bree132 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    Hey guys! This is chapter one of my story! Hope ya’ll enjoy it and in the comment below just let me know if you want to be tagged! Have a great day Evers and Nevers, Young and Old.

    Chapter 1

    The truth

    @agathatheprincess12
    @lilystarling
    @bookwormizzy
    @dellavacker
    @blazers

    “I beat you again,” I smirked at dad.

    My dad laugh…[Read more]

        blazers replied 7 months ago

        this is so good I like how you used this chapter more to describe this caracter (family,friends,backstory) if I was not already tagged I would ask to be tagged.

        tiniart replied 7 months ago

        I think you shouldn’t make her a Mary Sue it would ruin the story which is so good by the way.

        anniej replied 7 months ago

        This is awesome!!

        evernever24 replied 7 months ago

        taggles!

        raynaevil809 replied 7 months ago

        If shes the daughter of Aggie and Teddy why is she so Evil?

    lifeasabookworm posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    This is the second part of the first chapter that I accidently chopped off. It’s just describing the dorm room and stuff so not anything HUGE ( It’s the end of Chapter One tho):

    Continued…

    And, each different section had multiple distinguishing features, almost as if the owners had spewed out one part of their personality to define the…[Read more]

        bree132 replied 7 months ago

        That is really good!👍🏻👍🏻

        lilystarling replied 7 months ago

        Please Tag me!! @lifeasabookworm

        If you want to read my story/ stories please check my activity. I’m writing two simultaneously.

          lifeasabookworm replied 7 months ago

          Ok Ill tag you to my next chapter! And, OF COURSE I will check out your stories…I love to get inspired by other budding writers

        lifeasabookworm replied 7 months ago

        Just an update, I’ll be doing Chapter two with another characters P.O.V. Check out my activity to see where I wrote bios for my characters. Whose P.O.V would you like to see next???

          sandol replied 7 months ago

          I love it!!! Also, I noticed that you use these ‘marks’ when you’re writing a character’s thoughts, but you can also use italics with HTML. Like this

        sallysallysally replied 7 months ago

        Wow, that was great! I loved how you described the different areas of the rooms, and you used, like, the perfect amount of ellipses! Great job!

          lifeasabookworm replied 7 months ago

          Thank You @sandol. I will try and figure out the italics thing soon and thank you @sallysallysally I’m working with elipses

        gwen-elodie replied 7 months ago

        Okay, my constructive criticism for this chapter is a lot like the one I had for the last chapter but I’d like to add that before you publish your work, you should run it through Grammarly.

          lifeasabookworm replied 7 months ago

          Heheh. Probably. I’m just so worked up at the moment, with all the isolation and COVID-19 stuff…You’d think I have time to go through my work and check for grammer and punctuation.

        anniej replied 7 months ago

        This is so good!

          lifeasabookworm replied 7 months ago

          Thank you!

    bree132 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    Hey guys. I have been under a lot of stress lately so I changed my mind! I am not going to be doing the ROYAL ROT anymore and I am going to be doing my story. I have 3 main characters, me, @bookwormizzy, @agathatheprincess12. I hope that is okay with ya’ll two. I needed one more person and I was wondering if @lilystarling would let me use her c…[Read more]

        blazers replied 7 months ago

        Of course you have a brain. Don’t worry I understand your stress about Covid-19 it’s the only thing they talk about in the news even on CNN (wich is a politic channel) if you need help with your stress please let me know @bree132 my account is @blazers so remember you need help with your stress please let me know. You can also tag me if you want.

          bree132 replied 7 months ago

          Thank you!

        lilystarling replied 7 months ago

        You can use Jade, @bree132

        agathatheprincess12 replied 7 months ago

        that’s fine with me @BREE123

          agathatheprincess12 replied 7 months ago

          *bree132

        anniej replied 7 months ago

        I’m sure your RP will be amazing! I would love to be tagged.

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 7 months ago
        hesterisqueen replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        This is good, despite me not understanding it lol

        sapphy replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        ah yes, the old not-understanding-at-all problem. FD?

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        Nice!!

        geek replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        Hey, I’m really sorry but can you untag me? I was off the site for a while and don’t really know what’s happening.

          shadesofevil replied 1 year, 7 months ago

          AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

          sapphy replied 1 year, 7 months ago

          okay

        sophiestyle919 replied 1 year, 7 months ago

        thats alot

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 9 months ago

    The Elemental Rebellion II

    Prologue

    Once, just after the gods gave the humans powers, before Evelyn, and King Edgar, and Phoebe Matthews, before Anya and Theo, the gods were worried.
    They had given the humans powers because they wanted to resolve the war. But letting the humans keep the magic was another matter.
    They were scared that the humans…
    [Read more]

        aliceofhearts replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Awesome!

          shadesofevil replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          COOL!!!!!!!!

        anadil777 replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        How did you do italics

        princessrachael replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Tag me. I love it

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Ooh.. the suspense, i love it!!

        sapphy replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Thank you everyone!

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 9 months ago
        tigerlilygirl replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Kay that freaked me out for a second but i’m all good now, can’t wait to read it!!!

          shadesofevil replied 1 year, 9 months ago

          ok

        sapphy replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Thanks!

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        Okay, sure!

        rebellion replied 1 year, 9 months ago

        My god I was about to say “What?” when I realized there was more.
        @sapphy, good for you on that.

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    The Elemental Rebellion II: The Faerie Revolution

    Chapter 5

    Fleur’s POV

    I hated unpredictbility.
    It can be small things, like Lyn coming through the wrong door.
    “Petal, get yourself over here,” Joe hissed, when I was tapping at the door.
    “No, Joe, it’s this door,” I hissed at him.
    The door next to him flew open. “Stop arguing and get in,” Lyn…
    [Read more]

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Wow. Just AMAZING. I LOVE IT!!!
        Can u plz give me a few writing tips?

        sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Later maybe. But my main one is just write when you feel like it! If you force it out, it’ll come out wrong, so if you can’t think of what to say, then maybe do something else for a while

          annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Oooh thx!!

        tigerlilygirl replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Tag me please!!! How do you write so many stories at the same time… and keep up with all of it… and make it all SO GOOD?!

          annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Yep so agree

        sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Awww, thank you! It’s kinda hard keeping up with them all, but it’s really fun. And when I have writer’s block on one, I can just do a different one!

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 10 months ago

    The Elemental Rebellion II: The Faerie Revolution

    Chapter 4

    Fleur’s POV

    Unpredictable.
    Adjective.
    Definition: not able to be predicted; changeable.
    Synonyms: unforeseeable, undivinable, incalculable, uncertain, unsure, doubtful, dubious, in the balance, up in the air, random, arbitrary.
    Examples: me. My friend Lilet. Our… acquaintance,…[Read more]

        matildaofmaidenville replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Wow its so good I love

        sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Thx it was going to be longer but then I decided no

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 11 months ago

    The Elemental Rebellion II: The Faerie Revolution

    Chapter 3

    Cerene’s POV

    I had loved Jasper for as long as I could remember.
    Of course, he didn’t love me. Nothing would ever be that simple.
    I was born on his first birthday, a little baby wrapped in a ***** cloth, in my mother’s arms. He was the first person I saw when I opened my eyes. My…[Read more]

        matildaofmaidenville replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Soooooo good, can add me to your (extensive) list of tags 😀? Thanks… I can’t wait for the next chapter its so good

          dritten25 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          That’s a great chapter l love it so much! Can’t wait for the next chapter l love it! Please add me on that tag list! Also l love your username @sapphy .

        sapphy replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Thanks you, both of you! Of course I’ll add you!

        hannahthenaturequeen replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        amazing!!

        sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        thx!

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Wow! That’s great! Cerene seems like a pretty cool character… You are SO good at writing stories…🙂

          sapphy replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Thanks!

    sapphy posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 year, 11 months ago

    The Elemental Rebellion II: The Faerie Revolution

    Chapter 2

    Ava’s POV

    I really, really hated this house.
    It was my home for the first fifteen years of my life, and until a few years ago I loved it. But then I met Hayden.
    Ordinarily, I would hate people like Hayden – cocky, annoying and far too handsome for his own good. But he was the first…[Read more]

        cuteypie1mint replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Ooh! I really like it. I haven’t been reading so far, but Ava seems nice. How far into the series are you? Let me know if you need any extra characters x

          sapphy replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          I’m quite far in, the first was about thirty chapters. But I’ll provide a basic summary.
          Evelyn was a princess with no powers in a world where everyone had elemental powers (earth air water or fire). Anya was a servant and member of the rebel group trying to overthrow the monarchies of the Water, Air, Fire and Earth monarchies. They kissed and…[Read more]

        jellybean886 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Wow! This is great!

          jellybean886 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

          Probably Ava.

        amberofthewoodsbeyond replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        YES YES YES. I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!! 💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜🥳🥳🥳

        annabgoodorevil replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Wow! That’s really good! I think I like Ava…

        jellybean11 replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Yes, LOVE IT 😍

        sapphy replied 1 year, 11 months ago

        Yeah, I like Ava too. And thank you!!!!

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