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So sorry I haven’t posted in a few weeks. So much homework and swim and yeah. But here’s the next chapter
From the start of the first day, the other girls divided into cliques. Even at breakfast, there were boundaries. For example, An was invited to sit with a diverse group of girls who only had one thing in common: they were all…[Read more]
Very nice chapter!! But it would help if you labeled who’s POV (point of view) it’s in at the beginning of your chapters. But nice job!
If it’s first person from your character’s point of view, then yes, that would help.
I sneak out in the middle of the night. I don’t go far, just to the bathroom in between our dorm and the one next to it. This is, however just far enough for my roommates not to be able to hear me. I pull out the black velvet drawstring bag I brought with me and I pull a crystal vial out of that. I unstopper the vial and l let my…[Read more]
An sits down at the desk by her newly claimed bed, “Thanks so into guys!” Then she peers in the mirror, pushing back a few strands of her glossy, straight hair. The cosmetics on her desk immediately shift, transforming into colors more suitable for her skin tone and hair color. she lets out a little ‘oh’ of surprise, clearly not used to…[Read more]
“C-Cassie,” I stutter out, “short for Cassandra” which truly is my name or a part of it. Mother-or the witch-, as you’d call her-would yell it at me, it was always Rapunzel Cassandra this or Rapunzel Cassandra that. I suppose even isolated captives that you pretend are your daughter need middle names.
Mya nods once and turns back to An…[Read more]
So um, I haven’t posted in a while and I’ve kind of given up on my old roleplay. I do have a new one though and I’m hoping this is the one that I keep going. I’m not going to do a character profile, I’m just going to dive right in. But first, here’s my story idea/plot. There’s mention of Rapunzel going to the School for Good and Evil, but she…[Read more]
Nice chapter! This is such a great idea with Rapunzel. I love it! 🙂
I’ve officially known Kassi and Hinden for 4 days, in fact, we’re at lunch right now. In that time they have not: asked me to sneak them to see one another, asked me to do homework, or thrown me in the moat (it has happened before). However, they have: talked to me every day, despite being an Ever, Hinden snuck out after curfew to see me, and Kas…[Read more]
Very nice! But what chapter is this, and what Pov (point of view) is this in?
Nice job! Also I have the same questions as @evilerruler845 . So remember to label your chapters with the number chapter it is, the name of the chapter, the name of your story and who’s POV it is. 😉
It was the summer break, I was 13 and still longing for a friend. Then I met him. His name was Gio, and he was a golden boy. A perfect Ever. Tall, tan, handsome, and good with a sword. But not smart. He was barely passing all his academic classes, which is when he noticed me.
I was so happy, so grateful that someone noticed me that I…[Read more]
Cool chapter! Plz tag me! And who’s Pov is this in? Just remember to tell us, the readers, what Pov it is in whenever you post a new chapter in this story. Good job, though!
Double whammy! 2nd tonight! Yay!
Hinden and Kassi regard me cooly (Kassi more so than Hinden). “What do you mean, neither?” demands Kassi. I take a deep breath. I’ve had this explanation ready for years, just waiting for someone to ask for it.
“So, you know the gate? The one separating the 2 schools? My father is the gatekeeper. We keep student…[Read more]
In my 1st chapter, I made 2 new characters, so here’s the info on them.
Character Profile: Hinden/Kassi
School: Hinden is an Ever, Kassi is a Never
Physical appearance: Tall and blond, athletic build, but still slender. Hinden has electric blue eyes, Kassi has storm blue eyes. Kassi is slightly taller. Kassi is o…[Read more]
The new Evil and Good students are all in the theatre for Castor and Pollux’s introduction speech. You can tell which one the Woods Beyond students are because they have this horrified expression on their faces as they take in the duo. The fairytale students will be used to stuff like this, considering that their parents may even be h…[Read more]