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@ashleyever2424 @amethyst009 @stargirl13 Chapter 10. Sorry for the cliff-hanger at the end. Actually, I’m not sorry! *Evil cackle*
Leesha walked into the Blue Forest, determined on getting to Lilith and Myrae. She refused to cave in to fear, no matter how much it pushed and pulled at her, trying to warp her mind. She now understood why Castor and…[Read more]
Wait- WHAT!? Can’t wait to see what happens next, @reemkahin!
Ahhhh that ending! The drama in those last few sentences went from 0 to 100 real quick haha
@ashleyever2424 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @amethyst009 Chapter 9 has FINALLY arrived!
As the Trial by Tale grew closer, the nevergirls and the evergirls met more.
They made plan after plan, but their thoughts were fruitless. Of course, Suzanne and Nica were **** at revenge, so the conversations usually went something like this:
“I have a jar of…[Read more]
Great work! I can’t think of any constructive criticism apart from: when using commas in speech, put the comma before the speech mark.
Example from your story: “For the last time”, Nica lashed.
Next time, try: “For the last time,” Nica lashed.
Keep writing! 😉
Nice job! Wish these stories were longer though. I really like reading them! 🙂
Great! The part with the leeches was so funny 🙂 . Anyway, my only criticism is that it could have been longer and at the end they were the last pair and you said it had started. Otherwise awesome though, love the storyline!
@ashleyever2424 Here is your character, Kaitlyne. I am so sad you are leaving, but I hope you have fun! If you want to see my other character of previous people, go to my activity @forevereverneve
Thank you, I love it, although her hair could be in a bun or braid, how did you do this?
Hi @foreverevernever can you do my character name Halle normally wears a sleek black dress and red cloak fairly tanned always has a sword with her and blonde hair with red streaks
She also has short hair and normally wears a black shirt with lace and matching pants
@amethyst009 @leslie191234 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13 Chapter 8
Something had changed. Leesha and her coven saw that Suzanne and Nica were not close to Amy anymore. They looked as though they had had a fight. This pleased the Evil *********.
“Anything that hurts them is my hero”, joked Lilith.
They also saw how Amy was acting more Good than ever…[Read more]
Great! I love your style of writing! Small chapters, but enough happening to keep us going. Keep it up. I can’t wait for the next one!
Well done! I wonder what the plan is? (Meanwhile the computer is sounding like a fan…)
@amethyst009 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @ashleyever2424 and anyone else who is reading, this is my first POV, so please tell me how to improve! Chapter 7, Amy’s POV
I know that what I did was wrong (sort of). I know the rules, Evil attacks, Good defends. I know, I know, I know! But I have a line. And when you cross it there are consequences. This…[Read more]
It feels like I’m reading The School for Good and Evil all over again, just with different characters!
Hey guys. Haven’t written in a while, but I have a really good excuse: School.
So here’s Chapter 6 @leslie191234 @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13
Blinded and mute, this was one of the most terrifying moments Leesha had ever experienced. There was no way to escape, and she couldn’t talk to or see Myrae and Lilith.
Then Leesha felt her…[Read more]
Great! Can’t wait to see(or read about, to be exact) the look on those Everboys’ faces(revenge time!).
The revenge might take a while 🙁 The Trial by Tale is before the Circus, and that’s when the boys propose, so I’ll still have other things to write about before I can get to their plan.
@amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 Chapter 5
“MYRAE!!! WE”VE BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR YOU, WHAT–”
“SSHHHH!” Lilith glared at the librarian for shushing her.
“But seriously Myrae, we woke up and couldn’t find you, and spent half an hour looking all over for you! You better have a good excuse, ’cause God help you if you don’t”, Leesha whisper-…[Read more]
@amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 Chapter 4
The next week, as the Coven of room 54 sat at their table for lunch, Leesha saw something. Just as Nevers made way for Leesha, Myrae and Lilith, Evers were making way for three other girls.
“Oh, lookee here”, said Leesha. “Looks like that’s the Good version of us.” As both covens watched each other from…[Read more]