on, turned dark purple and the white swan appeared on the pocket of it, the long sleeves folded to her elbows and the folded part turned dark purple. then Sophie smiled.
” Perfect, well…not ever boy drool perfect but it is a good start..” Then Sophie’s pointer finger glowed pink again and dark purple finger less gloves appeared on Ally’s two hands, they went up to her elbows. Ally looked stunned, never before in her life had she seen such magic before. The girls spiky hair looked the same, except the dark the feel to her eyes was pushed black and mad into a messy side braid, held together with a red hair tie.
” OK, your uniform for today is finished, the rest of them will be in your dorm room, here is your schedule and your books, the wolf should be waiting outside. ” Sophie stated, pushing Ally out of her office then shutting the door, she didn’t see a wolf, so she looked at her schedule.
Ally Of Bakers Field
Evil: 1st year
Mischief Tower 56
Evil style : Sophie
History of Villainy : Castor
Curses and Death traps : Miss Anadil
Special talents : prof Sheeba Sheeks
Surviving Fairy Tales :Prof Aric Lesso
Forest Group #1
“You are Ally of Bakers Field?” a deep voice asked, Ally looked to see a big brown wolf
” Apparently, are you here to show me to tower…….56? ” She asked.
” Yes, follow me..” He growled as he walked.
‘ Why is everybody here so rude, did someone pull a maleficent on them ? ” Ally thought as she followed the wolf. They went through a series of hall ways until they came to stair case, it said MISCHIEF in bold, they walked along there until they stopped at a door, Ally looked up to see the wolf gone and she was standing in front of room 56 , breathing in, she opened the door.
“What is that ? ” A sleepy voice asked as if it just woke up.
” Well, obviously, IT, is a girl and IT has a name. ” Ally snapped as she walked into the room, it was very big , black with four beds, two on each side, there were doors next to each room, which Ally assumed to be closet’s.
” OK then IT, what be its name, and what are you doing here? ” The voice then got out of it’s bed to reveal a girl , she had light brown skin, blood red eyes and chin length black hair, she was the same height as Ally and had red X’s from her neck down. She also had a scar across her nose. The girl went up to Ally and glared at her.
” IT’s name is Ally, what is your name , *****? ” Ally snarled
” My name is Andy . ” The girl suddenly smiled.
” And I am Tommy! ” A boy screamed, jumping from the ceiling, he had very curly white hair that almost made him look like a girl, dark blue eyes and very pale skin, he had a snake wrapped around his right arm with a mouse in its mouth.
‘At least this place is rodent free….’ Ally thought.
” Can you all just SHUT UP, or I will turn you all into cockroaches and step on you ! ” Another boy yelled, he had the same light brown skin as the girl, but he had chin length red hair and black eyes with black X’s from his neck down, he had a scar as well, it was on his forehead, he glared at everyone in the room.
” Who put a stick in your **** Leo ? ” Andy yelled, glaring back at him.
” Your new little boy friend, Tommy, you may be my sister but I WILL throw you out this window and watch as the Stymphs eat you alive ” Leo yelled glaring daggers at Andy.
” Your just mad that you aren’t one of those talent-less princes in the good school, cry baby. ” She mumbled as she went back to her bed and pulled out a book, Tommy jumped back on the ceiling and Ally went to the empty bed.
” Well, I guess we are all stuck together. ” Ally said smiling.
” Not unless I kill you in your sleep and eat your kidney. ” Leo smiled devilishly
” He doesn’t warm up to new people…” Andy said to Ally.
” I don’t need people, I will be the best Villain ever, all of those Ever’s will cower at the mention of Leo of Ice Land ” Leo said triumphantly.
” I wanna see that . ” Andy mused, as she went back to reading her book ‘ Why Reader’s Normally Fail by Sophie.
” Shouldn’t we go to class or something? ” Ally asked.
” Welcome ceremony is Tomorrow, then after that we have our classes. ” Andy explained, laying down in her bed.
” Oh, well, I guess I’m going to sleep now..” Ally said nervously.
” Sleep with one eye open, he is bitter..” Tommy said softly, hanging from the ceiling as he drifted to sleep, everyone was asleep, so Ally decided to follow.
What do u think of this chapter, boys and girls mixed?!? I wonder why?……. we will find out in the next chapter, thank you for reading 🙂