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🙂 if u read it the wrong way it will just be confusing so start at, I’m gonna tell u what my trip was like to the school for evil, and if you like my story comment!
Please don’t do one liners because it pushes story’s down and people will be
1) Less likely to not read your story
2) Will be confused by it
3) Won’t find your story
4) Stop reading your story because of how confusing and mixed up it is
5) Will end up reporting you or will kick you out
I don’t mean this in a mean way but it’s very rude and…[Read more]
Wow and then my school started the end.
I was amazed that it knew my name. So I asked how did he know. “All the staff must know every child’s name and your name is Azara of the woods beyond.
Hi! Uhm I’m reading into your story, and please
combine all of it into one post.
“Why did you give these to me?” I said to the creature. “There your classes and your room number and if your so dumb you don’t know what the books are for you shouldn’t be here Azara.”
A strange creature jabbed me with his finger and gave me a books and some papers. The paper on the top had meany classes, the paper after said a room number, and all the books seemed to match with a class on the first paper.
I looked at the inside of the castle. The letters N-E-V-E-R carved on the walls with pictures of villeins and villainous kids on the wall. I was astonished to find my picture on the wall.
I realized that the dark one seemed to look a little bigger then the other one. I was being flown closer to it by the minute. Before I could think about why I was being taken there the bird dropped me. This is when I yelled my head off. I hit the slimy water with a ****. Nearly drowning I struggled to swim on the top of the water to breathe.…[Read more]
I would usually yelled but my shirt was chocking me up. In the corner of my eye I saw a big bird nest with an giant egg in it . Suddenly the shadow threw me into it the same nest so hard that I cracked the egg. Or did I?It was really hatching a **** bone bird. I tried to get way but it took me up into the air like I was not even there. I thought…[Read more]
I was lying in my bed thinking about how kids disappeared on this night. It was strange to be excited but I was. I saw a shadow in the hallway it was probably my mom checking on me again. Suddenly I felt a hand on my shirt . I whizzed around to try to see who it was, only to get yanked off my feet and out of my house.
OK, so I see that this is like part 1 of the first chapter? Maybe you could post the entire chapter in one post, and say which chapter it is and what the title of your story is? I’m probably getting really annoying at this point, but I’m just trying to help.
I’m gonna tell u what my trip was like to the school for evil.
OK, that’s great, but could you maybe not post one-liners? It pushes everyone else’s amazing stories down to the bottom of the page, and under the eternally slow ‘Load More’ button. I can see that you posted something right before this, so maybe next time you forget a line or two you can comment it on the original post?