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I will be posting the rest of my story on my report card
“if I could be anyone I would be myself”
Chapter 7: special talents
It’s my first full day at the school for good and Its already almost over we (me and abby) have special talents. I’m nervous I know my special talents but I don’t want people to be afraid of me. “who wants to go first.” tuba the knome says. Everyone puts their hand up but me and…[Read more]
“we can not be perfect, beautiful or **** we are unique”
Chapter 6: When Darkness Breaks
I look at my watch 20 minutes until I switch schools. I look out the window and it’s pouring the bell rings I look at my watch 20 minutes already passed. Wow. We head for lunch. Professor dovey is waiting she walks me over to a table filled with pink…[Read more]
so, im now going to yard sale in rain, and ill be back in 15, 20 minutes. i had 0 idea. sorry 🙂 🙁
“I’m not ordinary nor perfect for I’m myself”
Chapter 5: Lady Lesso
That night I lay awake with Oreo next to me. I found out the name of guy sleeping on the floor it’s Scott. I know I’m part princess because I LOVE to sing but I know I’m also part villain because I don’t want someone to love ok maybe I do a bit. As I said before I don’t know…[Read more]
Chapter 4: A Day In The Dark
They tell me I will have to choose a school for 3 and a half days and then go to the other for the rest of the week I decided to go to the school for evil, right when I reach my dorm I see a boy with blueish green skin, red eye slits instead of pupils, and black hair with a foehawk with a Jedi braid on each side is…[Read more]
Chapter 3: What Am I
“h-how d-do you k-know who I am.” princess uma. “I read your book when I was younger l.” I reply. I sit up and Oreo is laying down on my lap. I see Abby sitting up over in pink. She notices me get up and runs over. I look down I’m in an aquamarine dress with purple, red and black stars on it. Nobody else is wearing it they…[Read more]
Hello, I just want to give a few tips for your writing :3
This one is probably just a mistake, but don’t forget to capitalize! In your first sentence, I noticed some punctuation and capitalization errors.
“h-how d-do you k-know who I am.” princess uma.
“H-how d-do you k-know who I am?” asked Princess Uma.
Chapter 2: The Gates Awaken
It’s only lunch and I got kicked out of the orphanage. Great. Me and Oreo need to find food, clean water and shelter. “Wait what about Abby!” I say to Oreo, she scampers off to Abby’s house. Ten minutes later I arrive at her house. I don’t even knock and she opens the door holding Oreo. “come in I can help you.” she…[Read more]
Chapter 1: The Meeting
I don’t know what love is, because I’m an orphan and nobody cares enough to take me away with them. I love to be alone but part of me wants to know what it feels like to be loved, but right now I need to get ready. Today is the day the elders come to find out what to do with me. I hop I don’t have to leave the orphanage I…[Read more]