chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago

    hi here is the rest of my last chapter here goes nothing.

    Arics pov 2:

    why couldn’t it have been someone else? y can’t the school master or even hort or sophie be the other dean, In fact it would be almost as good if one of them took my place as dean instead. ” Manley get ur **** face out of my sight” ‘Geez calm down mom calm down”

    thats all…[Read more]

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        This is great! I don’t usually give constructive criticism, but since you asked, stray away from using β€˜text talk’ as my teacher put it, create a new line when someone is speaking, use a variation of full stops, commas, etc, use apostrophes for someone’s POV, and try to use more capital letters. Other than that, as I said, it was great!
        πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago

    I think that I should start again with Arics pov but from another part of book 3

    Arics pov:

    I have to be Dean of New typical!
    And just when i thought life couldn’t get any worse i was told who my partnering Dean was going to be guess who … Yep Lady Leonora Lesso AKA Mom yeah i know its a surprise that one of the best Deans of Evil ( wait…[Read more]

        everneverwhatsoever12 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        cool!

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Intriguing! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago

    chapter 2
    Arics pov

    chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago

    Soz about stopping in the middle of a sentence but I had to go and help my sister get ready any way

    I said β€œit was milky & blury but it had purple violet eyes like urs and a black sharp shouldered gown with black steel heeled leather boots also like urs
    actually I think it was u” and just like that I had told my mother that she was my NEM…[Read more]

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Interesting! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago

    Hiya again I’m gonna try the rest of my chapter so let’s get to it

    Chapter 1 part2
    Aric pov
    I told my mother what I had dreamt about and she went whiter then a sheet whiter then I
    Had ever seen her go and trust me she has gone real white be4 when I asked her what was wrong she just said aric love who did u see?

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Intriguing! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        sgefan0103 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Nice! I also like how it is short and sweet. Not a three hour chapter ( not that that’s a problem )

    chadick posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 7 months ago

    hi im gonna try to write my 1 chapter which is gonna be hard here goes nothing

    CHAPTER 1
    ARICS POV
    I HAD BEEN ON MY OWN FOR OVER 10 YEARS NOW ONLY SEEING MY MOTHER ONCE A DAY SOME TIMES EVEN LESS, WHEN ONE NIGHT I HAD A DREAM :IWAS PLAYING IN THE WOODS LIKE ALWAYS WHEN I SAW A WOMAN WITH RABBIT LIKE NOW I COME TO THINK ABOUT IT SHE LOOKED A…[Read more]

        chadick replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        SORRY IF I 4GOT SOM WORDS

        rickytabs replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        um… could use some fine tuning. A nice start though. I can give u some tips though. Tag me! @rickytabs

        thesgeturtle replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        :D!!!!!!!!!! Hi!!!! This sounds pretty good! Can you tag me too?

        sgefan0103 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        I love that you used Aric! He is a curious charecter. Arbed house, snake!? So much going on with him

        destinyfromthewoodsbeyond99 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Good try adding commas and apostrophes but it is really good tag me maybe read mine I like that little cliffhanger

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Aric’s very aggressive. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        Great chapter! Though… why all caps?

          emma16 replied 2 years, 6 months ago

          Was it just an accident?

    chadick posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 7 months ago

    The only reason my name is Chadick is coz I have like a huge crush on him

        chadick replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        Hiya

        rickytabs replied 2 years, 6 months ago

        um… have u read the 4th book? if not… oh no

    chadick posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 7 months ago

    Hi do any of you have any ideas on wat I should do first

        kiwishells replied 2 years, 7 months ago

        You could rp about a student entering SGE for the first time or from the POV of Agatha or one of the other characters but it’s up to you what you do πŸ™‚

          chadick replied 2 years, 7 months ago

          thanks a lot :}