crowwolfmoon

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20th October, 2017

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    crowwolfmoon posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    Once

    She towered over the world
    Her branches covered the sky,
    Her roots spanning continents

    Half the world lived in her canopy
    They were born, lived and died, in the blink of an eye

    She remained

    Now

    Her branches hang sick and dying,
    Metal wires criss-cross the sky were they once proudly stood.
    The ground where her roots once snaked through dry and crumbling.
    Concrete walls filled the space left by them.

    Her heart, the center of her, her essence
    is dead.

    It stopped beating long before they had managed to chip away every part of her

    Yet, still

    She remains.

    No longer towering over the world
    But still alive.

    She is in every weed that carves a life for itself in this concrete world

    Pushing apart pavements,
    Undermining foundations

    She rushes through their stems, laughing with the power of new growth, her roots winding around the skeletons of civilization.

    Fighting for survival
    Hiding in nooks and crannies.

    Waiting.

    She is as old as the earth.

    They will not last.

    One day plants will wind themselves around their skeletons

    All their concrete world broken down

    They cannot kill her or stop their fate.

    She will survive

    They will not

    Constructive criticism please, Sorry this is really long and rambling

    @cocoofwoodsbeyond
    @thewitchyone
    @nadea

        geek replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        Wow, this is really good. Tag me if you do more!

        evilerruler845 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        Es hermoso <3 it's vv good. question: will it be just poetry the whole time or will you write an actual story abt it?

          crowwolfmoon replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          Just a poem. I don’t really see how I could make a story out of it

        hester112 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        It’s really good! please tag.

        carrot123 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Great job! Tag me!

        rylletezzy replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Oh it’s good! Is this a story or just a some kind of uuhh.. Poetry?

          carrot123 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          It’s poetry

        carrot123 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        But you can put poetry on here

          rylletezzy replied 2 months, 1 week ago

          Oohhhh I see… Ok.. Tag me!!

        evisla123 replied 2 months, 1 week ago

        Please tag me 💜 I can’t think of any criticism except for the miss spelling of where. It was really good!!!

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