Hi I am new to this so if you don’t like the story please do not be harsh:
Mo was a runic prophet not a phony one from the fair a real life prophet and her latest premonition left her with a grim feeling settling in the pit of her stomach
As Mo watched her parents leave the docks of London a feeling of dread washed over her a feeling that she…[Read more]
This is really good, but remember to use capitals for the beginning of sentences. Also, has your character got a bio(graphy)?
i am 11
Hi! So I noticed that you have three short posts in a row, this tends to clog the chat and push things down. So it would be very helpful, if in the future, you can combine all those posts together, so they don’t push down other people’s writing. Like this:
I think I could be a good Sophie, my name is Emily please consider me. I would also rea…[Read more]