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Kiss From a Rose
His hair was a halo of darkness. It waved about his head like cattails drifting in the wind. The skin of his face was pale, rivaling that of freshly fallen snow. But his eyes. . .
Oh his eyes. . .
They were closed.
His eyelids pressed together, leaving no room for peeking.
Thanks! I tried to reveal little things, without uncovering too much about what was going on which was kind of difficult, so I’m glad you like it!😊
*Is speechless in awe* The suspense and small bits of horror; it was amazing to read!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!
Suspense is tingling?!
IT’S SMACKING ME IN THE FACE BRY
OMG I CAN’T WAITTT!!!!!!!😁✨❤️
woah, the suspense…. it gave me chills and the mood of it was great! Loved reading it and yesssss can’t wait for part 2
I haven’t read the first part but you’re seriously so good at writing.
Working on it now! It’s a long chapter so I want it to be p e r f e c t!!!!
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It had been two days since Kiko, Tristan, and Willam had formed their plan to find Bogden. Two days of buying supplies, packing, and perfecting their plan. Now everything was finished. It was time to head to Camelot and get the Igraine. That was how they would get to Avalon.…[Read more]
Aahhhh this is wonderful! I feel terrible for Willam, but also for Kiko. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
OoOooOoOh amazing! I haven’t been keeping up and am too lazy to read the previous chapters, but i think i got it –
correct me if im wrong
Bogden is missing, they’re taking the Igraine to find him, and he’s in…Avalon?
And of course i’m on Willam’s side, because, well, obviously WOGDENNN
They’re trying to find bogden, yes. They have no idea where he could be, so they’re searching places he’s been before to see if that’s where he is. If you want, all chapters are in my favorites!
Amazing chapter!!! I feel weary at the mention of Avalon, but I hope they find Bodgen soon.
Weary and unsure mainly from QFG and Chaddick dying there. Like, I feel like someone’s going to die there, or I just can’t think of Avalon without remembering his death! (Wait, Avalon is where the Lady of the Lake is, isn’t it? If not, then oops-)
Great chapter! While I get that William’s anger and stuff has a reason I still feel bad for kiko to be the direction of his anger… Amazing chapter as always and happy New Year to you too!
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“We need enough food and water for a few weeks,” Willam said, mumbling random things to himself and Kiko. “We’ll also need medically supplies, of we happen to find Bogden alive.”
“Willam,” Tristan called.
He didn’t listen.
“Maybe we should bring a tent too. We’ll probably end up…[Read more]
Great chapter! This is awesome! Happy holidays to everyone!
why is everyone saying happy holidays like christmas is 2 days away thats Hanukah people goin on second night today…
Omg so suspenseful!! I love this so much! You are such a great author I love reading this! <3
This is amazing, I can’t wait to read more!!
Awww… William! I love how Kiko tries to help William, and how Tristan sees her softer side as a great thing! Loved reading this and aaah those chapters are all so good
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*previously in kfar… Tristan ends up in a dark, bIoody dreamscape, and finds out that he is the reason Bogden is gone… or rather, dead. He ended up looking into Kiko’s eyes and whispering “It’s my fault.” Now onto the chapter*
Kiko su.cked in a…[Read more]
Omg so good! You are such a great writer! So suspenseful tho eeeee can’t wait!!!!
This is amazing! One thing I love about this is how well you illustrate their emotions, and aah the moment between Kiko and Tristan is so sweet! Poor Wiliam.. poor Tristan… and yes the trip will be very interesting.
Wait so Bogden and William were….. true loves? If I dont know this by now, im so dumb.
Don’t have siblings so don’t know what it feels like to have them hate you…. What does it feel like?
JUST BRING BODGEN BACK ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I’ve already said this on your Question of the Day post, but I’m leaving the site. Please tag me for these though! I’m coming back on the last day of every month so I’ll vatvg up on the story then. Thanks!!!!
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Darkness. That was the first thing Tristan saw after he blacked out. Pure, pitch black, darkness. It wasn’t normal darkness either. It was inky, black, crawling darkness. This darkness had claws. It was the kind that spread into every crack, not even letting light permeate the b…[Read more]
THIS. IS. UTTER. AMAZINGNESS BRYYYYY *I clap and throw roses*
(I have got to work on making my feedback/comments in regards to rps better)
Bryahannah… how could you do this. Bodgen gone or is he dun dun dunnn. *sobs quietly* I don’t know what to say to you anymore expect. OMG HOW ARE U SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER LIKE I COULD NEVER! Like seriouslyyyyy wthhh! U are an amazing friend and author(;❤❤
Omg yes this was so great!! Can I pls be tagged? Thanks so much that was AMAZING!
AHH BOGDEN IS DEAD?? NUUUU!! THOIGH I SUSPECT TRISTAN WILL SACRIFICE EHIS LIFE FOR BOGDEN’S AT THE END OF THE STORY BECAUSE BY THEN KIKO WILL HAVE LEARNED TO LIVE WTHOUT HIM—JUST MY THEORY!! OH MY GINGERBREAD, THIS WAS WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, ESPECIALLY THE PART WHEN TRISTAN WAS IN HIS MIND-DREAM-DARK PLACE!!
Aaaaah woah.. Tristan’s dreamscape is so chilling. and I could literally feel that intensity coming from it. Bry, your chapters keep getting better and better with all the work you put into this, it’s intense and so raw in the feels. Plus, the way you’re setting up the conflic is awesome as well! Love this chapter and why, WHY do I have this…[Read more]
Ahhhhh! This means so much to me!!!!! Thanks, it took a lot of revising to get the dreamscape completely right, plus developing the conflict up to this point! (Wow I sound so professional lol). ❤❤❤❤❤
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Trying not to cry was impossible. Even when Kiko tried to wipe away her tears, more replaced them. Her lips tasted like salt—the remnants of her many tears. She watched as Willam bit back his sobs and slowly explained.
“T-the night after I ran into Kiko at your grave, Bogden…[Read more]
AHH I LOVED IT TRISTAN IS OKAY, RIGHT?! HE HAS TO BE! OH AND I GET WHY BOGDEN WENT AWAY WHEN TRISTAN CAME BACK: TAKE ONE AND LEAVE ONE, SOMETHING LIKE THAT–
POOR WILLIAM AND KIKO AND TRISTAN!! EVERYTHING ALWAYS HAS A CATCH. 🙁
BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH IT WAS SO WELL WRITTEN!!! :))) :DDD
WAHHHHHHHH why do you have to keep doing this to meeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please please please say you’ll post the next chap sooooooon!!!!!
by the way great writing, it really captures the reader!!!!!!
*when you have a lot of feeling about a chapter*
NOOO THIS WILL END IN A CHOICE BETWEEN TRISTAN AND BOGDEN AND LIKE A TRAGIC DEATH FOR ONE OF THEM TO LET THE OTHER LIVE A FULL LIFE AND THEN KIKO OR WILLAM WILL BE HEARTBROKENNN!!! And yessss potatoes!!!
wait- what- WHYYY
Wow, this chapter was intense! And ahhh wait did Bogden dissappear because Tristan came back? Potatoes? So many questions…. WHY THE CLIFFHANGER?
This was epic! You did great building up the tension, and wow the twist is genius. It did feel too good to be true for Tristan to just come back without any consequences and I’m loving…[Read more]
Aw jee, thanks! I have a lot of plans for this story soooooooo we’ll see if any of your theories are right!😉
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“Tristan. . . .” Willam whispered, his face turning a ghostly pale.
Kiko watched nervously as Tristan stared down at his feet. His cheeks were as red as his hair, and his hands were limp. Willam took a step forward and narrowed his eyes.
“How?” his voice was wobbly with anger…[Read more]
WHY IS HE MISSING I ACTUALLY LIKED BODGENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
SO EMOTIONALLLLLLL ALSO NOOO BODEGEN I MEAN I KNEW THAT SINCE THE END OF THE FIRST CHAPTER BUT STILLLLLLLLL
AHA I KNEW IT WAS ABOUT BOGDEN!!
THE WILLIAM/TRISTAN BROTHER BONDING SCENE WAS SO SWEET AND EMOTIONAL I LOVED ITTT!!
I loved this!!! The scene with Tristan and Willam really connects with the reader, and NOOOO BOGDENNN
I FREAKING LOVED IT
OMGGGGGGGG WHAT IS EVEN HAPPENING I CANT- ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
*light happy music plays softly* Emotionaaaal–
*SAD, POWERFUL, HEARTBREAKING MUSIC* *between tears* rooooollerrrrr—
*SCREAMING IN THE BACKGROUND WITH DISTRESSED HEAVY ROCK MUSIC* COASTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR— ba na na na na na ana na PLOT TWIST!!!
OMG NOOO BRYANNAH WHAT DID YOU DO!!?!?!?!!?! BOGDENNN
HOW COULD YOUUUU
Sorry i’m late!!! And Amazing chapter, it made my heart melt!!!!!
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Kiko flopped down onto the couch dramatically and ran a hand down her face. Tristan’s lips twitched upwards and he poked her leg.
“What’s up?” he asked.
Kiko curled into a ball and laid her forehead on her knees. She mumbled quietly and Tristan co.cked an eyebrow.
“What’d you…[Read more]
AHH OH MY GINGERBREAD THIS IS WONDERFULLY CAPTIVATING
BOGDEN IS GONE, ISN’T HE?? AND THEN TRISTAN AND KIKO OR MAYBE JUST ONE OF THEM WILL GO AFTER HIM WITH WILLIAM!!
AAWWWWW, I feel so emotional reading this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!
ASLDKJHASLDKJHALSKJDHASDJKHALSDJHASDHKASHDKH THIS IS JUST- AHHHHHHHH SUSPENSE I CAN’T WAIT
hehe *soft soprano, tenacious tenor* Is ThAt AlLiTeRaTiOn I sEe? ACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK BOGDEN PLEASE OH NO!!
AH WILLIAM OHMYGOSH I forgot that he was related? to Tristan, this is amazing! Also the dance scene was sweet as well. And I need more… why cliffhangers?
Mwahahahaha! There’s a lot more cliffhangers in this story’s future. . .
Waltz Cuteness… check (been there)
Bogden Gone………… check (gasp!)
Willam Tea………………….. check (OMG THEY DIDNT EVEN TELL WILLAM HIS BROTHER CAME BACK FROM THE DEAD–)
It’s official. This chapter was absolutely amazing. Check, check, check. It meets the requirements.
AWESOMMMMMMMMMME I CANT WAIT FOR THE TEA
Kiko’s not gonna be…[Read more]
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Kiko looked up from her storybook and into bright blue eyes. Tristan began to play with his fingers nervously, and swallowed thickly. Kiko closed her book and leaned on her elbows.
“What’s up?” she said, popping the p loudly.
Tristan shifted to sit on his knees, moving…[Read more]
AHHHH THEY FINALLY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YESSSSSSSS
And bry I know what you said was gon happen to them, but I hope everything works out in the end lol!!!
Whaaaaat? Who said that
Omg I miss the days where I would see people comment 10 seconds after they posted because I’m here so much. I’ve missed it. I really have!
Omg this was adorable! I LOVED how you described Tristan and Kiko’s kiss!!! But nooooo they just found each other and they can’t lose each other again!
awwwwwwwwwww i love this so much also i died at You’re my true love you big dope! and His first year he had gone after Beatrix, his second year. . . he had just gone. BUT THIS IS SO CUTE AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
YES YES YES! Dude this was so good the scene where kiko got ready and Tristin saw her for the first time gave me beauty and the beast vibes! AND HE ASKED IF HE COULD KISS HER AHHHH! so good good job Tristin.
OH. MY. GINGERBREAD. I. AM. UTTERLY WOWED AND IN COMPLETE AWE TRISTAN AND KIKO KISSED AND THE DATE WAS PERFECTION IT WAS SO CUTE AND SWEET AND EVERYTHING FANTASTIC AT THE SAME TIME!!!!! 😀 😀 😀
ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!
And I hope you didn’t kill/hurt either of them, but would it be fun to read? Yes!
*Wonders if I am really a Never too!*
AAAH THIS WAS SO CUTE! The clearing is beautiful and it’s such a heartfelt moment for both of them and I think their nervousness and dynamic were done perfectly! And nooo not the plot twist….KEEEEP TRISTAN ALIVE GANGG AAAAAA
Still, the plot twist sounds fun to read about even if it will be devastating. I’ve also noticed that you use a lot of…[Read more]
Oof, yeah. I need to get better at not writing as many compound sentences. It just seems natural, you know?
I feel you! Most of my sentences are compound as well. Whenever I write something for school I usually end up trying to change those consecutive compound sentences to other types, but then I later realize there’s more after.
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Kiko was trying ro work up the courage to tell Tristan about her fears. To tell him why she didn’t kiss hin that first day, and say exactly what her nightmares had been about. It was hard though. Every time she had been about to do it, Reena had walked in, or the words got caught in…[Read more]
It’s okay lol. I’ve probably got dozens of errors in here because autocorrect didn’t catch them
AIEEE SO ADORABLE AND YAY KIKO CONFESSED HER FEARS NOW HER AND TRISTAN CAN BE TOGETHERRRR
AND YAY REENA CAN SEE HER MOM WITH A CERTAIN SOMEONNNNEEE
Aww, go Triko!!!! I feel like a weight’s been lifted off my chest now she’s said it too, lol.
aww he is so supportive good job kiko you chose a good man
TRIKO KISS NOWWWWW! I NEED A TRIKO KISS! THE PAIN OF NOT HAVING A TRIKO KISS IS KILLING MEEEEEE! Otherwise it was very good!
Mwahahaha! I will not reveal when the kiss will come! It is in the next few chapters though… sometime around there lol
yess communication is key for good relationships! It was so sweet of Tristan to help her through, and YESS KIKO GIRL I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT! So much emotions in this chapter and aaaaaaah this is awesome as always<3