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chapter 2, Roomates: Melanie looked up at a hairy wolf. “gaah!” she screamed and ran into a one eyed cyclops girl. Then the wolves escorted them to their rooms. The wolves threw Melanie into a room. “Thanks for nothing!” she yelled at them. “Never.” said an emo-looking girl. “I’m Hester. This is Anadil.” she said, pointing to an albino girl (Is that even possible?). “And this is Dot.” Hester finished, motioning toward a plump girl. ”Hi, I’m Melanie!” she said Then, some wolves opened the door. “Melanie Anderson. Come with us.” Lady Lesso said to her,”Melanie, tell me you past.” Melanie looked confused but she said, ok. It all happened 16 years ago…