azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    ๐Ÿ™‚ if u read it the wrong way it will just be confusing so start at, I’m gonna tell u what my trip was like to the school for evil, and if you like my story comment!

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        STOP!!!!!!!! IT REALLY ISN’T FUNNY!!!!!

        yams replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Please don’t do one liners because it pushes story’s down and people will be
        1) Less likely to not read your story
        2) Will be confused by it
        3) Won’t find your story
        4) Stop reading your story because of how confusing and mixed up it is
        And
        5) Will end up reporting you or will kick you out
        I don’t mean this in a mean way but it’s very rude and…[Read more]

          yams replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          HEY WAIT DO YOU WATCH THE OLD TEEN TITANS SHOW?!!!!!!

          azarathecoolhouse replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          Ok can’t you just leave me alone I didn’t know.

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    Wow and then my school started the end.

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        please stop, you’re pushing everyone’s story down

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Please stop posting one-liners. Try to post all of your writing in one post.

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I was amazed that it knew my name. So I asked how did he know. “All the staff must know every child’s name and your name is Azara of the woods beyond.

        soulreaper replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Hi! Uhm I’m reading into your story, and please
        please
        PLEASE
        combine all of it into one post.
        -Uncle Kas

        blankie137 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Please make longer and more convenient stories…

        azarathecoolhouse replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        I made one big post

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Please try to make your chapters longer and even combine all of your writing together to make it easier to read, and so it won’t push people’s stories down. Thanks.

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    “Why did you give these to me?” I said to the creature. “There your classes and your room number and if your so dumb you don’t know what the books are for you shouldn’t be here Azara.”

        kenziecrystai replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Seriously, PLEASE PUT THIS IN ALL ONE POST!!!

          oreliaotter replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          *nods in agreement with @kenziecrystai*

          azarathecoolhouse replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          Lol I’m sorry

          azarathecoolhouse replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          I did do one though

          dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          Good job. Just put them together.

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    A strange creature jabbed me with his finger and gave me a books and some papers. The paper on the top had meany classes, the paper after said a room number, and all the books seemed to match with a class on the first paper.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Ok, nice. Just perhaps try to add all these little parts of your story together to make a longer chapter. ๐Ÿ™‚

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I looked at the inside of the castle. The letters N-E-V-E-R carved on the walls with pictures of villeins and villainous kids on the wall. I was astonished to find my picture on the wall.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Great job, just try to make your chapters longer.

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I realized that the dark one seemed to look a little bigger then the other one. I was being flown closer to it by the minute. Before I could think about why I was being taken there the bird dropped me. This is when I yelled my head off. I hit the slimy water with a ****. Nearly drowning I struggled to swim on the top of the water to breathe.…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Great job! Again, you might want to make this longer. ๐Ÿ™‚

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I would usually yelled but my shirt was chocking me up. In the corner of my eye I saw a big bird nest with an giant egg in it . Suddenly the shadow threw me into it the same nest so hard that I cracked the egg. Or did I?It was really hatching a **** bone bird. I tried to get way but it took me up into the air like I was not even there. I thought…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Cool. Maybe try to add this to your other chapter to make it longer. ๐Ÿ™‚

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I was lying in my bed thinking about how kids disappeared on this night. It was strange to be excited but I was. I saw a shadow in the hallway it was probably my mom checking on me again. Suddenly I felt a hand on my shirt . I whizzed around to try to see who it was, only to get yanked off my feet and out of my house.

        kenziecrystai replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        OK, so I see that this is like part 1 of the first chapter? Maybe you could post the entire chapter in one post, and say which chapter it is and what the title of your story is? I’m probably getting really annoying at this point, but I’m just trying to help.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Great! Perahps you might want to try to make it longer, and label the chapter. ๐Ÿ™‚

    azarathecoolhouse posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 6 months ago

    I’m gonna tell u what my trip was like to the school for evil.

        kenziecrystai replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        OK, that’s great, but could you maybe not post one-liners? It pushes everyone else’s amazing stories down to the bottom of the page, and under the eternally slow ‘Load More’ button. I can see that you posted something right before this, so maybe next time you forget a line or two you can comment it on the original post?

        dot111 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Cool. Please try not to post one-liners here. Thanks a bunch. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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