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Chapter 1:The Dream
The one day Rose hated the most was today because it was the Elder’s birthday.She wished it would stop coming because there was so much partying. That year she had enough of the partying so she threw a paint bomb at everyone.
That night her in her dream she heard screaming, saw mothers & fathers running out of houses with children in there arms, houses burning. Her father was trying to fight the villains, while her mother was running with her little brother in her arms while I ran beside her. Then I heard a scream of pain I looked back in time to see my father fall to the ground. My mother handed me my baby brother then told me to run. While I was running my mother tried to fight the villains of but unfortunately she died in the process. I hid my brother & then gave myself to them to save my town. They took me to there hideout & chained me to the ground in a cell to die.
That morning she unlocked her door for the first time in 11 years. She stepped out the door & the villagers tried to attack her. She turned around to run back inside the orphanage but, the village elder stopped her. He asked her if she had thrown the paint bombs. She confessed by saying “I threw it because all the partying was so annoying!” the elder made her clean any mess the paint bomb made.Then gave her a black lab husky named Jasper.
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