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Ailey’s
Chapter One
Her head ached more than it did last night and her body throbbed with pain. She couldn’t think straight and her vision was wonky. A man walked into the room and sat down next to her. He put his scratched hand onto her shoulder and sighed, his breath heavy and raspy.
“Ailey,” he started, sighing again, “the doctors don’t k…[Read more]
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ooo good descriptions!! just a few run-on sentences that you might want to rid. very nice chapter!
Yeah, I have an issue with run on sentences but thanks!
Name: Ailey
Age: 12
School: Good
Personality: Shy, quiet, nature-loving, smiley, happy, brave when in the mood, bold when in the mood
Appearance: Long waist-length ginger hair, seaweed green eyes, tall, long legs, freckles by her nose small nose
Apparel: Baggy camo trousers, any coloured t-shirt, fluffy striped jumpers, big hiking boots, hair tied…[Read more]
Tell me if you see any loopholes in the story already and whether you want to be tagged in the next part. Also, when it starts, you can give me tips whenever you like!
Ok
Also can you tag me?
Truth be Told
Ugh! The one thing I hate mor than hippocrates, popular kids and boys is eating tea with friends. Or, to be precise, my mum’s friends. Adults who pinch your cheeks and tell you how much you’ve grown since they last saw you.
“Savannah darling!” called my mum from downstairs.
“Yeah mum?!” I replied.
“Are you dressed. My friends will…[Read more]
The stars mean D.I.R.T.Y
Wow this is really good! Keep it going i really enjoyed it 🙂 <333
Truth be Told
Bios:
Savannah
Name: Savannah Price
Age: 12
School: Good
Personality: Shy, bookworm, mysterious, kind, forgiving, romantic
Parentage/lineage: Mother- Amy Price, Father- deceased
Appearance: Long black hair that covers her eye, deep green eyes, pale skin, tall, bitten nails
Apparel: Leggings, long sleeved t-shirts, trainers,…[Read more]
Sorry it is so long, I wanted to get all the bios out the way at the start of my story
Starstruck
Chapter One
Thunder sounded in the background, lightning struck the ground. All that can be seen is a small, red and white tent and a cart nextdoor.
Inside the tent, a girl read a book and ignored any sounds around her. Without noticing it, a boy creeped into the tent and tiptoed across the floor. The girl’s ears pricked up and turned…[Read more]
Nice, I like it
But if you don’t mind feedback I’d recommend waiting a little bit before the strangers tell each other their nicknames, other wise good
Ok thanks. The only reason I put it in already is because Phobe doesn’t like her real name because is reminds her of her parents
Starstruck
Bio
Name: Phoebe
Age: 12
School: Started off in Good but has a room and schedule for both
Personality: Bookish, shy, lonely
Parentage/lineage: None, reader but somehow crossed through the barrier into the woods
Appearance: Long dark brown hair, dark blue eyes, pale skin, tall
Apparel: Dark leggings, grey or navy jumpers, bright bold…[Read more]
Tag me. You can use this character: Evie-Anna – 15 years old, Good, red-gold finger glow, kind, considerate, rude, compassionate. Right eye is mint-blue and left eye is red, black, long, curly hair and dark skin. She is smart and strong. She doesn’t trust quickly. She can hypnotise people and make them do what she wants. She is the daughter of…[Read more]
Tanya is cruel, collected and controlling. She wears black and/or blue skirts/dresses/tops. She has black-red fingerglow, is in Evil, loves to play with people’s feelings and can breathe fire
Thank you so much! I will definitely include her, she sounds amazing for my story!
Midnight
Chapter Two
So, we’ve already told you about our little escapade, now you need to know about the unfortunate consequences.
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“Shut up!” screeched Sally, who had recently become queen of the roost, at Rose and I, who she now detested even more.
“Three words, Sally,” I said, with a smirk on my face.
Rose continued: ” We!”
“Don’t!” I…[Read more]
Midnight
Chapter One
Do you have to wake up at midnight to clean your own house? Didn’t think so. Well, I do! My name is Kayla Jane Brady and I live in- well, I don’t actually know where I live. But no one cares about that! Let’s get onto the good stuff…
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It was midnight and I was already up and ready to work. I slept in a room with my…[Read more]
The stars after and are for s u c k e d btw!
Cool 🙂
Midnight
Bio:
Name: Kayla Brady
Nicknames: KK, KJ, Kay
Age: 11
School: Both
Personality: Shy, smart, book-worm, kind, nice, fiesty, cunning, quick-witted, determined, creative, gets braver, loyal, ambitious
Parentage/lineage: Mother-Unknown, Father-Unknown until later, Sister/Brother-Unknown until later
Apparel: bright bold t-shirts, jeans or…[Read more]
Cool! Please tag me!
I like the bio! Please tag me!
Bio:
Name: Matilda (Tilda)
Age: 12
School: 50/50
Personality: Shy, scared, confused, book worm, lonely, modern, smart, friendly
Parentage: None, she comes from Gavaldon
Appearance: Long dark brown wavy hair, blue eyes speckled with gold and silver, silver glasses with added sparkle, tall, very pale skin
Apparel: Grey jumpers with small rainbows…[Read more]
Can’t wait.
If you want you can check my activity to read my story. For the Prelog you have to scroll down.
GOOD JOB!