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Roxanne of bloodbrook Chapter 6 I Do NOT know him
I sat there in silence. The others just stared at me until Ash started crying. What? But then I realized she was LAUGHING AT ME! Me! Whats so funny I snarled. She turned to me. “You have top ranks you get to lead the coven you set the school for good on fire you kil.led your family with a fire”- When she said that it was like I was hit with a stone but I let her continue. “You have killed Evers and yet- She paused and gave me and evil grin you have a BOYFRIEND. Shut up I yelled as loud as I could. “Just shut up ok! He is not my boyfriend I don’t even know him!” You don’t know him sure Sabine said. I groaned. I’m leaving I growled. I sat up. I let out a low groan and started to breath fast and unsteady. Sabine and Ash’s faces went from their wicked grins to a sympathetic look. Sabine puled my my shirt up enough to see the ga.sh. Her face went pale. She called for Ash. Ash took one look and pulled Sabine outside. I knew something was wrong. Despite the pain I leaned over enough to see the cut. Im done for I know what this looks like. Blood poison.ing. Sabine and Ash finally came back in. I know what blood poisoning is I told them. They looked at me and then said something that surprised me. Ash talked first. “We saw Dean Raven in the hall. We knew she was the one who gave you the punishment but we know she would look bad as a dean if a kid die.d so we told her. She said she would work on a brew. She also said this was one of the worst beating she has ever seen but then she said that you kind of deserved it.” I frowned at the “You deserved it” part but still I am not going to di.e and thats good enough for me.
wwait hold up. No offence but I don’t remember asking to be tagged? Also you need to add puncuation to that
@raynaevil809 Oh! I saw you were reading it and you have given me pointers a few times so I asked you if you wanted to be tagged and you did not respond so I thought incase you did want to be tagged I would add you anyways. If you don’t want to be tagged just say so. I wont take it offensivley.