My Ranking Points
Very short POV to establish things.
Cadence had not been informed that he was being moved into a garden.
His roommate was another boy, slightly older than him but around his height, arranging several delicate flowerpots on the windowsill. The boy jumped and spun as the door opened. His tendrils of frizzy hair reminded Cadence somewhat of a startled jellyfish. Not that he’d seen many startled jellyfish, necessarily, mind you, but in Delirium there was always a—
He was doing it again. He always got nervous around new people.
“OOOooo pretty,” was all he could think to blurt, before ducking out of the room again and foraging around in the corridor.
“Um, hello.” The boy tried for a sheepish smile. “I’m Ida, nice to meet you. What’s your name?”
Cadence heaved his hulking, bloated, misshapen mass of a trolly through the doorway, smashing a lattice of canvases, paints, and instruments onto his bed and sending globs of glitter rumbling over everything within a three meter radius, which, considering the size of the room, was basically everything. “I’m Cadence,” mumbled Cadence, slumping down onto his bed and snatching a splintered heap of paintbrushes. “Nice to meet you too.”
“Um,” said Ida.
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