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Chapter 12: Home
I opened my eyes and frowned as the world continued to spin. My body felt like it had just been on one of the Wood’s most daring rollercoasters – and it didn’t like it one bit. My limbs were numb. My tongue was searing in pain (ad I bitten it?) an…[Read more]
*the italics/bold were messed up because I reposted this with the other posts stuff so it didnt go through twice* Anyway, have a GREAT day!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
Your writing is excellent! I love how you portrayed Evelyn!
Love the chapter! this chapter had quite a dreamy aura to it–or maybe it was because i just woke up from a nap–either ways, it was amazing!
Does anyone know what chapter Fingerglows were unlocked in book 1 of the series??? (I’ve been searching in my copy of the book for AGES)!!!!:)
And what’s your fingerglow color?
Chapter 18 The Roach and The Fox page 266 and I would love my finger glow to be a yellow or pink colour
hm…………… nothing much, very close to finishing a HoO book, House of Hades, but that’s all!:)
Welcome to my Q & A!
So I’m going to share facts about me, and also an extract from my first ever fanfic chapter I’ve ever written on the SGE site! A.K.A the cringiest thing you can ever read 😉
THE 8 FACTS:
~ A Crystal of Time is my favourite book in TCY and AWWP is my favourite from TSY. My favourite book from the whole series changes a lot, but…[Read more]
Also, I AM SO MUCH LIKE YOU!!!! I am shy too and socially awkward and I agree with most of the things you said and I like knowing you better just TLEA is my favorite book and I don’t like sports
Glad I got to know you since like I said before, I am very creepy And I like your writing style from a while ago as much as I like it now!
Oh my god you’re writing was great back then and is awesome right now too!! AND OML I LOVE MLB— LITERALLY STAN CHAT NOIR
Wow, it’s so amazing to see how much you’ve grown!! yesss tundras are really coolll
rip teddy 🙁
:)Yeah, I was surprised when I compared my writing to my old pieces, since I generally never read back
wait did Teddy die??? I wonder what happened to him, or if Beatrix killed him in the School for Girls hunting lessons-
i need to make a fanfic about him when he finds a new owner slkdjf
The Dragon Prince and PJO are awesome! And I love how your writing has grown!
Is MLB Major League Baseball?
:)And I’m just about to finish House of Hades in Heroes of Olympus!
Nope, Miraculous Lady Bug the kids show XD
The House of Hades is one of my favourites in HoO!
Ohhh, my bad XD.
I love tundras too, they just have this beautiful, icy yet mesmerizing vibe!!! And your old writing is still amazing as your writing today!
I’m not an MLB fan (DON’T KILL ME) but my brothers always put that longer song on and make smoochy noises at me XD, so I’ve pretty much gotten used to seeing that link
*steals bunny back with a fingerglow spell, then builds him an enclosure the size of a castle, with grassy fields to play in and the sun shining down on him, and mountain of nutritious food…*
now we can all look after the cute little bunny
i just like stirring up this drama, i thought you’d be happy to hear another war is coming that can help keep the site alive!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE MLB!!!!! Who do you ship? Mine’s adrienette hahahha it’s interesting to see how much your writing has improved in such a short time <333333
Yeah same hahaha although I feel like Lukanette is kinda forced bc Marinette think Adrien doesn’t like her so she searches for moral support
Oh yes it is so much better then Adrigami but it wouldn’t be healthy I think the best ship is ladynoir bc even though they would be putting each other at risk, they are most honest with their superhero selves so it would be the most healthy I think but that’s just my opinion
Chapter 11: A HUNDRED BUTTERFLIES
“Butterfly girl, it isn’t safe,” Rafal said as he saw the brave gleam to my eyes. “I’ll get August back to his tower safe and sound. Okay?”
I remained silent.
“Evelyn, do you trust me?”
I turned to look at the School Master, li…[Read more]
Oooh Evelyn is skydiving!! INCRAZING (Incredible+amazing) CHAPTER!
Chapter Ten: When I Kill You
I didn’t fit it as well as I had thought I would.
Maybe it’s because of my weaselly appearance, lack of the core Prince skills (whatever they were, I had daydreamed through most of my classes), and confusion. And my awkwardness – but…[Read more]
That was amazing!! Also yes please do the Q&A thingy that sounds fun!
cough sorry for responding so late i had pe
bUT THIS WAS A BRILLIANT CHAPTER DSLKFJ
Panacea is so cool, and the story line is just EEEEEEEE
I would love a Q & A!!
*hands you a crown that says ‘F is for First!’ emblazoned in hot pink on it.
Thank you both!!! lol I saw this comment way later so it’s cool
Seems like I’m doing a Q & A!:)
This was incredible! I love how you spelled fairy! And yes, the Q&A thing sounds great!
Thank you so much everyone!!!!!!!!!! Have an awesome day / night!
So good! and I think that you should DEFINITELY do the q & A thing because I think that helps people understand you more and makes them more connected to you and the story.
thanks!!!!! Yeah, I think I’ll aim to post the q & a on Friday afternoon or something along those lines!
YAY!!!! I love knowing things about other people!
I know I’m very creepy
CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES: Chapter Nine
I hate it when people leave me hanging.
As Rafal’s eerie words floated around the Circus, so delicate and soft that the forceful hands of gossip couldn’t dare to exploit, I scowled. Suspense was unbearable.
The School Master’s cold gaze found its way to me. I shrun…[Read more]
LADY OF THE LAKE GANG RISE
bruh rafal with the 😉
I love this so much though! Can’t wait to read the next chapter :DD
I knew this since I read the story but I agree with @/shadowshinobi that it is the Lady of the Lake 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES: Chapter Eight
An Evergirl coughed for attention. I immediately halted my search for the crystal butterfly – it’s golden light still penetrated through the darkness stronger than others – and scowled.
The roar of the crowds still echoed through the Circus, Evers (and the odd Nev…[Read more]
YES YES YES I LOVED IT
I CANNOT GET ENOUGH YOU’RE WRITING’S TOO GOOD T-T
CRYSTAL BUTTERFLIES – Chapter Seven
I’d never thought that much about my past.
There were many reasons for that. Most I didn’t even allow myself to acknowledge, let alone reminisce. Everything about my previous life was just too… special..? I couldn’t ponder it without being overly emotional…[Read more]
THIS IS SO GREAT AAH
also, “Dead chicken?!?!” that sent me
AND HOW IS THIS GONNA GO SLKDFJK I NEED MORE PLS
Your writing is spectacular! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Tysm everyone!!!!!!! yeah, the dead chicken part was based on real life events. i randomly said ‘dead chicken’ whilst thinking about farm animals and everyone looked at me weird… XD
Hahahha XD that’s something I would say Hahahah I have a funny story about a farm. We went to a farm in prep with my whole grade and we were milking cows. One of my classmates stepped behind the cow and it started weeing on him 😂😂 we all started laughing hysterically 😂😂😂
The dead chicken was very funny and I hope that you use August for the next few chapters because I really prefer him to Evelyn and it didn’t notif me when you posted this and I am very mad about that 🙁
This chapter was really spectacular! Great writing!
Also, you asked for constructive criticism, so I’m just going to say that you should have written ‘where time ceases to exist’, instead of ‘seizes’
Am I the only person who thinks Chaddick’s death was the saddest in the whole series???
I honestly don’t care how hollow his character was, I jut have bucket fulls of sympathy for him. I also felt horrible reading that chapter (in a good way) that my 9-year-old-ish brain couldnt handle. It’s the scene that has stuck with me the most in this…[Read more]
I definitely sobbed, for me though it ties with Yara fndkjsndfksjnfd
i understand that! i just personally related to yara a lot (i hc her as trans and i myself am nonbinary/trans) so her death felt like a hammer to me fjknsfkjsndfk
Wolves watched my every move as I climbed up the jagged steps to the School for Evil.
Even surrounded by beasts and peers my own age, I had never felt more alone. The other Nevers ignore me, racing past in excitement. The wolves sneered at me, their blood-splattered teeth not…[Read more]
This chapter was amazing!
Good luck in in-person school! I’m sure that it’ll be fine!
Lovely chapter! And I hope think you’ll do great at in-person school tomorrow!
I’ve been doing it all year and I’m only like half d.ead lol
Oh my god I loved this chapter 😂😂 I wish you luck!! Stay safe dear!!!
This was a really good chapter, I’ve got in-person school tomorrow for the first time in a while and I’m not looking forward to it either lol
sldkfj I love how you write your characters, they’re all so amazinggg
and eee the dress!! Everything is placed so meticulously and this is just amazing!!
:DD gl in school!
(it’s midnight and i should be sleeping bc of school tomorrow [actually today] but i drank a cup of tea and now sleep?? that’s nonexistent)
sdflkj that kid sounds so annoying
welp..oofers…hopefully you won’t have another horrible day of school that will replace this one for the title of “worst day of school of the year?” idk lol
lol, sleep!!! 8am ish now for you I think, I’m too late XD
And school (I got home literally a minute ago) was different, for many reasons I won’t say……………
yeah, and my friends from in-class were nice. 1 annoying classmate LITERALLY CHEWED GUM, HIS FACE MASK OFF IN CLASS, BLEW A BUBBLE, THEN PULLED HIS FACE MASK BACK UP WHEN THE TEACHER WALKE…[Read more]