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Danny would not stop stealing glares at us. I hated comparing Danny to the villain in a story, but it seemed as if he was jealous.
Which was totally insane and crazy. Right?
Wrong. I felt bad whenever I uttered a word to Westina, like I was stealing Danny’s chances at something.
Eventually, on the trip to…[Read more]
I’ve gotten to the point where I just want Westina to be happy. It’s so cool because Westina is perfectly good, but is convinced she’s evil, Danny really does seem like a villain and is convinced he’s good, Cassian is good to the max, and Angelica just wants Danny to love her.
But now I have a decision to make:
Cassian? Danny? Angelica, even?…[Read more]
I saw Danny and Angelica kiss. It almost seemed as if it was in a matter-of-fact way. The important part is they had chemistry. If I were to be casting a show, they would be the starring couple.
I turned to Westina, about to continue my story, but her cheeks looked wet.
“W-Westina?” I scooted closer.
I love the different points of view. I also love that you said that 2 different people from 2 different worlds can be friends.
This is fantastic! I love how Cassian is just such a believable character, and how he’s the polar opposite of Danny (honest, compassionate, genuinely a caring person who doesn’t seem spiteful). I’m loving the contrasts between all the characters, and I’m excited to see Westina becoming more herself around Cassius as well.
I hope I covered everything on this!
I decided to use the story Rapunzel and not the Disney movie.
Name: Cassian Stein
Parents: Rapunzel and the Prince
Appearance: Cassian has olive skin. His hazel eyes are marred by faint white scars surrounding them, but they’re easily hidden by makeup. His golden brown hair flops…[Read more]
I always listen to show tunes from Anastasia when I write; don’t blame me if this is a sad chapter!
AN: I’m moving the tense of Westina’s chapters to the present, just to make it a little easier on me. I also want to focus on the plot more than my tenses.
It has been a week since I last talked to Danny.
I don’t…[Read more]
Ooh boy… *evil laughter* This is going to be fun. Danny’s going to get a taste of his own medicine, it appears. Kudos to Westina for not pineing over him and blaming herself—awesome cliche-breaking skills! Do you want me to wait until after you’ve written Cassius’ bio before I start on the next chapter?
I only just came up with Cassian- you can start the chapter if you’d like- I’ll probably write up the bio after I’m done with my homework.
Something in my stomach had been reassured Danny would come and comfort me. My stomach was wrong.
My eyes had dried. Nothing else would come out.
I scoffed. More like nothing else would come in. No matter how hard someone knocked, my wicked side closed the door.
Suppose it’s just in my bones. Should I get a bone mar…[Read more]
My eyes opened to darkness. I heard rustling and mumbling next to my bed. An apple tried to go down my throat.
He was here.
Slowly but surely, I lifted from the mattress. It was as painstakingly scary as trying to hide from a munchkin.
They had ears more sensitive than my current feelings.
God, why did I let this…[Read more]
“Oh! Sorry-” My polite demeanor waned when I realized who I was speaking to. Danny.
I brushed past him, huffing-
“Westina- let me explain-,” Danny put a hand on my shoulder, “it was in the heat of the moment! She was practically about to trap me.”
“I don’t need to hear your excuses. I’m not making the same…[Read more]
Y’ALL READY FOR WESTINA?
OkAY! LET’S DO THIS!!!
I’m going to be rewriting the bathroom scene. Some descriptions, feelings, etc, may be different, but I’ll try to keep it consistent.
@bostonhorsez2 , this onE’s for old times.
I stumbled into the garishly pink bathroom, ***** from anger.
How dare they…[Read more]
I’m so happy I decided to check this website randomly! Also I’m dead speechless right now; so fantastic! Oddly enough, I’ve been revising Danny and all my other old characters for like the past two weeks (there’s a lot of them). Craziest timing ever! 🙂
I had an idea: this October, we could rewrite one of our previous chapters (this is just an excuse for me to write about Westina again- Nono I’m joking). If you want to join, comment!
Eyy sure!! I’m actually in the process of rewriting an old RP anways
By the way, I haven’t seen you in a while! Weren’t you part of the Zodiac group?
I was actually part of the Zodiac in the beginning, but found I couldn’t pull my weight with all the great writers in the group.
Hannah, don’t tell anyone I told u this, but I miss Westina hehe
There was a girl. Running.
Running from what, you may ask?
We’ll get to that later.
Her face was red from exhaustion, throat dry from inhaling the flames.
The flames that burned her ancestral home.
The very same home she flourished in, had her first kiss in,
Where was she to run?
In one hand was a fistful of tears, the…[Read more]
i love this!!
Tag me! i wanna read every post!
but what is the name of this?
I haven’t decided yet.. I usually type up the first chapter to see if I like it, then I figure out the title and the bio of the main character.