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Mermaid RP: First Comment Chain
So, the story is starting when everyone receives their message from the queen enlisting them for help.
@teamjoanne (Grace / Smoothie)
@eloiseruizpalma (Eloise/ Elle)
Finally the next day, I sat in my room throwing a ball against the ceiling for too long. Eventually, the ball bounces off the wall awkwardly and hits my face, just as a messenger walks in.
“Your Highness. The Queen would like me to deliver this message to you.” He nods, ignoring my awkwardness. He pops his communicator open to rev…[Read more]
As usual, I slept in late. Although, I awoke earlier than usual, due to the incessant speech from the queen, which happened to grace my ears.
“Dear citizen of Neritria; you have been called upon by me because of the recent attacks on the palace. Please come to the throne room of Goldenpearl castle at high noon.” The royal told me, as…[Read more]
I sat, flipping through an old book, half reading, half stalling. I had stolen a letter from the queen to some random mermaid that said this: Dear citizen of Neritria; you have been called upon by me because of the recent attacks on the palace. Please come to the throne room of Goldenpearl castle at high noon.
Great, they were onto…[Read more]
The attacks had been going quite well. Lairenna was a good partner. I had found a letter though, reading this: Dear citizen of Neritria; you have been called upon by me because of the recent attacks on the palace. Please come to the throne room of Goldenpearl castle at high noon.
I would make sure to be there. And to learn more information.
Mother, the Queen, had called me to her quarters.
“Pearl, I’m sure you’ve heard of the recent attacks.” She began wearily.
“Yes.” I admitted, taking a seat.
“At high noon, come to the throne room. Everything will be explained in due course.” She continued.
Vanessa smiled. “Yes, Mother.”
Her mother kissed her on the cheek, before i…[Read more]
That morning I noticed a letter by my door. “Dear citizen of Neritria; you have been called upon by me because of the recent attacks on the palace. Please come to the throne room of Goldenpearl castle at high noon,” it read. I sighed and rolled my eyes. This was probably bait for the attackers. But the royal family can’t defend thems…[Read more]
When Larina woke up, she found herself outside the palace walls, one a seaweed stretcher. Why? Where had this mysterious voice gone – and why most of all, were the guards still carrying her through the gates as if they’d forgotten all about the previous morning? “Why am I here?” she asked, moving to a sitting position. “Queen’…[Read more]
Ruby (Narrator’s POV)
She grew tired on spying on the people walking by, so hid her self behind the bins hoping not to be noticed by her distinguishable tail. Unfortunately, the post man spotted her and began hobbling over. He held an impressed grin on his face and nodded at the silver envelope stamped close with the royal crest.
“I seem to have a…[Read more]
Abigail snatched the letter from the post man when it arrived. She looked at who it was from. It was from the queen! Why would the queen be sending her a letter? “Thank you.” Abigail said quickly shuting the door in the mailmans face. The letter said “dear citizen of neritria; you have been called opon by me becuse of the resen…[Read more]
My mother, punctual as always, was not in the throne room yet. I sat down in my mildly uncomfortable throne, gazing at the too-pristine ceiling above me.
“We’re not going, but Yenni is. I texted her on my shellphone to blend in.” (I’m cringing so hard at ‘shellphone’)
I was swimming closer to Neritia than normal, watching a postman deliver a letter to a mermaid near the outskirts of the kingdom. I held myself against a wall of stones until the post man swam away towards the city, quickly followed by the mermaid. When they were out of sight, I darted towards the mermaid’s house and found the letter…[Read more]
“Hey, Ness.” I sigh, turning to face my sister. “Did Mom y’all to you about this?” I ask, gesturing to the throne room.
“Yeah.” I say, then sigh. “Aren’t there other palaces for them to attack?” I half-joke.
I make it to the Palace and find a window into the throne room. I peek over the edge to see two mers already in there. I smile as I continue to watch them
(I mean, how do you blend in as Lairenna if you are that pale, with that white of hair, and white eyes lol)
My eyes widened when I saw a Siren enter the throne room. I narrowed my eyes at her. She clearly had stolen it. I grinned. Apparently my day was about to get a lot more entertaining.
(Yenni. I know she isn’t a full Siren, but Alice can sense the Siren blood in her. She can’t sense mermaid blood since she’s half mermaid, but she can sense the blood of other creatures)
I felt someone looking at him and glanced over to the front of the room to see one of the princes looking at me. I met his eyes and smirked at him from the window.
My smirk grows and I wiggle my finger sat him, laughing internally
I whistle a Siren song and put a finger to my lips and smile
‘Any news?’ I text Yenni, debating dying my hair to come help her if need be.
Abigail arrived at the palace. She walcked into the grand hall. She had no idea ware to go so she just wandered the halls until she saw the throne room.
I turned my head towards the throne room doors as another mermaid came in. I turned back to the Siren and grinned.
I watched to where the prince was looking and saw the mermaid that had just come in. I hadn’t seen her before, but of course, I hadn’t seen most mers in the kingdom. I tilted my head as my grinned deepened. Yes. This would be a very amusing night indeed
I see a weird mermaid staring at people, and being, well – rather odd. I raise my eyebrows just a little.
I’m watching the mermaid, who’s tail marks I recognize. I quickly scan the room. There are a lot of sirens here.
I enter the room. I’m disguised, as the court insisted, because everyone thinks there’s going to be a siren attack.
I’m glad my tail marks are disguised, so no one will know I’m a siren. There are a few others around, however. I send a message to Laierenna. ‘Lots of sirens, and lots of snooping merpeople.’
As she entered the throne room, Larina felt a sudden sense of distorted calm. People were gathered round, waiting, for orders. As to what orders, she did not know.
The royal trumpeters start playing, and I roll my eyes. Nobody in the court can resist a dramatic entry.
“Hard not to.” I mutter back. “Probably a siren.” I add.
“Probably.” I chuckle darkly as the trumpets sound throughout the room. Followed by my mother, of course.
“Good day, my dear subjects, and dearest children.” She greets us with an almost perfect smile.
“Why are we here?” I call jeeringly.
I sneak through the palace gates and join the rest of the group stood in the throne room. I stand next to a stranger and hope for the best. I’m not great with orders and to be asked one from the queen? That was always going to be out of the picture. Except it isn’t. I’m present in the throne room with a large gathering in the palace of…[Read more]
The girl who called from the crowd must be sheltered to not know what’s going on. The smile on the queen’s face falters.
I glare at the girl. Why is she here? Who exactly was invited?
(Blondie, can you make the announcement? Because you’re the owner of the chain and I have no clue what the queen is gonna say 😆 )
I sit quietly, my twins in the other room. I had gotten bored of reading, writing, watching sv(shellivision *cringe*) and doodling.
I rolled my eyes, but the queen started speaking.
“As you all know, there have recently been attacks and – very untrue – rumors spread around our kingdom. Of course, my royal guards can only do so much. They don’t know…the streets like you young folk do. And so, I have enlisted you all, a group of bright young mermaids and mermen,…[Read more]
My mouth would’ve dropped open if I hadn’t been lectured on mermaid etiquette for years. Instead, my eyes widened.
Seriously? Mother must have no clue about the youth here. Why would anyone want to help stop the attackers? Half the people here were probably them in disguise.
This all is just wrong. Nobody even likes the royalty right now, and all the spies now have information. Valuable information. So I have to do something before the queen reveals anything else. Without anyone seeing me, I slide my finger over my bracelet, and shadows spill from it. The lamps (do we have them?) instantly go out, and the…[Read more]
I swim toward the stage where Kiernan, Vanessa, and my mother are. As the lights go back on, I realize someone’s missing. Where’s Kiernan?
“Isla!” I yell, once I know I’m out of earshot from the rest of the palace. Where is she?
I hear someone call my name and look for a place to hide. Finding nowhere that isn’t made out of transparent sea glass, I open the front doors and swim out.
I wanted to help – not only cause of my father, but I felt the royalty needed help. I did too really. “Of course I’ll help,” I called to the Queen before swimming over to a group of merpeople deep in conversation. I needed to know who this mysterious voice was! Should I ask? But they might think I’m dangerous! Somehow I felt ther…[Read more]
I watched the chaos ensue and couldn’t help myself. I lost all control. I burst into laughter. Load, echoing laughter. I didn’t bother to hide under the window edge anymore. I just laughed my head off.
“Get over here soon Yenni, you have to give us details.” I say through the shellphone,having called her seconds ago. (the cringe…..)
“Isla? I know you’re out here somewhere.” I call, sense finally taking me back.
MERMAID RP MEMBERS
(not posting in the open chat because we already have a ton of members)
Please finish your chapters! We will start RPing in one week, aka August 31. Thanks y’all!
@teamjoanne (Grace / Smoothie)
@eloiseruizpalma (Eloise/ E…[Read more]
Hillo Grace! What song should we do for the karaoke ahhhhhh
Hi! I don’t know, which artists do you like? I like stuff like P!ATD, Marina and the Diamonds, Halsey, Lana Del Rey, Billie Eilish and Little Mix 🙂
I like Billie and some P!ATD songs as well, I also like Macklemore, Taylor Swift, and Lizzo
So what songs are you thinking of? I’m just wondering if your suggestions are similar to mine, then maybe we could base it off that? Idk
Same Love, Glorious, Like a Girl, Call I What You Want, COPYCAT
The only one out of those I’ve heard is COPYCAT lol
I just thought of Oh No! by Marina, but I think we’d struggle to think of a theme with that one.
are there any really well known songs you like? eg. Don’t Stop Beliving, Livin On A Prayer, etc.
No, I think don’t stop believing is fine 🙂
I have to go to sleep now… Could we maybe DM on Discord tomorrow, if that’s alright with you?
Hey y’all, I was just checking some docs and it appears the Ms. Smartypants doc was also vandalized via deletion. Jess, i don’t know if this was your intention or not, but it’s worrying. Sorry if you didn’t want to be tagged, just tagging…[Read more]
This is probably the same person. Except they realised that they were risking too much by writing messages. Or they think they have won.
Seriously? OMG this is unacceptable and needs to be STOPPED! Guys, we need to figure this out. It has to be someone who knew about Ms. Smartypants coming back. AKA someone who was online yesterday when I gave the doc link.
Argh, I have absolutely no idea who it could be. So, I’m going to bed now (10 pm in London) but I’ll be on for a bit in the morning.
GUYS GUYS GUYS! SO 1 MONTH 4 WEEKS AGO SHE POSTED SAYING SHE REACHED 1000 POINTS, AND NOW SHE’S AT 1025, SO SHE CAME BACK ON! CHECK HER ACTIVITY, THE SECOND POST SAYS SHE REACHED 1000! THIS DOESN’T MAKE SENSE!
Hi Grace! So, y’know the thing that Jess said she would do in her speech about the question thingy? Well, here it is!
My question for you iiiiiis: would you rather win $10,000/£10,000 or let your best friend win $100,000/£100,000?
Then please ask me a question! Could be dean related or personal, whatever. Then please tag someone els…[Read more]
As much as it would be nice to win £10,000, I think I would mostly spend it on things that I wouldn’t actually use. So… I think I’d let my friend win the money, because she’s more sensible than me.
Would you rather never speak again or have to sing every word you want to say?
I SAW FAR FROM HOME
IT WAS AMAZING AAAAHHHH I HATE MYSTERIO I SHIP M JAND PETER EEEEEEE
THEN END CREDITS SCENE SHOOK ME THOUGH
I WANT TO RIP OUT MYSTERIOS TEETH ONE BY ONE THEN CHOKE HIM WITH ITTTTTTTT
tagging to see activity
I’m voting for myself ’cause why not
That’s what I am
Fragile, smooth, sharp
One blow for my friends
Whom I love so much
But are so hurt inside
One blow for them
I thought they were kind
Well, they deceived me
One blow for the earth
People just won’t be kind
One blow for my haven
Crumbling before my eyes
Making me feel hopeless
When they’re all done…[Read more]
Turn to storms
But I keep it locked away
Where no one can find it
I cry myself to sleep
My pillow swimming in tears
And wake up the next morning
They don’t know the real me
The struggles behind the face I put on
To hide myself
The broken part of me
Not the person I thought I was
Sometimes the waves
Will come over your head.
You’ll feel you’re drowning,
While the others look on.
But I’m drowning too….
Been drowning for years,
Bathing in a bath
Overflowing with my tears.
Falling into the abyss of beyond,
Seconds into minutes into hours.
Not everyone can fly….
You wish you’d land,
Finding some peace
Instead of this…[Read more]
Thank you, Fudge. For being here. You’re such a strong person, and I’m thankful for that. I feel like my world has been turned upside down in the past few months, and people like you have really helped me keep going. Thank you, so much.
Of course. There is something about… Just falling, and then having someone to catch you before you hit the bottom. I didn’t have that. I’m trying to make sure that many people do.
Hi. So, this is about the love advice thing you said you were doing. So, i had a crush on this guy, for over three years. Last year, he started dating this girl, and they’re still going strong and had their first kiss yesterday. I don’t like him anymore, i think. I just don’t know how to get over him. Ideas?
This is a tough one. In the short term, it’s going to take some time to get over him, but be patient. In the long term, you’ll probably have more crushes and go on dates. In the end, he’s just one crush. You’re too good for him. Plus, if they’ve been together A YEAR and they had their first kiss yesterday, what does that tell you about their rel…[Read more]