Ok, before I posted this on level 1, but now I’ll post it on here. I totally understand if you ignore this, but I made my first doc role-play, and I need a few more people to play the male characters, and it would mean so much if you took a look at…[Read more]
Hi guys! I made my first roleplaying doc, so please check it out! It means so much to me! But I totally get it if you think it’s super weird and never think twice about it.
Heres the link! Comment if you have trouble with it.
Hi! If you were in Ash Gardens roleplaying doc, I’m Summer and Jonah. I’m having difficulty getting back on, just letting you all know, I know it’s unrelated to this, but I’m trying, ok?!?!?
Well, it seems like it’s in the trash so we made a copy we can work on until the owner can take it out of trash. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_EqyKhWmbjEI1d48D1nJEtxZka0IK6hVv4gwpq-jPp4/edit
Also, I realized I never posted a template for Belle, so here it is!
Name: Belle of Jaunt Jolie
Looks: medium-length wavy brown hair, pale skin, 5 foot 6, very beautiful and vivid green eyes.
Personality: Doesn’t want a prince, negative, doesn’t actually have a real personality or feelings.
Flaws: As far as looks go, none.…[Read more]
I know I haven’t posted this in four days, I’m sorry! Everyone’s advice was so helpful, so thank you! I still really appreciate people reading my writing, it lights me up inside to know that people care about this. I still really appreciate all constructive criticism! Also I’m looking for a name for my story, so please comment!
Hi everyone! Thank you SO much to @bookworm87654321 and @ivypool2005! You’re advice was super helpful! I know I’m a totally new writer, so my stories aren’t that good, so I really appreciate anyone who reads them! If you read this, please give me advice, also I’m looking for a name for the story!
Walking down the hall with Willow, Belle…[Read more]
this is really cool, but maybe add how willow met her and who she was impersonating
First of all, I’d suggest writing your stories in paragraphs. It would really help break up the story and make it more manageable to read.
Hello everyone! I’m currently writing a story on role-play level 0. But I’m restless, So I’ll also be writing another story on here!
Belle knew she was lucky. Her family had gone to the School for Good since the very beginning. Actually, starting with Belle, as in Beauty and the Beast. Belle looked a lot like Belle, too. She had…[Read more]
Okay, a completely cliche princess from the description. What sets her apart? What makes her stand out? How is Belle any different from Beatrix or Reena or Millicent? What are her struggles? Her challenges? Her dreams and desires? If you could sum up your story in one sentence, what would it be? Figure that out, and writing will be a breeze.…[Read more]
I should mention that though your plot and story design can be improved, your craft as a writer is excellent. You’re incredibly descriptive and is written with an enjoyable voice. An awesome story needs both craft and plot, and you’ve definitely got the first part down.
Thank you! That was actually super helpful! I am trying to make her more like Reena or Millicent, but less.. Feeling. What sets her out is that she does care that people only like her for what she looks like. She doesn’t believe in true Happy Endings, or Love at First Sight.
Going off of @bookworm87654321’s comment, I would like to say that it’s totally fine not to have a sense of the main plot from the beginning. In fact, a lot of longer stories and books have some sort of miniplot before the real plot begins. I do agree that Belle’s conflict doesn’t quite feel like a big deal or something we should be sympath…[Read more]
thank you so much!! Like you said, I don’t usually give my characters much in the first part, I just try to give the reader the basic sense, but my writing will get so much better because of you! So seriously, thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!
Hi guys! I really apologize for the shortness of chapter 2! Or paragraph 2…. Anyways, here is part 2 chapter 2!!!!! Happy April Fools day!
Angel. What a perfect name for her. You could practically see the halo, floating just above her marble-like horns. That was her only imperfection. The only thing that made her not… perfect…[Read more]
Also, if anyone wants to do the next bit from Angel’s view, please comment! I’ll tell you her backstory, talent, secrets, etc
Hello! I like your story. To tag ppl tho, put an “@” symbol in front of thier username. Like this: @arcticsorcerer
Chapter 2 of Asla’s story!!! If you have any suggestions or criticism (Please don’t be to harsh), I’d love to hear it! Also comment if you want to be tagged!
“Watch where you’re going, freak!” The horned girl growled at her. “S-sorry!” Asla answered. Just Great. She’d barely set foot upon school grounds and she was already making enemies.…[Read more]