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Hi, I made an rp called Mama Seeks check it out if you want to
Chapter one is here feedback is always welcome hope you enjoy tell me if you want to be tagged and I will tag you for Chapter 2 anyways enjoy 🙂
Scarlet hated pink and everything good. Her mother was the evil queen. Her mother was all about looks but she didn’t really care about l…[Read more]
Rooms and people
“Jamie” I hear someone call from from below. I sit down and write something down. I walk over to my brother and kick him. He looks at me then knows.
“Jamie isn’t here!” He calls down. I look up at him and wink. I go into a secret room in my closet. I start reading hoping mi mi doesn’t find me.
Chapter 7 is out!!!!!! feedback welcome hope you enjoy! 🙂
Hades and glow
“I didn’t mean to do it. I didn’t mean to use my power” I say
“I TOLD YOU NOT TO USE IT!” Hades yells. I try waking up but I can’t unless he wakes me up.
I look at him wishing he would just wake me up.
“Wake up” I cry. Just wanting to go back to my fr…[Read more]
a little be about Eve the Pov for my next chapter
Appearance:short Brown hair that changes to blue when mad she wears her favorite jacket all the time
Likes: Alex, graveyards, and black
Dislikes: anyone kind, anyone who mean to her coven, rainbows, and any show that talks about the power of friendship and how it…[Read more]
Chapter 6 is here!!!!! (sorry it wasn’t out yesterday got tried of writing so I drew mostly yesterday) I Always enjoy feedback it helps me become a better writer. Hope you enjoy!!!
I was alone most of my life in the woods dreaming about going to the school for evil. So I fill out the application and hope…[Read more]
Chapter 5 is here hope you enjoy please tell me give me feedback it helps a lot
powers and talents
When I wake up I hear Eve throwing up. I jump out of bed wondering what happened.
“Look at you loser” I hear Olivia say.
“She’s not a loser! Leave her alone” I yell. I notice Eve fell asleep. I walk over to her.
“Go get…[Read more]
you improved so much!!! well done!! you added slightly more detail, hooked us in more (sorry school gives me these annoying vocabularies XD), and concealed things, keeping it secretive and intesting! i cant wait for some real drama and improvement 🙂 great story. i would only say you could possibly describe the way people talk and be less…[Read more]
New character In my rp coming soon
Personality: kind, nice, Brave, hard working, stubborn but in a good way
Appearance: has red hair pale skin wears shorts and a t-shirt but wear her cloak with it
Finger glow: blue
Talent: can Levitate objects and herself
Strengths: is good with bows and throwing…[Read more]
oh I forgot I am Alex daughter of maleficent first year never
chapter 4 is Here Feedback helps alot hope you enjoy
My father never really liked me knowing the powers I gained from him. He didn’t want to have a child in the first place. I learned to use my powers though concealing my power away until I have to use it. People think blue flames are my power but that’s my small…[Read more]
ok so, here is my constructive criticism. Your writing at the moments feels like nothing but exposition, and not only that but unnecessary exposition. So many little details you gave could’ve been slowly foreshadowed before being revealed later on. You don’t need to tell people every little detail about your story straight away. It would’ve been…[Read more]
Ok thanks that will help a lot for the next chapter :)! do you want me to tag you?
i sorta agree with GWEN, but theres otehr things. your skiping in time too much, and adding like no detail. if you want to get better, you haev to seize these opportunities. like first classes, meeting other people and so on. you also should describe characters a little more, and i would grip people more, hook them in. youneeed to start with…[Read more]
No it’s ok the more feedback there is the better I can write my story now I can make my next chapter better also would you like to be tagged?
I know this isn’t that important but do hester and anadil like like each other
I don’t think they do, its likely that in the scene where they were in the tent or whatever, they were just looking or a break from everything, I think Soman was trying to show that even Nevers aren’t ‘oh so tough’.
@cat2020 I really think that they don’t, they were just tired and stressed out. and, I don’t really think that Evil can love, given the Uhm, the whole series. but I would love to be proved wrong bc I am not liking that opinion, but just from the general facts… anyways, I really don’t think they do, because they both claim that “ Evil can’t…[Read more]
my opinion is evil can love because of sophie and agatha but I still don’t know if hester and anadil like like each other
@Cat2020, I wholeheartedly ship Hestadil. Always have, always will. ❤️
Soman has said on the site and entv that hestadil is canon
for god’s sake, stop using this as an argument!! The word ‘canon’ means it’s IN THE BOOK, and hestadil wasn’t in the book. doesn’t matter if soman says it’s canon.
It WAS in the book. Qfg campfire scene. SOMAN HAS SAID SO
So basically if two characters are just randomly sitting together, they’re dating?!?!
SOMAN, THE AUTHOR SAID SO HIMSELF. You commented on the post!!!
THEY ARE TOGETHERRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And it is important😏
Honestly if Hestadil happens in OTK I’m going to be really disapoointed in the book
@raynaevil809 will you share your reasons? I would like to know your pov
Ehhhh…. I’d rather not but if you insist.
Hestadil is one of the worst ships ever because it has absolutely no real base and it’s just a bold claim fans have made. Just because someone’s sitting with each other doesn’t mean they’re a couple. And if Soman wanted them to be a couple he would’ve stopped referring to them as “best friends” about…[Read more]
@raynaevil809 thank you also my crush (who likes me back) went out and we referred to each other as best friends because we didn’t want people to know
uhh…. because im JEALOUS?! my crush wished me a slow and painful death once.
hah i have a crush on my straight enemy. BUT SHE ISNT MY ENEMY ANYMOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WERE LIKE KINDA FRIENDS NOW AND IM LIKE SUPER HAPPY
yeah whats wrong with that? and there are two girls in my grade who were best friends. they started dating but they still refer to themselves as a couple AND best friends
LGBTQ+ is the future. @urmomisamom I miss you and hope you see this
i agree, even though i don’t ship them, only from the fact that i just don’t think that their personality is like that, i totally think it is possible that they could be a thing. not a lgbt+ hater, i am one of em myself. just clarifying so ppl think im a hater, lol.
also, the tEA in these comments. okay, I suppose I must spill some. i used to like pretty much all of the people who bullied me. I’m just- idek. that was like, 3rd grade and 1st though. but my crush has liked me since the first grade and we still s t r o n g.
Ummm raynaevil809 no offence but u should probs get a new crush!
So a lot of people are disagreeing with this ship but I win most of the school debates and… ….HESTER AND ANADIL LOVE EACH OTHER AND DESERVE NOTHING BUT HAPPINESS AND IF YOU CANT ACCEPT THAT RE READ THE BOOKS BEFORE ONE TRUE KING IS OUT AND IF YOU STILL CANNOT ACCEPT THE GREATEST SHIP IN HISTORY- (the comment got to violent to continue). So the…[Read more]
Btw I loved that speech it basically summed up what I’m thinking about at all times
I’m so happy based on your choice of literature alone this just shows that there are others like me.
I’m sorry, but I win EVERY fight I ever get in and I myself and a ENTP-T, so let the debate begin.
Agatha, Sophie, and Dot also have a nickname for Anadil, so that’s not a valid argument.
The campfire scene? I would do that with any of my friends but I’m 100% straight.
They are not seperated, why would you think that?
STOP OBSESSING OVER THIS. There are 50 comments. I don’t understand shipping and I never will. I am pretty sure that they are just really good friends. Everyone just STOP.
You again skylark14 I just asked you to at least give me Hester and anadil
It’s good to have a lot of comments — It means people are passionate about the book! <33
Look, guys, we really shouldn’t be fighting over this. Hestadil is canon, that is a fact, but if someone doesn’t like it, we shouldn’t be attacking them.
This fandom used to be so peaceful before people started attacking each other’s opinions, and it can still be that way. If only we’d just agree to disagree.
If someone really doesn’t l…[Read more]
Dounutqueen11 you are probably a better soul than Agatha and I’m a never
You’re sweet, @Bookgir097; I’ve just been around for a while. ❤️
What do you have to be sorry for, @Poprocks? I didn’t think you did anything wrong. My comment was in no way directed at you.
Ahh, I see! Well, @Poprocks, we all make mistakes from time to time; what’s important is that we learn from them. ❤️
holy, i literally have so many notifications. it comes down to OTK, and if i have to be honest with you guys, i might have gone to the book store today and sat in there for twenty minutes reading the first four chapters of OTK in the paperback Crystal of Time- anyways, the first chapter was The coven and I can guarantee that everybody was just mad…[Read more]
@Raynaevil809, I wasn’t talking about this situation alone. I may have read a few comments the wrong way, but this isn’t the first time something like this has happened.