causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 5 months, 4 weeks ago

    Ok, before I posted this on level 1, but now I’ll post it on here. I totally understand if you ignore this, but I made my first doc role-play, and I need a few more people to play the male characters, and it would mean so much if you took a look at…[Read more]

        causeimonlyhumane replied 5 months, 4 weeks ago

        okay, we need one more person to have a male character!

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 6 months ago

    Hi guys! I made my first roleplaying doc, so please check it out! It means so much to me! But I totally get it if you think it’s super weird and never think twice about it.
    Heres the link! Comment if you have trouble with it.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/16AIAX20nUHvOcf6rLYd85y-Bksn1Kb9fSVt-2eR13ls/edit#

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 6 months ago

    Hi! If you were in Ash Gardens roleplaying doc, I’m Summer and Jonah. I’m having difficulty getting back on, just letting you all know, I know it’s unrelated to this, but I’m trying, ok?!?!?

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 6 months, 3 weeks ago

    Also, I realized I never posted a template for Belle, so here it is!
    Name: Belle of Jaunt Jolie
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Looks: medium-length wavy brown hair, pale skin, 5 foot 6, very beautiful and vivid green eyes.
    Personality: Doesn’t want a prince, negative, doesn’t actually have a real personality or feelings.
    Flaws: As far as looks go, none.…[Read more]

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 6 months, 3 weeks ago

    I know I haven’t posted this in four days, I’m sorry! Everyone’s advice was so helpful, so thank you! I still really appreciate people reading my writing, it lights me up inside to know that people care about this. I still really appreciate all constructive criticism! Also I’m looking for a name for my story, so please comment!
    When…[Read more]

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 6 months, 4 weeks ago

    Hi everyone! Thank you SO much to @bookworm87654321 and @ivypool2005! You’re advice was super helpful! I know I’m a totally new writer, so my stories aren’t that good, so I really appreciate anyone who reads them! If you read this, please give me advice, also I’m looking for a name for the story!
    Walking down the hall with Willow, Belle…[Read more]

        girds replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

        this is really cool, but maybe add how willow met her and who she was impersonating

        ivypool2005 replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

        First of all, I’d suggest writing your stories in paragraphs. It would really help break up the story and make it more manageable to read.

        causeimonlyhumane replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

        Ok, thank you both for your advice! It really means a lot!

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 7 months ago

    Hello everyone! I’m currently writing a story on role-play level 0. But I’m restless, So I’ll also be writing another story on here!
    Belle knew she was lucky. Her family had gone to the School for Good since the very beginning. Actually, starting with Belle, as in Beauty and the Beast. Belle looked a lot like Belle, too. She had…[Read more]

        bookworm87654321 replied 7 months ago

        Okay, a completely cliche princess from the description. What sets her apart? What makes her stand out? How is Belle any different from Beatrix or Reena or Millicent? What are her struggles? Her challenges? Her dreams and desires? If you could sum up your story in one sentence, what would it be? Figure that out, and writing will be a breeze.…[Read more]

          bookworm87654321 replied 7 months ago

          I should mention that though your plot and story design can be improved, your craft as a writer is excellent. You’re incredibly descriptive and is written with an enjoyable voice. An awesome story needs both craft and plot, and you’ve definitely got the first part down.

          causeimonlyhumane replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

          Thank you! That was actually super helpful! I am trying to make her more like Reena or Millicent, but less.. Feeling. What sets her out is that she does care that people only like her for what she looks like. She doesn’t believe in true Happy Endings, or Love at First Sight.

        ivypool2005 replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

        Going off of @bookworm87654321’s comment, I would like to say that it’s totally fine not to have a sense of the main plot from the beginning. In fact, a lot of longer stories and books have some sort of miniplot before the real plot begins. I do agree that Belle’s conflict doesn’t quite feel like a big deal or something we should be sympath…[Read more]

          causeimonlyhumane replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

          thank you so much!! Like you said, I don’t usually give my characters much in the first part, I just try to give the reader the basic sense, but my writing will get so much better because of you! So seriously, thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!

          causeimonlyhumane replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago

          Also, my main idea for her struggles: She’s reaching to see who she is, and who’s real. She ISN’T looking for a happily ever after like other girls, she’s looking to find out what you get when you take her beauty away from her.

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    Hi guys! I really apologize for the shortness of chapter 2! Or paragraph 2…. Anyways, here is part 2 chapter 2!!!!! Happy April Fools day!
    Angel. What a perfect name for her. You could practically see the halo, floating just above her marble-like horns. That was her only imperfection. The only thing that made her not… perfect…[Read more]

        causeimonlyhumane replied 7 months ago

        Also, if anyone wants to do the next bit from Angel’s view, please comment! I’ll tell you her backstory, talent, secrets, etc

          causeimonlyhumane replied 7 months ago

          Also, (This is going to make sense later) I’m planning to call this Unwritten Tales

        arcticsorcerer replied 7 months ago

        Hello! I like your story. To tag ppl tho, put an “@” symbol in front of thier username. Like this: @arcticsorcerer

          causeimonlyhumane replied 7 months ago

          ok thank you!!!!!

        causeimonlyhumane replied 7 months ago

        ok! so here are the people I tagged @BookwormIzzy @Sleepy

          arcticsorcerer replied 7 months ago

          Ur welcome 😊 but be sure to tag them in the actual post not in the comments or when they click on the “____ mentioned you” they won’t see the chapter

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    Chapter 2 of Asla’s story!!! If you have any suggestions or criticism (Please don’t be to harsh), I’d love to hear it! Also comment if you want to be tagged!
    “Watch where you’re going, freak!” The horned girl growled at her. “S-sorry!” Asla answered. Just Great. She’d barely set foot upon school grounds and she was already making enemies.…[Read more]

        anniej replied 7 months ago

        Yeah, this was pretty short, but it was better then your other one! And I would like to be tagged!!

          causeimonlyhumane replied 7 months ago

          ok, thank you! I wrote part 2 of chapter 2, so it wasn’t as short as just this…

    causeimonlyhumane posted an update 7 months ago

    Hello, if anyone was reading CauseImOnlyHuman’s writing, thats me! Please help me find my writing so everything makes sense for the next installment.