reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @ashleyever2424 @amethyst009 @stargirl13 Chapter 10. Sorry for the cliff-hanger at the end. Actually, I’m not sorry! *Evil cackle*
    Leesha walked into the Blue Forest, determined on getting to Lilith and Myrae. She refused to cave in to fear, no matter how much it pushed and pulled at her, trying to warp her mind. She now understood why Castor and…[Read more]

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Wait- WHAT!? Can’t wait to see what happens next, @reemkahin!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          TBH, even I don’t know what’s going to happen next!

        isabellucy0531 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Ahhhh that ending! The drama in those last few sentences went from 0 to 100 real quick haha

        oreliaotter replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        I loooooooooove your story. #keepwriting!!!

        peppy replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice! I love it. πŸ™‚

        amethyst009 replied 4 years ago

        Jaw drops open…. OMG. But now what happens to me?! Don’t kill me! LOL πŸ˜€

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @ashleyever2424 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @amethyst009 Chapter 9 has FINALLY arrived!
    As the Trial by Tale grew closer, the nevergirls and the evergirls met more.
    They made plan after plan, but their thoughts were fruitless. Of course, Suzanne and Nica were **** at revenge, so the conversations usually went something like this:
    “I have a jar of…[Read more]

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Constructive criticism, please!

        peppy replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Great work! I can’t think of any constructive criticism apart from: when using commas in speech, put the comma before the speech mark.
        Example from your story: β€œFor the last time”, Nica lashed.
        Next time, try: “For the last time,” Nica lashed.
        ~~~~~~
        Keep writing! πŸ˜‰

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice job! Wish these stories were longer though. I really like reading them! πŸ™‚

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Great! The part with the leeches was so funny πŸ™‚ . Anyway, my only criticism is that it could have been longer and at the end they were the last pair and you said it had started. Otherwise awesome though, love the storyline!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years ago

        !!! Amazing !!! No criticism at all!!! πŸ™‚

    ashleyever2424 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    Hey Evs and Nevs! Chapter 1 is on my activity, so just click @ashleyever2424 and go to activity! Hope you enjoy! Please comment after you read it. And @foreverevernever, thanks for making my character, I just can’t thank you enough. I think this isblike my 3rd time? Who cares, it’s really good.

        foreverevernever replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Thank you!!! This made my day!

        Mountain View

          theheartofgold101 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          That’s radical- Harry, harry potter!

        peppy replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        I read it! It’s great. πŸ˜‰

        iceprinces replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        It was great!!

    foreverevernever posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @ashleyever2424 Here is your character, Kaitlyne. I am so sad you are leaving, but I hope you have fun! If you want to see my other character of previous people, go to my activity @forevereverneve

    Mountain View

        kookiek replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        That is so cool!!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Thank you, I love it, although her hair could be in a bun or braid, how did you do this?

          norajunebirdie replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          How do you make these pictures?!!!!!!!

          clareofendlesswoods replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          You can easily make this through DollDivine.

        blackcat13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Whoa so cool!

          norajunebirdie replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          Can you make me a character? Her name is Trixie. She has long brown hair down. Black clothes. All Black. Eyes narrow. Eyebrows looking mean. smiling lips.

        hannah2505 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Hi @foreverevernever can you do my character name Halle normally wears a sleek black dress and red cloak fairly tanned always has a sword with her and blonde hair with red streaks

          hannah2505 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          She also has short hair and normally wears a black shirt with lace and matching pants

          hannah2505 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          And Is a never

    miko posted an update 4 years, 1 month ago
    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @amethyst009 @leslie191234 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13 Chapter 8
    Something had changed. Leesha and her coven saw that Suzanne and Nica were not close to Amy anymore. They looked as though they had had a fight. This pleased the Evil *********.
    “Anything that hurts them is my hero”, joked Lilith.
    They also saw how Amy was acting more Good than ever…[Read more]

        theheartofgold101 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        nice

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Can’t wait for more!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice, can’t wait for the next one!

        gracefulmagic replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Great! I love your style of writing! Small chapters, but enough happening to keep us going. Keep it up. I can’t wait for the next one!

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Well done! I wonder what the plan is? (Meanwhile the computer is sounding like a fan…)

        leslie191234 replied 4 years ago

        AMZING!!!! ^_^

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @amethyst009 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @ashleyever2424 and anyone else who is reading, this is my first POV, so please tell me how to improve! Chapter 7, Amy’s POV
    I know that what I did was wrong (sort of). I know the rules, Evil attacks, Good defends. I know, I know, I know! But I have a line. And when you cross it there are consequences. This…[Read more]

        pander27 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        It feels like I’m reading The School for Good and Evil all over again, just with different characters!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          Is that good or bad?

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice, I thought it was good.

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Good job @reemkahin!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years ago

        That’s super great, keep it up πŸ˜‰

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    Hey guys. Haven’t written in a while, but I have a really good excuse: School.
    So here’s Chapter 6 @leslie191234 @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13
    Blinded and mute, this was one of the most terrifying moments Leesha had ever experienced. There was no way to escape, and she couldn’t talk to or see Myrae and Lilith.
    Then Leesha felt her…[Read more]

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice! πŸ™‚ Mwahaha revenge time!

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Great! Can’t wait to see(or read about, to be exact) the look on those Everboys’ faces(revenge time!).

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        The revenge might take a while πŸ™ The Trial by Tale is before the Circus, and that’s when the boys propose, so I’ll still have other things to write about before I can get to their plan.

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Great!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years ago

        Fantastic job I loved it!!! πŸ™‚

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 Chapter 5
    “MYRAE!!! WE”VE BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR YOU, WHAT–”
    “SSHHHH!” Lilith glared at the librarian for shushing her.
    “But seriously Myrae, we woke up and couldn’t find you, and spent half an hour looking all over for you! You better have a good excuse, ’cause God help you if you don’t”, Leesha whisper-…[Read more]

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        I’m just drinking up all the words you write!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          Haha. Thanks πŸ˜€

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nicely done! πŸ™‚

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Can’t wait for Chapter Six!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        I thought it was AWESOME! Keep it going!

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 Chapter 4
    The next week, as the Coven of room 54 sat at their table for lunch, Leesha saw something. Just as Nevers made way for Leesha, Myrae and Lilith, Evers were making way for three other girls.
    “Oh, lookee here”, said Leesha. “Looks like that’s the Good version of us.” As both covens watched each other from…[Read more]

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Cool! Wonder what ext chapter will be?

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        So amazing!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        You. Are. Talented.

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 1 month ago

          Thanks *blushing*

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