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Guys I have some bad news. I’m going to have to resign as Elder since I’m not on here nearly enough. I also don’t think Level 0 needs an elder anymore. The WC is doing such a wonderful job! So yeah if you still want to refer to me as your Elder that’s fine, if not that’s cool too. I’ll always be here for Help but I feel so bad because I’ve gotten…[Read more]
NOOOOOOOOO! NO! N0!
Just kidding. I understand Caramel. Best of luck!
I understand, but I still really don’t want you to resign… I’m being selfish, I know…
I totally get it. This sort of thing happens to everyone, but you were a great Elder.
Sorry guys! I just didn’t feel comfortable holding a title that I didn’t feel worthy of but yeah I do recall that talk @evilerruler845 . I forgot about that whoops lol. I think Leo should make the decision since he’s the Elder Judge.
ok though. I guess I
have to respect your decision. And it’s ok if you’re busy, we all have busy times in our lives 🙂
Aaaaawww, we’re going to miss you Caramel. Will there be another Elder?
The position of Elder should probably remain suspended until further notice. There are currently two active (in the loosest sense) former-Elders, in that case.
Hey guys. Delivering bad news. I think I’m going to step down as Elder here. I love being Elder and helping you guys out and seeing how your amazing minds come up with brilliant stories but I really just don’t want to let anyone down. School is about to start up for me in a bit and it’s something different and way harder than I’ve ever experienced…[Read more]
Awwww @caramelprincess ! It’s ok, we understand. And you’re a great Elder, don’t ever doubt it! ❤️
I can still be in charge of that if you want. I’m still making up my mind about leaving my position as Elder, I’m currently in like a “suspended” position. I can be the unofficial leader if that helps at all lol. I’ll still handle the application process, don’t worry. And yeah I remember when you joined!
I just talked to my mom about this since it’s been weighing heavily on me. She said that I don’t need to spend “gobs” of hours on here to still be the leader and help people and make sure things are kept in order. Especially since I’ve delegated some of that responsibility to others (the Welcome Committee). She said I don’t have to be on ALL THE…[Read more]
I totally understand if you don’t want to let us down. But believe me; here we all love you soooooo much, Caramel, that we don’t even care if you are on a lot or not. Really. It’s your choice whether or not you will stay as Elder, and I respect that, but we truly do not mind you not being on as much as you would like!!! So if I were you, I would…[Read more]
Hey Caramel what ever you do, we will support you. If you choose to step down as elder that is fine if you don’t that is fine as well. We all like you here not because you’re the elder but because you’re a wonderful author as well. Any ways what ever you chose, make sure it is the one you want. 🙂
Caramel, I fully understand and support your decision. This actually paves the way for something that I’ve been considering for a long time now: completely changing the role of an Elder. I’m thinking of something less like a level one Elder and more like a level three: an experienced RPer who does not necessarily need to fit the original…[Read more]
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I know not part of the conversation……….)
Yeah I kind of get what you’re saying. I don’t really know what a level 3 Elder does because I rarely get on there, but are you saying someone who doesn’t get on EVERYDAY but comes on and helps with guidance and stuff, not like being in charge of people. Just to make sure everything is going alright and to help with any rp related questions or is…[Read more]
That’s pretty much it, yeah. They also have to have this kinda Eldery reputation or history, which is difficult to describe, so I think that only current Elders should pick other Elders, in the unlikely event that we see any more.
Hey guys! It’s everyone’s favorite disappearing elder! (Not favorite, I’m just kidding) I’m trying this on my phone so there’s bound to be typos lol, forgive me in advance please. Anyways I just wanted to say that as much as I love being elder and having the responsibility of keeping things in line and helping out with everyone’s writing, I’m sure…[Read more]
Caramel while I think you’re an amazing elder who has helped this site in so many ways I think this blog should have an active elder who can be there at all times. And I know that for some reason, though you’d be a wonderful person for the job, you don’t have the time or at least it appears that way. I think you should rescind your elder ship.
Yeah I used to be homeschooled. Now I’m not lol. Okay two Yay’s so far in favor of stepping down as elder. Thanks for your kind words guys (btw all the candidates I had in mind for being the new elder aren’t active anymore evilerruler so that’s why this is kind of hard for me, but you and the Welcome Committee are doing a fine job so I don’t think…[Read more]
Oh and you guys might be misunderstanding me. I didn’t say I won’t like ever be on. I just won’t be on 365 days a year lol. I’d probably be one 5 on 6 days a week. Just not everyday, all the time because I’m actually going to school now. And I was wondering if that was okay or if y’all want me to step down because of that. Just to clarify lol.
Oh then nah. No need to rescind at all. Sorry.
P.S If you don’t mind me asking who were the ones you thought would be good elders but aren’t active anymore.
I kinda don’t want to say just yet. Mostly waiting for them to become active again. Seems like a lot of people that joined when I joined or was here when I first joined are very busy these days and I don’t see them as much. (Oh and btw @toffee there will probably be some days in the future where I might be awol for a couple of days cause you know…[Read more]
Nah. I think a few days off is fine. I don’t think there’s anyone I know who’s been on everyday since they joined or is completely safe from missing a few days.
Aw thanks! And yeah my schedule’s pretty tight too. We all have to keep our priorities straight. And being Elder here is one of mine.
I know I am late, but: NAY! Never in a million years, Caramel!
The site is still acting up ( 🙁 ) but I’m going to try for the 4th time to post this bio. Hopefully it works lol.
This is one of the main characters for an Rp collab that I have the privilege of working/writing with @fairytalegirl123 @emmal @thedemigod1112 . Hope you like her!
Name: Xayah Lo Varius
School&Time Period: Evil, Before School…[Read more]
Hey! Just wanted to say I’ve been reading your bios, stories, etc. But the site is making it extremely difficult for me to comment/reply on any of them so don’t think I’m just skipping over yours stories. I’ve tried everything I could think of to get it to work normally again but nothing has succeeded so far. But everyone’s writing is great (just…[Read more]
Thanks for always being there for us! Glad to have you here.
😀 🙂 😛
Hey everyone! Caramel here! This is the prologue for a group Rp I’m part of. The title of the story is called ‘Altered Souls’ and the group Rp’s members consist of: @fairytalegirl123 @emmal @thedemigod1112 and me! Enjoy!
I’ve been waiting and watching. Seeking and spying. Gathering my resources and waiting for a chance…[Read more]
oh, I LOVE it please tag me so when are u going to post chapter 1? 🙂
The chat for our Rp @thedemigod112 @emmal @thefairytalegirl123
Okay I’m working on a bio right now. I think we should have a trio. They come to Sge but.. They come from a different land and they’re employed by an evil dark ruler who wants to take control of the Storian to write himself as king of a land he was exiled from because of a crime he committed although he was next in line to rule it. I don’t know if…[Read more]
Sounds good. Maybe the trio could have the most famous parents (like as famous as our Sea Witch, Evil Queen, and Maleficent).
@caramelprincess Sounds good! (Look in your mentions, I put in my villain parent’s bio.)
@caramelprincess Also, I’ve made up my character (who is a female), though I haven’t posted her bio yet. Maybe she could be part of that trio?
Yeah! But their parents fairytales no one at Sge has heard of them but in other lands they would strike fear into the hearts of the commonfolk. So perhaps one girl from the trio should be very mean and dark and of course she gets sent to evil but the other girl and they boy get sent to good. The girl is in the middle and the boy is sweet. Or so…[Read more]
@caramelprincess Your ideas are great! Can I do the pov of Damiana (yes, she’s the daughter of Vendetta)? We could put her in the trio. I think it would be better if all three worked for the evil lord person (lol we still need to find a name for him) and knew each other, but pretended not to, though obviously the boy and girl in Good will have to…[Read more]
Oh and also @caramelprincess should I post Damiana’s bio in the RP forum (public) place or just on here? I know I put Vendetta’s in public buuuuut I’m kinda new to RPing so…? Sorry about all of my questioning 😛
How about the “Good” boy and girl have less Evil in them than the Evil girl, so they go undercover in the Good school as spies. I’ve started making my character, and it could be something she might do, but if @emmal thinks her character would be more likely to go undercover because she’s good at trickery (not because of being less Evil than the…[Read more]
@emmal usually we post our bios and stuff here FIRST before you post it in the public so we can all what each other is doing. I was thinking that the whole trio has the same amount of evil in them but the boy and one of the girl’s got an elixir from the evil ruler to suppress their evil side so they can trick everyone before the competition. Also,…[Read more]
I like the second one as well. However, I was thinking that that trio wouldn’t be the only people working for the Evil dude. The members of the trio that are going to Evil could maybe recruit others? Idk
Also, my character is going to be a shapeshifter, and their gender is unknown as they keep switching their appearance. But they almost always…[Read more]
Outline of my ideas for the Rp (We have to come up with a title too and make sure to post your ideas!) Remember these are only my ideas and nothing is set in stone until the leader of the rp (is it emmal?) says it or we vote on it 😉
Setting: We said Sge right? School for Good and Evil
Plot: There was a man heir to the throne of…[Read more]
@caramelprincess Wow, thanks so much for putting that together! Yeah, I think Damiana should be put in Good. And sure, I’ll put together her oppose-er (is that a word? :P). Also, I agree, we should keep them in suspense to build up the story. As for the title of the story… that is yet to be found 🙂
Your ideas are amazing Caramel! If we need to…[Read more]
@fairytalegirl123 Okay cool and I was thinking they can recruit one of the people from the Opposing Team later on. But I have a plan for them recruiting a lot of others later. Read about the exiled king cause it has to do with the elixir!
All right, nice! I like it. I can also write in the POV of the person who’s specifically against my character. I would say the girl who witnessed my character murdering the teacher, but it would be a great character for Demigod to have as that character will most likely also be vital. So yeah.
I will take an opposer if needed.
Great! And thanks so much. Btw the people from the opposing team are supposed to be the opposers for each. Like Girl 1 could be the oppose to Damiana. Get it? And Athena is a great name to name the oppose!
So I pulled a Caramel ( 😛 ) and just made a renewed list of who is going to do what:
Me, @emmal: Damiana, Opposer Athena (Good)
@caramelprincess: Xayah, Opposer ??? (Evil)
@fairytalegirl123: Shapeshifter (what’s your character’s name?)
@thedemigod1112: Opposer ??? (Fairytalegirl’s opposer?)…[Read more]
Okay great! So guys pick which person from the Opposing Group you want to do the Povs for and that could be the opposer for your first main character or someone else can write the Povs for your opposer. There’s 8 main and supporting characters in total. So since there’s four of us everyone can write for two people. (besides the friends of those…[Read more]
I’ll write for Boy 2 if you don’t mind (as well as the shapeshifter). I’m just about to work on their bio, but I’m going to look up some good names first.
Sure @caramelprincess you can do the Prologue. After all, the prince was your idea, after all 😉
I’ll write for Damiana and her opposer Athena, in Good.
Also, can we write mini POVs for the exiled prince sometimes too, if that’s fine with you? If not, I totally understand.
Thanks alot Caramel and everyone!! 🙂
I think her shapeshifter idk. Aspen sounds like a good one. And Emmal sure you can! I’m sorry it looks like I’ll taking control of the Rp lol I just like sharing my ideas. Btw I think fairytalegirl said she was going to write the Povs of the girl going to good cause that’s the character watching her character murder the teacher. And my two main…[Read more]
Okay so @emmal since Demigod doesn’t have one of the main characters in The Trio could she have Girl 1 which is going to be one of the main character’s as well that’s going to help bring about the plot? I need some people to write Povs for the two boys in evil that’s in the Opposing Group.
Okay thank you! Let’s start to give them names so we won’t have to keep calling them Girl1 and Boy 2 lol 😀 Bio posting time! (Says Caramel who still hasn’t made a bio for Xayah or girl 2)
Girl 1- Demigod; Good
Girl 2- Me; Evil
Boy 1- Good- unknown
Boy 2- Evil; Fairytalegirl
Boy 3- Evil- unknown
What girl are you talking about taking emmal? They’re all taken lol. There’s 2 boys left.
Don’t forget to post your bios here first! And we’ll talk about keeping some…[Read more]
Oh I’m so so sorry I messed up your tag! If you haven’t read my outline yet read it because it’ll give you a summary of basically everything we’ve been talking about.
And everyone’s doing 2 people each! You’ll be doing 2 people from the Opposing Group. One is Girl 1 and the other you can pick. Girl 1’s character will help usher in the framing of the plot.
That is okay!!!! I have a basic idea, but I have to get off, so I will try to read the rest tomorrow. I can use Solar for another one of my stories. Bye for now!!!!!!!!!! 🙂 😀 😀
@caramelprincess Oh thanks for that clarification! I was kinda confused with the whole Girl1 Girl2 Boy1 Boy2 thing 🙂
Also, should my character’s opposer be a boy? Because I can’t see a girl opposer slot open for Athena… Or could we make one of the three boy opposer slots a girl slot for Athena to be? If none of those work I could just make…[Read more]
So here’s my bio:
Name: Damiana Larson–The name “Damiana” is from the male name Damianus, which means “to subdue” or “to kill”.
Age: Unknown (12-17)
School: School for Good, School for Girl
Appearance/Clothes: When she is not wearing her school uniform, Damiana wears a tight black jumpsuit that…[Read more]
My character’s parent will be a sort of assassin. I’m at my friend’s house and will be hanging out with her most of the time, so I won’t get a whole lot of time to work on the bio.
Nice bio. But do you think when you publicly post it that you should let the readers know that she’s a killer if we want to keep them in suspense about her and Aspen being evil? Btw there’s no boy and girl school cause this is before the schoolmaster. My only suggestion is to try and make her seem more good and then update the bio after they find…[Read more]
Sure! Btw you don’t HAVE to write your main character’s opposer’s Pov. But you can if you want to. Until we hear back from Demigod though just you can take Boy1 or Boy 3. 3 of the character’s from the Opposing Group will be Xayah’s opposers until she converts/recruits one of them. Girl 2, Boy 2 and Boy 3. Maybe since in addition to me was also…[Read more]
Okay here’s the bio for Xayah! Sorry it took so long I kept getting side-tracked and deleting stuff in it I didn’t like. It’s literally 5AM and I just finished this 2 minutes ago lol. It’s not nearly as good as I wanted it to be but whatever. Tell me if I left anything out and what you think about it!
Name: Xayah Lo Varius
School&Time Period:…[Read more]
AMAZING! (And thank you @emmal for putting Solar in!!!!!!!!!!). I would like Athena……… But whatever you guys want! 🙂 🙂
@caramelprincess Aha, I like how you worked the Elixir effects and the prince (was that him?) in there subtly. 🙂 Should we do it too?
Cool! I’m still working on my bio. Expect it sometime later today. (Also, their name will be Mackenzie because my friends and mom voted it. Just one vote more than Aspen.)
@fairytalegirl123 But since the character is a boy most of the time (they’re a shapeshifter. right?) his name could be Mac as a boy and Mackenzie as a girl. 😉
Yeah think we should each have put some of the effects of the elixir in our weaknesses so we can all have a common theme but the readers don’t know why. And after Fairytale posts her bio I think we should each come up with 1-2 tittles and we’ll vote for which one we like the best to be the title of the story. Unless you guys want to do something…[Read more]
@emmal You can make up his parent fairytales if you want but keep it in his bio instead of making a whole new one for his parents. The best place to put it would be in the fairytale lineage category.
While you’re finishing that I’m going to start working on the prologue. Is it fine if I use the section where I was talking about the prince in my outline to be in the prologue?
Man, I did Athena’s bio than I lost the whole thing! 🙁 But I am going to do it again:
Name: Athena Owlsden
School: Good, before School Master era
Appearance: She is 5’4 with big shoulders and chest, but the rest of her body is trim and slender, aburn hair that goes down to her shoulders, but she always wears it in a sloppy ponytail,…[Read more]
@caramelprincess what do you think her strong fatal flaw/weakness should be? Also, Fingerglow: It is the color of plush pink, with a tiny hint of the color grey
I got it! Her weakness is that she holds grudges against others. She never gets over them and people who try to hurt her, crack into those wounds and it hurts. She tries to keep herself in control, so they cannot see how much it hurts her. And also, ever since she lost her parents, she has been keeping anybody she loves close to her. She cannot…[Read more]
TeMMiE hAs FiNIshEd!!!
Name: Mackenzie (last name unknown)
Alias(es): Way too many to count. Mackenzie frequently changes their identity, both for fun and for spying. However, some people call their main girl form Kenzie (as a nickname).
Age: Unknown. The appearance Mackenzie usually take on looks to be about 13.
Nice job! Just remember you and @emmal to take the stuff we’ll reveal later on in the story out of the bios when you guys post it to the public. Like the fact that it’s souls is evil and so on. Get what I’m saying? Btw I’ve started on absolutely nothing for the prologue lol. Let’s come up with 1-2 title names each and vote on them!
Idk Demigod. It would be interesting to see someone have a physical fatal flaw/weakness for once. I never see anyone make those anymore. Like how Xayah has to have her dagger stabbed into her head or heart before she wields large sums of magic? You could do something like that for Athena but modify it in a way so suit your character. Also don’t…[Read more]
I have the lamest ideas ever: Dark Souls in Light or Wrath of the Prince
Ok hmm…. a physical weakness. Let me think……… Okay what if that when she is under pressure, she will hurt herself. If she feels like she is so dumb and that she will not be able to solve it, she will scratch her arms and hit her head on a wall. (Just a thought. My brain is like going so blank!)
I am not too sure about a physical weakness. I have never done that before. If anyone has an idea, I would so love to hear it!!!!!!!!!!
Those are good names! Mine aren’t that interesting; Exiles Wrath or Altered Souls. I have some other one’s too.
Her best talent is using her brain. She is very smart, but in body not as strong……….
That’s a cool weakness Demigod (just saw your comment about her holding grudges just now). I was just going to type a physical fatal flaw but that’s good though. Btw can everyone please just make a new comment when you’re posting something? Even if you’re trying to reply to something. It makes it easier for us all to see instead of searching…[Read more]
So now we’re just waiting for Emmals two titles so we can vote. I should start working on the prologue but I lost my train of thought lol.
I cast my vote for Living a Lie (though both of them give too much away, I think Living a Lie gives less away) 😉
I like your ideas @emmal but I am going for Altered Souls. It just sounds cool. 🙂
Well technically both don’t give that much away because if we go with Living a Lie they won’t know WHO’S living and lie and HOW. And then with altered souls the readers won’t know WHO’S soul is being altered and how they are being altered. 😉
Okay so it’s settled then. Now my suggestions would be for everyone to modify your bio’s if they need to be modified (To the Fairytale and Emmal; don’t forget to put the effects of the elixir in the weakness category and take anything out that will give away pieces of the story we don’t want the readers to know about yet). Then I’ll finish up the…[Read more]
The headaches were in the Others section, just subtly hidden with a guess of hers.
Yeah, but I am going to have to try and fix my bio in a few days. I am not going to be on the site for the next few days (But I will try to!), because my parents want me to take a break off the computer. 🙂
Maybe, but I do not want you guys to have to wait, just because of me.
@fairytalegir123l Of course you can! I Just didn’t want to give too much away in our bios or the readers will be able to guess pieces of the plot too easily. And I kinda just butchered the prologue but I’m going to post it here anyways. Please don’t make your criticism too harsh, I already knew the prologue is not that great lol.
Okay here’s the prologue!
I’ve been waiting and watching. Seeking and spying. Gathering my resources and waiting for a chance to strike. But I am mostly forgotten, I am little more than a myth parents tell their young to discourage them from using magic. “You don’t want to end up like him, the prince who tried to enslave…[Read more]
Thanks! (And prologue’s are supposed to be short because they’re like an introduction, they’re just getting you ready for the story 😉 )
So am I free to post it? And then we post our bios for our 1st main characters after?
@caramelprincess I’m not quite done editing my bio yet to leave out the Evil parts and maybe add in the backstory of how they recruited in her Pov (if that’s fine with you, I’m not going to get too detailed though for the sake of the story 😉 )… you could post it but I might not be done with the bio by then.
Whatever you think works! I just don’t want to spoil the plot for the readers too early!
Okay. So either I could post the prologue, then my character and then explain that the other main character bios are coming very soon. or I’ll just wait for you guys. What do you want me to do?
@caramelprincess I don’t want to hold you back from posting the prologue, but it would be better if the prologue and the bios came in one package, if you know what I mean. 😉
Guys the site is glitching for me. It is giving me a hard time when I try to leave comments and scroll up or down and it freezes my internet tabs that are open and geesh. I can’t even comment on the people’s stories and bios in Rp level 0 although I’ve read all of them. So I’m trying my best to post the bio but the site is acting up. 🙁
That is okay!!!!!!!!!!! We all can wait for as long as possible!!!!!!!!!
Welcome to the collab… @elysianne !!!! She’s going to be doing the POV’s of characters like the other teachers and students who do not know the trio is working for the prince, and mayyyyybe do the POV of the exiled prince sometimes? (We can all do that sometimes if that’s fine with you…[Read more]
Alright, time to close the computer for now guys. I’ve got to catch some Z’s. 😛
Good night Altered Souls. (I like to think that we are the Altered Souls, which I guess we are. :P)
😀 😀 😀
Signing off for now,
Damiana Larson (hehehe, no, Emma 😉 )
Fairytale, sorry the site has still been acting up but I do not know when we are posting the first chapter. I think the first chapter should be from the setting off Good (the school) so either Mac or Damiana’s Pov be posted to set off the mood of the story. Then in response to either one of your chapters Athena’s Pov should be posted (note:…[Read more]
Thank you and sure! Whoever’s Pov is going in the first chapter should collab with Athena so you two can come up with certain events that will be featured in both of your Povs and lead up to the death of the male teacher who found out about Damiana and Mac (note: don’t forget to act extremely good in both of your Povs for your characters so it can…[Read more]
Thanks a lot Caramel for all your efforts. You’re great. @emmal, would you like to go first? I wouldn’t mind going first at all if you’re busy or don’t want to go first or whatever though.
Yes, but the chapter will be in Damiana and Athena’s pov (or should we do Athena in the next chapter @caramelprincess?). 😉
You should probs do separate chapters, but I’m not Caramel sooo…. I’ll get to work on Mackenzie’s POV tomorrow; it’s almost 11:00 here in NY.
Separate chapters. Just have some main events happen in two character’s Pov. For example:
In Mac’s Pov he kills the teacher.
In Athena’s Pov she sees him kill the teacher.
You see how the same event was in two people’s Povs? It doesn’t mean you guys need to co-write the chapter just Emmal inform Demigod on certain main events happening in…[Read more]
Hey @demigod1112, do you think Athena should catch Mackenzie’s rose at the Welcoming (assuming that the point in time we’re writing in has that part of the Welcoming)? I think it would be a cute and funny thing and begin her having a slight crush on Mackenzie.
Also: if this is before Schoolmaster, we’re using the Pre-Schoolmaster uniforms (shown in the Handbook), right?
@fairytalegirl123 Oh my goodness!!!!! I love that idea!!!!!!!!! I will try to work on her POV tomorrow (Is there anything else I should know?) And I think we should use the old uniforms (I do not own the handbook, so I will have to look it up). And also this is going to be so MUCH FUN!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
Well, I’m working on the POV right now (as well as helping my brother with his constant coding questions), and I think that Mackenzie would be a little upset that he now has a girl who has a crush on him, as it would make his mission harder, as well as the fact he can’t feel romantic love (plus his default form is also a girl).
Sure. I was thinking we could have the point in time at the school where there were no uniforms required. But we can do the old uniforms.
Ok guys I just want to make sure of how Mac killed the teacher. Did he stab him or something? (Sorry if this is a dumb question, I just would like to make sure I do it right.)
Here it is!!!! Tell me what I need to fix:
I was carried into the sky, my eyes closed. What was going to happen? I shook my head. Do not panic, I reminded myself. The creature sailed across the sky, flying over buildings and small little farms. Just like my little town. I gulped, trying hard not to think of it…[Read more]
Yeah I guess ( 🙁 ) but keep it so that when Mac does kill the teacher you can just copy/paste it in (that was amazing though~!).
I mean keep it in a file or something, not keep it in the chapter no offense lol 😉
Okay, quick question (sorry if this sounds dumb lol) but how should Damiana get to the School for Good? Because I think the stymphs should only carry Readers to the school, so I was thinking that fairies would give Damiana her Flowerground Pass. Tell me if I’m wrong because I was very descriptive…[Read more]
Hmmm…. we could create a different express that takes Nevers to the school or something. But whatever works. 🙂
Like the Deminted Express or The Devil Express or something just cool!
@fairytalegirl123 OH! You’re right! Well, looks like I’ll have to rewrite my chapter xD
Idk I tried. It’s a bit short.
Altered Souls: Chapter 1
Mackenzie’s POV: 1
Mackenzie was having a pretty good time. She had just got a good fire in the firepit going, she had food and water; everything was going pretty well.
And her only friend, Damiana, was coming any minute.
But that…[Read more]
Great chapter! Mine isn’t done yet but I will try to get it finished soon!!!!!!!!
I am going to get rid of the little part on mine, and fix it a bit, and then I will post it here again. (Just thought you guys would like to know!)
Ok it is a little shorter, but I thought you might want to see the end:
I was carried into the sky, my eyes closed. What was going to happen? I shook my head. Do not panic, I reminded myself. The creature sailed across the sky, flying over buildings and small little farms. Just like my little town. I gulped, trying…[Read more]
Great job! Yeah, maybe Dana, Athena, Damiana and Vivian (that’s the character I made up) could room together.
Mackenzie can probs room with the Everboy opposer. Whose opposer is that, btw? I know Mackenzie’s is Athena, but who took the Everboy?
Is there any characters that you guys want me to do? I am good with Athena if there is no one else. 🙂
You are very welcome!!!!!!!!!! I love the last name Moore and it just popped into my head!
Well I could take Boy 3 if no one wants him! But whatever works!!!!!!!
Okay so how about Alex (Damiana’s opposer in Good, @fairytalegirl123) can room with Mac. 😉
Here’s my chapter:
COLORS WHIRLED ALL AROUND Damiana, blinking and flashing and dizzying her until she felt like a spin top. Her head pulsed and her eyes crossed trying to adjust to the whir of commotion. Her hair blew into her face and she desperately tucked it repeatedly behind her ear. Beside her, Mac (currently in boy form) screamed like a,…[Read more]
That is okay!!!!!!! I would struggle a lot if I had to do it in third person! It would not have been my best work, if I had to. 😉
I do not think you have to fix it………….. Because fairytalegirl did third person…………. But whatever you think works best! @elysianne said that she wanted to take Boy 3, so I thought maybe we all could explain things to her. (I am not always the best at explaining things……..) 😉 😉 😀
Sorry! I bet it is still AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!! (And also, okay I just want to make sure of this………. So are we going to post each of our chapters separately or do you want to like have a sort of mix? I could post my chapter first or however you guys would like to roll with it. I just do not want our readers to get bored or anything!)
Okay, so tell me if I miss anything…
@elysianne Our RP is going to focus mainly on a trio. They are Damiana, Mackenzie, and Xayah. People think they are just your average students at SGE, but really they are working for the exiled prince (if you want a more detailed summary read the above chat posts and prologue… sorry if it’s long) to steal…[Read more]
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is right!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will try to see if she needs any help with naming him or anything, on our little Chat. (And for the opposer, is it going to be a girl or boy? We could come up with a name or something…….. Just so they are not known just as it). @emmal , you can go first, and then maybe @fairytalegirl123 , and…[Read more]
Emmal, the only thing that I would add to the summary is that I took Boy 2.
By Boy 2 do you mean Mac?
Or do you mean someone else? Sorry I’m babbling now 😉
Actually sorry, nvm, I just reread Caramel’s outline of the story (it seems like such a long time since she put that together, lol) and yeah, @elysianne, Fairytale you took Boy 2 in Evil. That’s Logan Aspen Moore right? 😉
Alright great work everyone! I only have a suggestion for @emmal maybe take me out of your Pov because if anyone who reads the story read Xayah’s bio they’ll know that Damiana, Xayah, and Mackenzie are up to something and it’ll give away the suspense. And there are 5 people on the opposing team and the 3 people in Evil are Xayah’s opposers with a…[Read more]
So does that mean don’t tag you? Okay 😉 I could always tag you in the comments and it would not appear in your mentions 😉
Hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂 I am glad you found our chat!!!!!!!!!! 😀
@elysianne Great! Hi!!!!! 😀 You will take the minor teachers and students, and Girl 3, a girl who is in Evil and is one of Xayah’s opposers if that is fine with you.
I would suggest reading my summary for you above and the pov’s we already posted. Also it would help to read all of the previous posts, but since there are like 200+ so you might…[Read more]
Hello Altered Souls!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just wanted to check on how everything is going! @elysianne if you need any help with anything, I am glad to help!!!!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀
Sure. (Not to sound bossy but just double check you edited everything out or added stuff that you think needs to be edited out or added. And don’t forget to take Xayah out please so the readers won’t suspect something too soon lol). This is the order I think we should post our chapters in for the beginning of the story (right now). Tell me if you…[Read more]
Sorry for not responding! Emmal, you can go ahead and post the chapter. I’ve been in a non-writing mood lately and have been busy with camp (which leaves me exhausted each weekday).
Okay, but I think I’ll post it tomorrow because not a lot of people are on at night (it’s nighttime for me right now) so people might not read it if I post it now. 😉
Well actually people are on. We have a lot of people from different time zones inour forum. Btw I’m not used to writing a chapter or story based at SGE so I’m having a little writer’s block with Xayah’s first chapter.
@caramelprincess if you need any help, I would gladly!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have not had writer’s block in some time! Maybe you should just take a little break from the chapter and do things that you enjoy or take a walk and try not concentrating on the chapter! You might get a spark and then BAM you are writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂
All right, so I’m adding on a teeny bit to the end of Mackenzie’s POV. Is it okay if I make up a character to be the third roommate like Emmal did with Vivian and Demigod with Dana?
Actually, can I use the boy whose rose Athena caught? My placeholder name is Christopher but feel free to change it Demigod (if you let me use him, that is).
@fairytalegirl123 We could have Alex, Damiana’s opposer, room with Mac if you like.
And I thought Athena caught Mac’s rose?
Ok guys, so I want to tell you this: In a few days or so, I am going to start a adventure novel for school. It is going to take a year and it is most likely going to exhaust me sometimes and leave me with less time to write. I can still do Athena’s POV and stuff, I just might not be able to do as much as I want to. 🙂
@thedemigod1112 Oh, that’s perfectly okay! As long as you contribute SOMETHONG (which you already have contributed a LOT), you are fine! 😀
@thedemigod1112 We are so glad to have you as our collabmate as well. 🙂 You are so nice and awesome and an amazing writer!!!!!
Okay I’m a little confused now about the Christopher thing. Can everyone make a list of who’s Povs they’re writing, and who the roomates for their main character is going to be.
Girl in evil
and the Exiled Prince
I have not made up the roommates yet.
Okay Caramel!! Here’s my list:
MAIN CHARACTER: Damiana Larson–Good
ROOMMATES: Vivian, Athena, Dana
OPPOSER: (I’m writing for him also) Alexander “Alex” Tobias Washington
ROOMMATES: Christopher (what should his last name be?), Mackenzie (@fairytalegirl123‘s character), and @elysianne is coming up with the last roommate right?
Hope this cleared thi…[Read more]
Athena – Writing POV (I could also do some of Dana’s POV if needed)
Room mates: Dana, Vivian, Damiana
I think that is basically all. 🙂
@elysianne Awww, that’s okay!
And if the reason you’re dropping out is that you don’t think you have contributed anything, you contributed a lot just by joining! We LOVED having you here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But I TOTALLY understand if you are toi busy for RPs. School’s starting in like a week for me, and I won’t be too free to write…[Read more]
@elysianne No problem, Isa. But everything we said was true. 😉 😀 🙂
Okay so I finally finished Mackenzie’s POV! Tell me what you think so I can post it please. 🙂
Altered Souls: Chapter 2
Mackenzie’s POV: 1
Mackenzie was having a pretty good time. She had just got a good fire in the firepit going, she had food and water; everything was going pretty…[Read more]
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know that it has been a long wait and things, but it was still worth it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
Okay, so I know that @elysianne and it is not her fault, so what are we going to do about the characters she was going to do? Are we going to take turns or something?
Like each of us taking turns POVing for side characters.
Ok, is it okay if I post the next chapter, or do you want me to wait? I am ready to do it now, but I guess we could wait till tomorrow or something if you want me to……………….
Okay guys, this is our tag list (I won’t out the @ so they can’t see this):
* : We weren’t sure if you wanted to be tagged. If you don’t, feel free to tell us and…[Read more]
Yep!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀 I’ll do it tonight if that is fine. 🙂
Posted it. 🙂 Mine is not as good, as the rest of yours……… But I hope everyone still enjoys it!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOSH I JUST TYPED A LONGGGGGGGG PARAGRPAH AND I THINK I ACCIDENTLY DELETED IT WHEN I WAS TRYING TO REPLY TO MY OWN COMMENT. IT’S ALMOST 2 AM I HAVE NO TIME FOR THIS.
Sorry had a little breakdown there lol. I’m not re-typing everything so I’ll number all that topics that I said because I’m too tired to retype an 8-10 paragraph comment.…[Read more]
Ok I am going to try to get through typing this……….. And I hope you got some sleep Caramel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think that we could keep the others (Dana, etc) and maybe make them main????? I don’t know if it will get confusing or anything, but I am already attached to the room mates. But whatever you all think. 🙂
I can try to…[Read more]
That’s not true, you are a fine writer, we all are. I don’t think we should have 11+ main characters but if that’s what you want to do. Were Vivian and Dana extra characters y’all made up to be the to be the roommates of Mac And Athena. I forgot that you won’t be writing as much Povs for Athena as we will for the Trio members. As a compromise you…[Read more]
I just think that I am not as good at painting pictures as you all. But I guess that is how I write. 🙂
Hmmmmm…………… Dana was an extra character I made up and I think Vivian was too. But yeah since I would not be writing as many POVs, I would love to have Dana as something important to the story. She could die to save someone or…[Read more]
The characters of Dana, Vivian, Christopher and Tam were created as characters to room with the trio, I think. Tam and Chris were definitely, though. (Alexander is Damiana’s opposer as well as a roommate to Mackenzie.) I don’t think we were ever going to POV for these characters? Emmal suggested that we POV for side and minor characters every once…[Read more]
I agree with you, Caramel; this will be complicated if we add too many side characters. However, I think we should keep Dana/Vivian/Christopher/Tam, but limit their POV’s to create a more realistic vibe. For example Soman added Reena and Millicent and those people but they aren’t main characters. 😉 Also because lol yes I’ve grown attached to them…[Read more]
Okay so we’ll keep those characters. Hopefully I won’t keep getting confused lol. We can have those characters for like one-sided Povs, like your characters make dialogue with them but we don’t do Povs specifically for those characters? So like Mac could talk to Tam in Mac’s Pov but we don’t make Povs for Tam. (Excluding the character Demigod…[Read more]
🙂 Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah. I agree, we should limit their POV’s unless it’s crucial to the plot we have to do it. 🙂 And sorry to be rushing you but @thedemigod1112 do you know which character you want to write for, other than Athena? 😀
@thedemigod1112 You can pick whichever character you feel close to (personality wise, etc.) and that you think might contribute that little something to the plot. 😉 Whatever decision you make we are fully behind you!!!!!!!!!!! 😀
Could I do the one @elysianne was going to do? Xayah’s opposer or do you want him Caramel? I can do the Prince or whatever…………
Hi guys! I have a huge idea here but feel free to ignore it.
Soooo here it is: I think we should consider maybe publishing this collab. It’s a great, complex, well-written, unique story. And it’d be a unique book, too; it’s told in the point of view of the villains, it’s got diverse characters and it’s written by children! It has lots of…[Read more]
That. Sounds. Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I have never published a book before.
No offense, (I know you said to be honest 🙂 ) but maybe we could tweak the replacement for SGE a bit. 🙂 This way it won’t be like we just did an RP and changed the things that would get us into copyright trouble. 😉
Even though that’s what we did…[Read more]
@fairytalegirl123 No, I didn’t mean that, I love your idea!!! I was just saying we should fine-tune the details if the other two agree. 😉 Yes, getting rid of the school would be hard to do lol.
Hmm..I like the concept. But we’d have to have a whole lot of time to do this and school is starting back up and I’m not going to be homeschooled this year so I won’t have that much time on my hands. Idk about anyone else. Second, I feel like we would need to first plan and lay out everything before we could even think about getting it published.…[Read more]
Okay @caramelprincess I like with your idea. We could wait until Altered Souls is finished, done, voila, then see if it is good enough for publication (with lots of tweaking).
Maybe then you’ll be on summer vacation and have more time. Because I agree with you; we still have a lot of work to do if we want to get it published. If we don’t think…[Read more]
*Just realized I said “I like with your idea” lol. XD What I meant to say was I like your idea. Whoops sorry ahhahaha. 🙂
Okay. I’m fine with that. 🙂 I have school soon too, and it’s gonna be my first year of Middle School so I’ll probably be pretty busy too…
We’ve been in school for a week now (it is Saturday night for us). 🙂
I only went to middle school for two years. Thank goodness, we homeschooled. I really would be different. I would have thought my looks are better than my thoughts and dreams. I would have chased after boys and had TONS of boyfriends. I would be gossipy and mean. (Nothing against you all. But people would have pressured me and I do not have the…[Read more]
*when you realize you are the youngest in your collab group: 😮 *
Alrighty Caramel! I am working on Alex’s bio. Any ideas for his fairytale lineage?
@thedemigod1112 Right. 🙂
Also guys, as I said before; any ideas for Alex’s fairytale lineage?
XD no Emma, be certain that I’m younger than you. My middle school starts in fifth grade (that should basically tell you my age lol). I have this week, then Sunday, then Labor Day then I have school…
Alex’s fairytale lineage? Well it kinda depends on what you were planning for his personality to be like. I imagined him as this cool, easygoing,…[Read more]
Then again, he’s your character so it’s really up to you.
Alex is Damiana’s opposer.
@fairytalegirl123 I imagined him as modest, shy, and kind of nerdy (but lol yes rich), basically the opposite of Damiana lol. 🙂
For Alex’s bio all I need is fairytale lineage and a backstory. 🙂 If you guys have writer’s block maybe I could post that next? Dunno because it usually takes me a long time to think of fairytale lineages/backstories. 😉
Ehh, maybe for fairytale lineage he can be the grandson of Belle or something?? Since they both love to read?
Fairytale lineage for Alex? And yeah we have been quite inactive lately. quite apologize for that, schools has been running me Down and I’ve been suffocating under homework. Like I’m really serious. Anyways i.hope school has been okay for everyone..I’ll try to be on more hard with all this homework.
Sooooooooo… any ideas?
–copy/pasting from my other post ’cause I’m too lazy to paraphrase, lol:
Ehh, maybe for fairytale lineage he can be the grandson of Belle or something?? Since they both love to read?
I agree that’s not very original Nat, you’re right maybe I could come up with fairytale lineage as I did with Damiana. And feel free to give me some ideas, those will be appreciated!! 😀
Hey guys! This has been um….. Barely on for a while.
Yeah this RP had so much…..
I think you should Lana! I mean I have so much going on in my life, but I could try to write a bio for my other character maybe…..
Take your time! I have tons of projects going on right now, so I understand but we do need to keep this up….
It’s yo boi Fairytale
Emma’s back, Demigod and Caramel!
This is the complete finished chapter. The ones that read part 1 of chapter 4 just skip half of this and go to the end to find “part 2”.
Conjoined Destinies Chapter 5- Eldria’s POV
Story: Legends of Eldria chapter 4
@heilnofheltia @iskrl1 @espilce
Previously on Legends of Eldria:
Besides the fact that ever since then there have been rumors of…[Read more]
Great job Caramel! Also, all the @fathead posts are gone. Did you get rid of them? If so, thanks! It was getting really annoying 😛
She doesn’t have the power to get rid of them. She’s really just a user, but she tries to help keep order. Joann is the only admin.
Application season for the Welcome Committee is opennn!!
Those that I choose this time will be the “Junior” WC because the Seniors were the first ones and they’ll be doing stuff a little differently then you all. Okay anyways for those of you who want to apply follow the guidelines below.
1.) Explain in complete sentences why you think you’re g…[Read more]
This sounds like a great idea!
By the way, Caramel, would it be okay if the Elder Judges’ welcomes were also treated in the same way as the WC’s welcomes? You know, the usual rules: no welcomes other than one approved welcome per post. Obviously, the “approved welcomes” category has expanded to accommodate the Welcoming Committee exclusively. I…[Read more]
Hi! Here’s my application.
Q: Why do you think you would be good for the job as a WC member?
A: Well, I’d like to help people get settled in here. I know the feeling of being new and a bit lost; I understand that it can be a bit disorientating.
I’m on here a lot of the days, even if I don’t post.
I am quite picky with my grammar – I tend to…[Read more]
Hi! Here’s my application!
Q) Explain in complete sentences why you think you’re good for the “job” of becoming a WC member.
A) I understand that being new is sometimes hard or confusing. I would love to be part of the WC because I love to help new people on this website and show them the ‘ropes’ so they can have lots of fun here and feel a part…[Read more]
Thank you all for your applications. I really appreciate it. I have decided to pick @cutepie1mint. I meant to add in this post that I had already made up my mind about picking you because you have all the qualities of a WC member, anyways please don’t feel rushed to be on because you are part of the WC now. Take all the time you need considering…[Read more]
Thanks! @kittyraven, I think you did great and when you’ve been a little longer and have a bit more experience, I’m sure you’ll make a brilliant WC member. Apologies for not commenting before now, I’ve been quite busy…
Hello, haven’t been on as much as I could. My house burned down 2 days ago and I was the only one in it at the time. The fire was horrible, we lost basically everything. Also, we don’t have anywhere else to go so yeahhhhh been dealing with that. But that’s not what I came to tell you. Once I find another charger to my laptop (the other one is…[Read more]
I feel you. My family moves a lot. I really hope that your family will find housing soon.:)
I hope you’re recovering well after the fire! Also is there certain guidelines for being in the WC? I’ve only been RPing for a short amount of time but I would love to help new people on this site 😉
I hope everyone is OK and that your family will find a new home soon
Oh I’m sorry about the fire… How many WC members are there going to be?
Oh, that’s terrible!
I hope you and your family ok, and you find housing soon.
What’s the additional stuff for the WC to know? I fell like I’ve missed something.
Thanks for the information though. 🙂
OMG I’m so sorry for you…
I really hope you and you’re family’s OK, and you get a new house soon; that has to be really tough. Looking forward to the post, but no rush.
That’s terrible! I hope you get another house soon. I hope you’re okay, and haven’t lost too much. Do NOT stress on posting soon.
But thanks for posting that 🙂
OMG that must of been so scary i had a night mare that that happend to me im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry to hear that i cant imagin haveing my house burnt down thats so bad i hope you finde a house i hope your ok and have no injuriese that would be worse and you being alone thats extra scary i hope your family is ok to
Hey CP! I’m a bit of a newie here and I heard you’re the Clearing’s elder, so could you show me the ropes?
I am very sorry for you! I hope you find a good home and get well.
Thank you all! Yea we lost everything and still haven’t gotten another house but we’re gonna be fine hopefully. I’ll be on my laptop hopefully tomorrow so I’ll try to open up Applications for the WC then. I’ll tell you the guidelines then and I’m really only planning on picking at least 3 more people to join the other at the moment. And Dot you…[Read more]