hi! i’m new to the group!
hi… sorry i havent been on… been in other groups, im planning on writing my 2nd chapter today or tomorow.
12:00 that’s what eden’s clock read. she couldn’t sleep one bit. ” it’ s already midnight, why am i awake? if I didn’t want this, i would be shivering like it was below forty degrees in mom and dad’s room.” she stared up at the glow in the dark stars and on her ceiling. they were so peaceful, just like eden. well, the NAME eden. BOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!!…[Read more]
Nice job. Don’t forget to capitalize people’s names and the beginning of a sentence, and try not to do run-on sentences. Good job though!
Chapter 1: Midnight
Eden was ready. Tonight was the night. The night the Schoolmaster came. Eternal Springs pretty was a quiet place for Eden. She loved her family, friends, and everything about Eternal Springs. Ever since Eden was little, ever since she heard the tale of the Schoolmaster. The tale she retold to her best friends, Quinn and Marqin.…[Read more]
hi you people
Try not to post one-liners. Stories get pushed down, and we can’t see their posts. If you want to post a one-liner, can you post a story and comment? Thanks.
hi, i haven’t really came up with a plot, but i have my characters!
name: eden age: 12 Inside characteristics: loving, has 2 best friends: quinn and mark, she’s very adventurous and she is also funny, loves animals and especially cares about many people and her family.
outside characteristics: brown,blond hair, dark brown eyes, ruby lips and…[Read more]
Try to do it as a character bio. Here is an outline you could use.
You can check out my bio @thedeviloffire too.
No, this is OK, @thedeviloffire, it is a bio. You could add a teensy bit more detail, but, other than that, you’re good to go.
If you need some pointers as to how it works here (you can ignore the bit out bios, you already that)…
Hi and welcome to Level 0.
Here are a few basic rules and facts about how we RP here.
There are three other RP…[Read more]