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Chapter 5 (also I’m so dumb i forgot to put down a name for this rp so if anyone has a suggestion pls let me know thx 😉
Phoenix was poked,kicked,tripped and josled. “Watch it” she said Whit h a scowl. “Sorry”said the girl who tripped her.yea right she thought. why would anyone be sorry for her? Where where they going? she pondered. As if Natalie…[Read more]
Ok three more thing ****** are not cusses they are S ucked at the top and at the bottom it’s b loody also when it says (which she could) i forgot to put down mane so it should go (which maybe she could)
It was good! I liked it.
It was good! The one who caught her eye is her future princw! I can already tell😉😉
Yep. Most likely
Thx
Chapter 4
Phoenix awoke Whith a jolt. She moaned her back hurt. She must have slept in it the wrong way. “Finnaly sleepy head class starts in ten minutes” said Natalie.
“Oh”said phoenix. Phoenix got up and brushed her teeth,then her hair,then she got dressed,then she packed her bag, and finnaly she ate breakfast and went to her first clas-what…[Read more]
It was good! Really really short, but exited for the next chapter
Thx!
It was good! I liked it
Chapter 3
Phoenix sighed. She couldn’t believe that tonight she would leave her house for good. Tomorrow (if she was accepted and kidnaped) she would have to put up whith annoying evers. She went to the bathroom and brushed her teeth.then put on pajamas and jumped into bed. 30 minutes later she still couldn’t sleep. Midnight was coming in 2…[Read more]
Well, it was good, but everything happened a bit too fast, where was the book and uniform given?
It’s good, but make sure to check grammar
Ok sorry I am TERRIBLE at grammar lol
I hear you. I’m the same. I would be terrible without spell check
It was really good. And your fine about the grmmar thing i cant spell either
🙂
Sarah Jeffrey for reena
That would be cool, but she would probably also make a good Beatrix.
Are you still making a movie of the school for good evil?
Pls answer
It’s coming together, the movie-making process can be slow.
Alright chapter two
A hand slapped over Phoenix’s mouth from behind! “Mmmmmm”she tried to scream but couldn’t! In front of her was one member from 2 well known wanted criminals. Behind her she assumed it was the second criminal. “Your are coming Whit h us”said the bald one in front of her.” MMMMM” she tried to scream again.no luck. The guy…[Read more]
I accidentally submitted the post so…sorry for bad punctuation i was going to go over that when I was done anyway let me know if you want to be tagged
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Nice! Although, Anadil appeared out of nowhere….
Chapter one
Phoenix awoke sweating.she couldn’t breath! Gasping for air,she got out of bed. And walked over to her mirror across the room. More nightmares. It always went the same, she would be running,running from her mother’s demon her mother shrieking: you filthy child.(she never knew what she had done in the dream) And just as she was struck…[Read more]
That was soo good great job! maybe you will become a great writer like soman someday!!
It was good! Keep up the good work
Thank you so much!
Yikes, Phoenix… cool chapter!! a tiny suggestion: use proper grammar!! also you can do more paragraph breaks so we know in the story which character is speaking and so our eyes can adjust to the words more easily. overall, good job! 🙂
Thx I’m bad at punctuation
It was so good. Is her mom hester? I assuming she is bc of the demon
Yes, her mother is hester
Alright I’m gonna start a bio 🙂
Name: Phoenix
Age: 13
School sge: you will find out later
Personality: shy,can be rude,can be mean, but generally nice,qiur.
Apperance: she has lavender tipped brown hair that goes down to her waist,pretty brown eyes,slightly tan but mainly white skin,wears leather jackets,ripped jeans,and combat boots.
Finger…[Read more]
Like: to draw and run and listen to music
Dislikes:people,siblings
Fear: she has claustrophobia
P.s let me know if you want to be taged
She dislikes siblings. I can understand that lol. Also plzs tag me
Tag me, who is her fairy tale family? Or is she a reader?
Oh she is from morning mountains and her mom is hester.
Oh! Ok! Cool!
Ooh, please tag me!
Sure thing
WHERE’S OPEN CHAT?!?!not trying to be rude but I’ve been gone for a while and last time I was head I asked the same question and they said “it would be back soon” it’s still not back!😭😭😭
It’s closed indefinitely. We don’t know when it’s going to be back up, but let’s try to be patient. Jun and the tech team are working as hard as they can or fix it.
There’s an Open Chat doc in the meantime: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hZRFyNOqwPVmkZAh2MtV4QAjq8Hdry0MOQ5qxKKm4Rs/edit?usp=sharing
Thx!
Chapter 6 of I still need a name any suggestions are welcome!
Phoenix wished to be in the school for evil. She liked it here in good but still it wasn’t where she belonged. Or so she told herself. ” very foggy mind next ” uma said impatiently. The rest of the class was ok. There was only one other person Whit h a fight mind. Which meant a…[Read more]
Oh I accidentally did italic most of the chapter it was only meant for her thoughts p.s
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How do you do the italics? Awesome chapter by the way!
HTML. @crazycatlady101 I don’t think you closed the tags properly. Or you didn’t write them out as intended. Also, nice chapter!!!
Thx guys what you do for the italics is that and then put an i in it then to close it do it a gain
To start put , and then close is (no spaces)
Nice! Make sure to watch that grammar tho! 😜