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TWO CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY 😳
Lol, I’m on a role with chapters.
Chapter 44 “Run”
Bruklyn sat at a table, a rope sat across her stomach, holding her in place. Someone circled the table, fixing little details.
“You may now sit!!” The person squealed behind Bruklyn.
Three people sat down at the table. Bruklyn glaring at each over them. The woman to left of her was bald, and she wore a white dress with a white brimmed sun hat with a green bow, she was extremely pail and skinny, she was singing a far to familiar song.
She turned her head so she faced forward, the boy in front of her had brown hair that’s was stuck up all over the place, he had two black eyes, and blood splatters all over his face and clothes. His hands where placed on the table, his knuckles where bruised and full of blood.
Then, turned her head to the right. The man next to her was around the same age as the woman, he looked extremely fancy, everything was very usual except for the large **** across his neck which was poring blood onto his white undershirt.
Bruklyn gasped “Whats wrong with you people? Can’t you see that man is going to die?”
“Sweetie, eat your food,” The woman said turning her head towards Bruklyn. The woman’s check bones could be seen poking out of her ghostly flesh.
“Listen to you mother,” the man pounded on the table.
“Dad don’t be so harsh, I bet she doesn’t remember us. You know after that accident”
“What? Accident? I’m fine”
“She doesn’t even remember her name.”
“My name?” Bruklyn twisted her body.
“Hear comes the airplane!” The woman sighed, moving a fork up and down towards Bruklyn’s face. She turned her head away from the fork.
“Maybe she needs a beating, that’ll get her to eat.” The man yelled, grabbing a knife.
“Yea!” The boy shouted grabbing candle and running against the table.
“I suppose,” the woman said pulling off her hat revealing an ax, “Sorry child.”
Someone grabbed the mans hand, before he could cut her arm, pushing him away. He grabbed the knife out of the mans hand, and threw it, it brushed past Bruklyn’s nose and implanted itself in the woman’s forehead. She stumbled backwards dropping her ax. The boy dropped his weapon, and retreated. The person laughed, by the sound of his laugh Bruklyn guessed it was a boy.
“Are you gonna kill me?”
“No but they were” the person said ducking behind the chair, quickly untying her.
“Thank you.” Bruklyn whispered, starring at the person, who was not a man, but a girl her age.
The girl gripped her wrist hard, “Listen to me!”
“Your hurting me.” Bruklyn cried.
“Run! Run and don’t look back.” The girl demanded, letting go of her wrist.
“Who are you!”
“Run! Do you want to die!?”
“Who are you?” Bruklyn tried again.
“I-“ The girl coughed blood in her face, falling forward. Bruklyn looked down, an ax was in her back, and man pulled it out running towards her. Bruklyn took the girls advice and ran towards the bushes.
“Someone help!” She screamed.
The man followed her swinging the ax.
Bruklyn tripped over a log, tumbling forward.
The man threw the ax, and it missed her head.
She closed her eyes, “this is how I die”, she thought.
Okay, so to anyone who didn’t understand the skinny women next to Bruklyn was supposed to be her mom (who died of cancer when she was young), the boy in front of her was supposed to be her brother (he’s full of blood from the fight), and the man was her dad (he almost had his throat cut by her crazy uncle). Also it was a dream, she was not kidnapped.
I smell trouble brewing on the horizon
I wonder what that dream means…
Something to do with Adrain and Maddox no doubt.
Ps. Is this meant to be a book or something?
I mean you’re already on chapter 44, not that there’s anything wrong with that. Nice way to keep the suspense going btw…