blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 6 months ago

    I’m just going to mention a few people who I think would be interested in my third chapter…….
    @nadea @princessmckenna19
    Here is my third chapter

    I felt like I was finally free, even as the black sludge held me in place, making me inhale some of the sticky goo, even as the crogs bit into my flesh. My lungs felt as though they were going t…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        “…Eyes still staring at me, imprinted on my eyelids.”
        Oh. Ma. Gosh. I just thought of what that would be like, if it was real, and I decided it would be beyond creepy. But, anyway, good chapter, and good detail!!

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Thx so much, and ya, I do the detail so that it is relatable, like how creepy it would be to have dozens of eyes looking at you and u can see them as u sleep

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Awesome! Very detailed!

        ladylesso2 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Amazing descriptions! Please list my name in next chapter so I can find it!

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 6 months ago

    I’m just going to mention a few people who I think would be interested in my third chapter……
    @hesterhandbook12345 @yaha12 @evilerruler845 @justinnian
    Here is my third chapter

    I felt like I was finally free, even as the black sludge held me in place, making me inhale some of the sticky goo, even as the crogs bit into my…[Read more]

        blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry, I forgot to tag someone
        @kiwishells

        hesterhandbook12345 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        you are such a good writer, I love how you put in just the right amount of detail and you do it in a way that is so nicely written to like: ‘imprinted in my eyelids’ or ‘a new spice would under your tongue’ it just seems so….relatable. I can’t wait to read the rest I am so excited for the next chapter. Also it is just a bit short, and I know not…[Read more]

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Thank you so much, I’m glad to know that you enjoy my chapters, and I’m glad to know that u think I’m a good writer……..I definitely will try to add a bit more in my other chapters, I just don’t have enough time to write out long chapters, ummmmmm, chapter 4 is a bit longer but I will try to make chapter 5 and up longer………Plus I had to…[Read more]

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          The funny part is that each chapter I post, I always get so tensed and nervous that ppl aren’t going 2 like it as much as the others, so I always review it for about 10 minutes be4 I post it. So feedback like this rlly makes me smile bc I know that I have done good

        hesterhandbook12345 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        🙂

        xxxxsophiaxxxx replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        wow your a great writer! Love the detail! Keep up the great work! Pls tag me for your next chapter!

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 6 months ago

    Hey, I just want to start off by mentioning all of u who supported me on my first chapter and gave me constructive feedback, bc I want to give u guys the best reading I can give u……@hesterhandbook12345 @justinnian @evilerruler845 and @yaha12 I hope u guys enjoy chapter 2…….
    Character Name: Alyssa
    Gender: Female
    Lineage: Daughter of John and Rit…[Read more]

        kiwishells replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Tag me!

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Hey, I have just posted my third chapter, and I thought that you would be interested in it

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 6 months ago

    Before I get started, I just want to acknowledge everybody who has read my 1st chapter
    @nadea
    It is only one person, so if u would liked to be mentioned before another chapter, pls read and comment

    Character Name: Alyssa
    Gender: Female
    Lineage: Daughter of John and Rita (poor nobody’s that lived in the slums)
    Appearance: Long, night-dark purple h…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Great job!!

          princessmckenna19 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Tag meeeeeee! Please!

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Hey, I just posted my third chapter, so I though you guys would be interested

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Amazing!!

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 6 months ago

    Hey, I hope you all like my first chapter…….
    Character Name: Alyssa
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Long, night dark purple hair, set jaw, gray eyes, diamond-shaped face, and is a bit overweight
    Preferred Weapon: Bow and Arrow

    When you’re a reader who looks like a freak, and acts like one too, you find that you have to move from foster home to foste…[Read more]

        nadea replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        OOh! Next chapter Puh-LEASE!!!! (And tag me when you post it, merci!!)

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Hey, I have posted the second chapter now

          nadea replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          *looks back at my comment and notices how sassy it was*
          Anyway, I saw the second as well!! I like this story, and where it is going!!

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 6 months ago

    Hey, I hope you all like my first chapter…….
    Character Name: Alyssa
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Long, night dark purple hair, set jaw, gray eyes, diamond-shaped face, and is a bit overweight
    Preferred Weapon: Bow and Arrow

    When you’re a reader who looks like a freak, and acts like one too, you find that you have to move from foster home to…[Read more]

        hesterhandbook12345 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        yeah totally! 🙂

          justinnian replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          I agree

        yaha12 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Cool tag me!!!

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Cool, ok I have posted my second chapter now so………I hope u enjoy
          And I added more detail to the bio, thx for the feedback @evilerruler845

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Hey, I just posted my third chapter, and I thought that you guys would be interested in it

    blobfishdance posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 2 years, 6 months ago

    Hey, in the games and extras there is a ‘scavenger hunt’ for puzzle pieces. I just want to know where in the website you have to go (just guidelines) bc I swear I have searched everywhere and have not been able to find more than 5.

        emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        I am only missing pieces 7, 8, 9, and 10. I got all the rest.

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          I have searched for hours and I am only missing piece 12 now

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Where did u find piece 12 tho?????

          catsforlife replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Where is piece 12??? @emma16

        emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Where did you find the others.

          emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          ?

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          I found them by going to the school 4 good and evil icon at the top of the page, going to press and education and scrolling down, I went to the series section and found a few by scrolling down and entering into books 1 all the way to the handbook, I think I found one at the bottom of q and a, I found one near soman’s pic, I think I went to the…[Read more]

        catsforlife replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Found piece 2. Where is piece 6?

          blobfishdance replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Sry, don’t remember, altho it very well could be in one of the places I just posted

        emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        I am now only missing 7 and 12. Try pressing the education thing and press thing in the right corner of the screen.