amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Tag list: @goodandevel @thewitchyone
    Chapter 8:
    Kevin and I have the same scared and confused faces, locked in a dark office, wrapped in chains, and no idea whats going on. It stays like that for a few minuets then suddenly the lights flick on and someone in shadow comes toward us. All I can make out is a white mask. We try to fit it all together…[Read more]

        annano-1 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        That’s really good

        thehplayer replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice!!

        goodandevel replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice !

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Tag list: @goodandevel @thewitchyone
    Chapter 7:
    “What do you mean the ring is gone?!” Kevin asked. I whirl around to face him. “I mean its gone. Its dissipated. Its not here.” I snap. He groans. “Well where did it go then?” He mumbled under his breath. “I think Ms.dovey has it.” I say. He turns a ghostly pale. “Are you nuts? We cant just go…[Read more]

        amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Sorry its short. I’m in a rush.
        Does anyone else want to get tagged?

          shadowstorm12 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          meeeeeeee!!!!!

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice!!

        thehplayer replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Oh this is nice!

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Tag list: @thewitchyone @goodandevel
    Chapter 6:
    I’m walking down the east hallway. “I cant believe no teachers know about this yet!” I think. As soon as I get to our usual Wednesday meeting expecting the regular nighttime tackle there is a note saying BALLROOM. I have no idea of what it means but I decide to listen to it. When finally I get there…[Read more]

        goodandevel replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I love that 🙂
        It’s really story or its for your imagination?

        amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I just wright

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Tag list: @thewitchyone @goodandevel
    Chapter 4:
    It’s been a week since my kiss with Kevin and I’m still pink whenever I see him. Right now it’s lunch time. Rachel sits with me under our tree. “I know your hiding something Am.” (She loves to call me Am) “I know your kiss was hard last week but why do you look at your glove whenever you see him?”…[Read more]

        goodandevel replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Wow !!!!
        It’s a great story !!!!
        I so like it !! ❤️
        Very good! 🙂

          amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          Thanks 😀

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Kevin of Evergreen forest:
    Address:34 Evergreen lane
    Family:Dad, older brother
    Pets:Golden retriever named max
    Weapons:Sword collection
    School:School for good and evil, originally went to Coginchaug High school
    E/N:Ever
    What does he look like: Light skin, deep green eyes, dark brown hair
    Personality:This boy likes to get along with pretty much…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice!!

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Tag list: @thewitchyone @goodandevel
    Chapter 5:
    “You want me to do WHAT?!” I yelled. Alright pause for a sec, so by now you know hook was my dad. And that my left hand is really a hook. And that I hate it here at school for good. OK OK that’s all true. But the last part is about to change. Back to Amelie. I look down at my mogrified body. And at…[Read more]

        amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        That took me an hour to wright

        amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        plz comment
        was it good

        thedemigod1112 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice!
        Okay you changed from past present to future present. That means you went from whisper to like whispered. I would work on that!
        And also when a character speaks you do this:
        “You can’t say that!” Someone hissed in the background.
        I whipped my head around. “Shut up!” I said.
        (You should also decide what you feel most comfortable doing, past…[Read more]

        goodandevel replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I really like it!!
        I love your writing! If you will do book tell me… XD
        But I read 4 and 5 but were is part 1,2 and 3 ??

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Welcome @athena10
    Chapter 3:
    From the two previous chapters you may think i`m a sassy teenage girl that grew up on a forbidden mountain range, you also may think from the books that captain hook murdered his whole family. Neither of those are true. You see long ago Hook had a family. I was his favorite daughter. We voyaged with dad and his crew…[Read more]

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 2 years, 5 months ago

    Dear Soman,
    You probably don`t remember me but I`m Amelie from memorial school!
    My question is why out of all animals is the swan your logo?

        Soman Chainani replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Because swans represent duality! and I love your school

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 2
    “This thing is too tight!” I yelled. “No it`s not!” Olivia Snorted back. And I finally broke free from her grip. “what good is a princess who cant even stand a dress!” Lily said “You’ll never get a prince!” “I don`t want a prince.” I shot back. “If you don`t get a prince then you fail.” Olivia mumbled under her breath. “Girls, girls calm…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Cool, though each character gets their own line to speak. You could check and proofread your writing before you post it on here if you’re not in a rush. It’d be good to keep writing like this saved on a google doc or something so you can always check on what you wrote before.

          queenelizabeth replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          your right @evilerruler845

          amelieofmountsnowpaw replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          Thank`s, Ill use that in my next story

        queenelizabeth replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        i like it!

        thehplayer replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I agree with both of you guys but I always save my stories in my notes

    amelieofmountsnowpaw posted an update in the group THE LAST EVER AFTER Talk 2 years, 5 months ago

    The ring will melt into Sophie`s finger and say Tedros is her true love

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Yep

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