authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Elements by @authorkay (Kay)
    Chapter Four: Late

    POV: Katniss
    The meeting with my Aunt Sophie was short-lived. We introduced ourselves to each other, made the most awkward small talk ever heard of, and she left, saying, “I’ll see you at the Welcoming!” as she walked down the hall back to Evil. I now stood in my Welcoming outfit that Godmother…[Read more]

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        hi! If you’re looking for constructive criticism, the only comment I can give you right now is the use of paragraphs.
        You should really consider dividing your monster-sized paragraphs into smaller-sized ones for convenience and easier reading, especially since the topics of your story vary – for example, Katniss’s meeting with Aunt Sophie does…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Love it! Great Job!

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Does anybody know how to post videos?

        torian replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Yeah you go copy the link and then you paste the link

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Elements by @authorkay (Kay)
    Chapter Three: Unwanted Roses

    POV: Katniss
    I turned to the… Frosted castle doors? Standing in the doorway was an elderly woman, with silvery hair in a beehive, and kind brown eyes. She was wearing a high-necked chartreuse dress, dotted with green beetle wings. “Grandmother!” Will said, his blonde hair whipping back…[Read more]

        authorkay replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I apologize for the messed up chapter title, it was supposed to be ‘My ****** Aunt’.

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        COOL! LOVE IT!

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Elements by @authorkay (Kay)
    Chapter Two: A Family Friend

    POV: Katniss
    He pulled me through the damp dark cave. I didn’t fight his strong grip. There was a chance that I still had family! But why were we going underground. Then I saw it. It was some sort of oval mirror hanging on the moist stone wall. It had a gold rim, and a lion crest on the…[Read more]

        torian replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I loved it. You could have a future in writing

          authorkay replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Thanks! That means a lot to me, considering how much I love writing! :3

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I agree with @torian I love this. great job. please read my chapters and bio. @fsa161

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Hi guys, I just posted a bio yesterday since I’m new, so here is the first chapter of my fairy tale, and I would love to hear what you have to say! So here is; Elements by @authorkay (Kay)

    POV: Katniss
    I jumped out the broken window and ran. Hearing the crash from the breaking glass, Nurse Mary had already rung up the police. I stayed in the…[Read more]

        authorkay replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Please leave a comment, I really love writing, and want your feedback!

          torian replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Great Chapter go to @torian to see or borrow my bios. And you can read my story MIXED

          booky3096 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          This is soooo good! Write more write more I really love it!!!

        authorkay replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Thanks!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Awesome, love it!

        maleficent101 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        it’s great 😉

        agatha31 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        cool! 🙂

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Bio One:
    Name: Katniss
    Age: 16
    School: Good
    Parents: Unknown (she’s an orphan, as far as she knows)
    Personality: smart and feisty, but kindhearted
    Nervous Habit: twirling her hair
    Pass-Time: origami, with a small peice of paper she keeps in her pocket
    Weakness: she doesn’t know if she can ever let her guard down to be able to fully trust…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Nice, I love it!

        maleficent101 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        you read the Hunger Games don’t you?

        willowofravenswood replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        really cool 🙂

        agatha31 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Nice!!!

    authorkay posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Hey guys, I’m new, I hope my RP is good, and that you enjoy it! –@authorkay