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Hester x Chaddick – Part 1
Hester flung the doors to her new dorm room open, the stench of rotting beds and old wallpaper putting her at ease. She was the first one there, so she placed her small mud-covered suitcase on the floor next to the most burnt bed near the window, taking out a dusty picture frame of her mother and placing it on the bedside table. She grimaced remembering how her mother’s tale had ended.
“I’ll do better” she thought and her grimace turned into a sneer as she stared at the ripped photo.
“HEY NEVER” a deep voice hollowed from outside the window, Hester looked up from the photo, sneer still plastered on her face. A boy was leaning out one of the windows in the other tower across the halfway bay.
Hester whisked back round, ignoring the boy and continued unpacking her luggage, hopelessly fundling around for her black robes. ‘Boys are so pathetic’ she murmered to herself.
‘At least i’ll get to kill them once school is done’ she thought, smirking and changing quickly into her black robes.
“HEY NEVERRRR,” the boy hollered again, but this time another boy was with him, laughing. Hester rolled her eyes, she had no time for these “pretty boys” . She tied her hair up into a messy high ponytail and continued to ignore them. Surely her roommates would be coming soon so she had someone to talk to rather than those pesky ever brats.
“YOU LOOK PRETTY FOR A NEVER” she heard as she was walking towards the door. Hester froze and looked down at her demon tattoo, which was twitching with fury. Maybe if she answered back they’d leave her alone.
“YOU’RE PRETTY **** FOR AN EVER” she called back and quickly hid beside the window, out of sight. No comments came from out the window for 5 minutes and Hester laughed at her victory, slumping on her bed. The door finally swung open and two girls came in; one girl was albino with 3 rats perching on her shoulders and head, the other was quite chubby with her lips quirked up into a small smile in between bites of some sort of chocolate object in her hand.
“Hey, the names Hester,”
“Anadil.” the albino girl nodded
“Dot!” the chubby girl squeaked
“Have you heard about blondie?” Anadil asked, placing her bags next to another bed.
“Blondie?” Hester tilted her head
“There’s a really pretty reader in pink that has been dropped in evil, some say she was even wearing makeup!” Dot chirped
“Makeup?!” Hester and Anadil looked at each other in disgust
“We’re probably gonna be the lucky ones to get the squealer” Hester rolled her eyes, looking out the window. Blondie probably deserved to be in pretty boy’s tower.
Hester×Chaddick? I always thought of that couple to be… interesting. I’m looking forward into it. Your writing style is good, flows well – detailed enough to cover the subject, fast enough to spark interest. Tag me, please.
This is pretty good! Can you tag me please? I’d like to know what happens next 🙂