My Ranking Points
Chapter 4, first crush: As the evers walked out to lunch, Melanie saw Johnny. “W-w-why is my heart beating so fast?” Melanie wondered. She tried to get his attention by singing.
“round and round like a horse on a carousel.”
nothing. Melanie took a deep breath and sang the next line.
“Will I catch up to love? I can never tell.”
Johnny looked at her.
“Chasing after you is like a fairytale. But now I feel like I’m stuck riding.”
Then Johnny walked over. “Hi! I’m Johnny. What’s your name?” he asked. “H-h-hi! I’m Melanie!” she said. Then, Johnny’s friends yelled “DUDE! She’s a NEVER!” Johnny’s face looked pale. “Oh! I gotta go!” He said and ran off. Melanie sat under the large oak tree and cried, seeing all her chances of love, lost.