aloha101grl

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    aloha101grl posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 year, 5 months ago

    Heylo my peeps! I am going to post another #NOOBIE FAN FIC 🙂
    The wonderful peeps who are tagged: @hester112 @betheverafter
    ( Another oc scene, after the trial by tale in the second book, before things go KABLEWY!!)

    “Just have a drink and you’ll feel better,” Anadil consoles, trying to get Hester to lie still.
    “IT BURNS!!!” Hester roars.
    “That’s what you get for helping anyone who likes Sophie.” Dot remarks, turning a discarded towel into a large lettuce leaf.
    “Oh shut up, will you!” Hester snaps. Anadil scenes her wrath and holds her down. Hester glares at Dot. “You’re lucky I can’t move.” Hester growls.
    The bed’s ragged sheets were covered in Hester’s blood. Aric’s knife wound had dragged across her stomach and left her weaker than a baby deer. Her demon was growling at her, feeling the pain of its master. The knife wound would leave a scar, no doubt.
    “What happened after I left?” She softens her tone.
    Anadil runs a cloth soaked in rose water across Hester’s stomach. She winces, but refrains from terrorizing everyone in sight.
    “Lady Lesso broke through the barrier. The trial ended a little while after you left. Yara-or Tristan, I should say, is the only one who died so far.”
    Hester exhaled finally. “I just hope Agatha makes the right choice this time. Or this,” She gestures to her wound,”wouldn’t have been worth it.”
    Even Dot had nothing to say after that.

    Hope you liked it! Just tell me and I’ll tag you the next time I write.

    You like my Shawn Mendes song quote? 1st line

        aloha101grl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        sorry, i had to post it a couple of times. it kept glitching.

        lovergirl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Tag me!

          aloha101grl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          will do

        betheverafter replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Nice!

        hester112 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Amazing!

        aloha101grl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        btw, @hester112 and @betheverafter, I’m still kinda new to this, so do you want me to tag you every time?

          betheverafter replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          @aloha101grl,
          yes please!

        ed2468 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        This is amazing writing

          aloha101grl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          Thank you! Do you want me to tag you next time I write? I’d be happy to if you want…

        ed2468 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Yes thank you that would be wonderful

          hester112 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

          Yes, tag me for the entire book!

        imareaderandproudofit replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Tag me! This sounds like professional writing

        1witch3cats replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        tag meee

        aloha101grl replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        lol, y’all are so nice!

        evisla123 replied 1 year, 5 months ago

        Epic!!! Please tag me!

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