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Chapter 1, Away I go on a bony bird!: Melanie was hiding under her bed. She knew that the school master was going to take 2 children that night. She knew because her best friend Tiffany was taken last time. She heard her windowsill rattle. She held her breath, knowing that if she made any sound, she would get taken. And that was when a hand grabbed her and hoisted her onto a bony bird-like creature. “I knew it.I KNEW IT! HEEELP!!” she screamed as the bird flew into the forest. It dropped her into a moat. When she opened her eyes, she saw a plaque on the wall that read “Tiffany Willows:FAILED” “No…” Melanie whispered as tears filled her eyes. Then a voice said “Welcome to the school for evil”