polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 77: Panting
    Nolan’s POV
    The exploding bomb of a door crashed against the wall as Nina burst in the room.
    “Let…me…talk…to…Paige…neccessary…” She panted as though she had just ran a marathon.
    PAIGE!!!! ” I bellowed like a whale. Paige slid down the banister of the stairs.
    “Nina! What do you want?” She snarled. I didn’t b…[Read more]

        polabear11 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        And yes, I’m alive after a chapter-free month!

          salty12 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

          Tag ME

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Great chapter! I can tell you put lots of thought into this! It’s much MUCH better than your old things (no offense) I just want to say two things.
        A) Propaganda is like when the government is lying to you, saying something is good when it is not. Like Uncle Sam, or Rosy the Riveter. For example, during World War I German citizens thought they…[Read more]

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Things are Developing, otaku. And I don’t know who Bella is.

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Now that I think about it that way, @elysianne is right. Think of it as Rosie the Riveter (that woman with the WE CAN DO IT) or Uncle Sam. Like Manipulation. Ignore what I said about the propaganda.

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Nevertheless, great chapter!
        Bella is basically someone that has like…no flaws whatsoever. Well, she has two. Being clumsy, and lacking common sense.
        I have an idea that could be good for you to make Paige less of a Mary Sue.
        Make her emotionally unstable. Triggered by something to do with traumatic experiences, too much stress, or something…[Read more]

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          But I love all the characters close to Paige! Thanks for the idea though, I really appreciate this. Can I use the example?

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Well, if you want to! An welcome back! I’ve missed you!

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Thank you!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Awesome chapter!!!!! Finally… you really haven’t post for a while

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Welcome back!!
        I loved the chapter and hope you post more 🙂 😉 .
        Keep up the great work!

          kiko55 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Welcome back!!!!
          Nice chapter; Glad your back! 😉

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Welcome back! Also, I agree with @otaku88

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 4 months ago
        ploypiti replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        “Flying squirrels are the bane of my life”
        Welcome back! I really miss you 🙂 Perfect chapter like ALWAYS! Have you checked out the new assignment? by the way, there’s a lot update in SGE fansite, too 🙂 And about flying squirrels…5?

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Flying squirrels are the bane of my life. Welcome back! This chapter was good. Also, on the squirrel I’d say…5 or 6. (no offense)

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Flying squirrels are the bane of my life.

        Welcome back!!! Love the chapter! About the flying squirrels, I rate it up to 6.
        Also, I know you probably have a lot of notifications, but I’ve waiting to tell you this. I tagged you in a few chapters and in Chapter 97, you’ll really like it. (Hint: Nolan and Paige and in the chapter. You might see…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Flying squirrels are the bane of my life.
        YOU’RE BACK!!!!! Absolutely amazing job! I know your mentions must be really clogged up, but if you mind checking out the first chapter of my new story, that would be great. Anyway great to have you back!

          kiko55 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          I rate it a 7

        reaperbethehero replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        “FLYING SQUIRLS ARE THE BANE OF MY LIFE” great chapter!!!! I would rate it a 7. Tag me plz!

        kittyraven replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        FLYING SQUIRRELS ARE THE BANE OF MY LIFE! Really, really good chapter! I rate your beautiful squirrel an 8 out of 10 😀

        dot111 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Flying squirrels are the bane of my life.
        Good to have you back!
        Cool chapter, and I think your flying squirrel thing is maybe a six, no offence. 🙂

        amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        “Flying Squirrel’s are the bane of my life!!!!!” Awesome chapter!!!! Have you seen the updates versions of Travers and Cassius I posted??? If not go to @amigoodorevil and find it!!!!

        luna101 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Flying squirrels are the bane of my life.
        Welcome back! And awesome chapter, as usual! And I rate your flying squirrel thing 7 out of 10.

          kiko55 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          @AVAOFMAIDENVALE, we are saying it so shes knows we read all of her chapter. 😉

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        FLYING SQUIRRELS ARE THE BANE OF MY LIFE.
        Welcome Back!! I’ve missed you. Great chapter, btw. I’d rate your squirrel as 6. Btw @polabear11, a new chapter of Clause 17 is up. If you have a character you’d like to see used, I’m sure I can slip them in. Don’t worry, though, Lilly will be in 2nd Generation story!

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Hey people, sorry I didn’t post a chapter last night, I was at another RP site. Just wanted to let you know I will tonight. One more thing, I submitted a new drawing to the reader gallery! It is about chapter 42, I think, or 43. Thanks and sorry for posting a 1-liner!
    Tag List:
    @fsa161
    @evilerruler845
    @otaku88
    @fairytalegirl123
    @kiko55[Read more]

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        OK – will it be for the Group RP?

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          No she means for her story

        amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        That’s okay, what was the RP Website (I might want to check it out)

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Hogwarts Extreme @amigoodorevil.

          amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          YAY

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I don’t see it on the reader’s gallery…is it just me, or is it not there yet?

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Not there yet, I did it last night.

        ploypiti replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Thats okay 😀 I have an account at hogwarts extreme too.

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 75: A Friend Who Understands
    Brooke’s POV
    It wasn’t Cassie. I did it. I knew if I threatened her that chicken wouldn’t give me away and I could fake being innocent. I staged the whole thing. I’m destined for greatness. I’m not going to lie low and be a stupid Sidekick. If I can’t be a hero, I’ll be a villain. It’s your choice. I summoned…[Read more]

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Written army. Great job!

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        ‘Written Army’ Neat Chapter

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Written army
        Cool Chapter!

        amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Written Army, I can’t WAIT to see more of these, I see you are using Cassius more, since they are twins, can’t both of them be mentioned more???

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          You’ll see my plans. He will be mentioned, just you wait 😛

          amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Awesome, I love the suspense you create for me about Travers

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Written Army’

        Nice chapter! 🙂

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Cool chapter!!

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Nice Chapter!!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Loved the chapter!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing!

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Cool chapter!!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing!!!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Love it!

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Um…..I’m confused. It’s good writing, but I did not understand any of it.

        What the heck happened?

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        and everything was back to normal for now
        Just like the last chapter, it was really confusing… Plus, I don’t know if it’s just me, but the way that most of them speak sounds really unnatural…I don’t know if I’m just being persnickety, but it’s seriously really stiff and unnatural. Like the way Jayden introduced himself seemed…idk, like too…[Read more]

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Good job!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Awesome!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          ‘And everything was back to normal…for now’

          Nice! 🙂

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing chapter! I love it!

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        love it!!! 😉

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Awesome job!

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Cool, except it is really really confusing. Like I’m totally confused, no clue what is happening whatsoever. Maybe try to explain things and make them clearer?

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing job!!

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        ‘Mix-up’

        Whoa, this is amazing! And that was a BIG twist, I love it. 🙂

        (I posted a chapter. Nolan is on the chapter)

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Mix-up
        Amazing chapter!!

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        ‘Mix up’
        I love your chapter!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Mix-up
        One word- Spectacular

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        mix up
        good!

        polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Of course @elysianne!

        amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Mix-Up ooh sooo confusing and awesome (Confusing in a good way)

    polabear11 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago
        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Jaydon is still there, but his shell is gone.
        Cool chapter! I noticed you’re posting a bit earlier. Is there a specific reason why? Also, I say Jayden got amnessia. Or he turned all disfigured. I don’t really know, to be honest.

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          You’re kind of right. I’m posting twice today so you will see. I posted earlier because I have no school tomorrow and have free time because I get no homework over the weekend.

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Yeah I have winter break too, but I have to go to school tomorrow.

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Jayden is still there, but his shell is gone
        Nice!!!

        amigoodorevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Jayden is still there, but his shell is gone

        WOW Awesome Chapter, AND CASSIUS HAS A GIRLFRIEND, TRAVERS IS GOING TO KILL HIM (Not Literally)

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Jayden is still there, but his shell has gone.
        Cool chapter!!

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