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The Little Crowns
Chapter Two—Robot Girl
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Her hands were cuffed. Her feet were cuffed. She was surrounded by four trolls, all aiming loaded crossbows at her.
She didn’t look threatening—in fact, she looked like a perfect little princess.
The entire class looked shocked. Hort suspected he did too.
“What if she’s like Sophie?” A Nevergirl his…[Read more]
This is such an amazing chapter! I’ve been looking forward to reading more about her for a while now 😀 and yay, it’s here! Tessi is such a dark, dark girl who is simultaneously bright, like, I am so confused as to why I want so badly to be her minion or somethin’ but, at the same time, I also want her gone ???? Hahaha! XD I can’t wait for more! <3
Thanks! I was channeling Dolores Umbridge in her a small bit for that chapter. I’d love to use Charlotte in the fanfic, if that’s all right :). If not that’s fine
Oh, that woman *shudders* It’s been years and she still brings out resentment in me hahaha! Anyway, about the other thing—that would be amazing! 😀 If you need her bio, just let me know <3
Amazing chapter! :>>> I really hate Tessi tho HAHAHAHA she reminds of loads of people I’ve hated lol.
no pressure, but when do you plan on uploading the next chapter??? i really want to read more about tessi and how she ties in with sciorta and bernie HAHHAA no rush tho!!! :>>>
The Little Crowns
Chapter One: A little bit off
— Calli —
Calise never saw Her with Dovey. She never knew Her. She never spoke to Her. There was no Her—She didn’t exist; and She had never existed.
But before there was Her, there was Tessi Kielly. Tessi Kielly was beautiful. And even if the official records wouldn’t admit, there had been a Te…[Read more]
I love it
Great chapter, please tag me in future chapters 🙂
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This is amazing writing, right here 😀 It’s really intriguing, and I’m so hooked over the things that might happen! I can’t wait to learn more about the seemingly dark, underlying secrets here <3
oh wow this is great! Could you please tag me in future chapters
HAHAHA I ONLY SAW THIS NOW HOW??
Great chapter, though! i really like tessi heheh
HiI I haven’t really written much on here, but at thought I’d give a fanfic a try. Here we go! (P.S., this story takes place directly after Book 3, and before Book 4. There might be Book 4 spoilers later on, though.) This is sort of like a prologue.
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Sophie really didn’t care who Dovey was talking to. Only she was bored sitting around waiting…[Read more]
I love this! Can you tag me?
Sure!
Oh my gosh this is amazing and I need to know more! Can you tag me?
*jaw drop* is him rhian? this sounds so cool plz tag me and continue! i think you might like my fanfic if u want to check it out (i post updates of all past chapters every month)!
oh wait i didnt read the part about no book 4 yet. nvm. but that makes it even more interesting and mysterious!
Cool!
Oh, god! I didn’t read this sooner! It’s so well-written and the intrigue is palpable. To know more of this Blondie is a definite need and I can’t wait to discover her role in this Lion-Snake fiasco! As for characters, are you looking for a specific kind of character? I’d be glad to help you in any way <3 Just let me know!
tAG ME
is tessy the she-wolf???
(and i can give u a non-spoilery bio for one of my characters heheh)
*tessi ayyy autocorrect :(((
Thank you all for your comments! @prstncharlie, tysm, and yeah, like a bio for some Evers or Nevers would be nice. @elysianne; yeeesss plssss I neeed that bio 😀 .
@Cuteypie1mint this is for ur eyes only for now I guess??? Y’all who want to read my terrible stuff shouldn’t read this bio bc
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This is one of the most vague bios I’ve ever written bc spoilers HAHAHA. It’s up to you whether to use the character or not. Also it…[Read more]
I have my twins hahaha! I’ll comment their bios here 😀
Thanks! I’ll defintiely use your bio!
Ty!!
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Queen I dreamt she was beyond, and that she hadn’t committed the crime that made her Queen I.
She was sitting in an interrogation room. The light bulbs overhead were glaringly bright. Across from her, he sat.
His fingernails were long and ragged and caked in blood, somewhere in between normal nails and lion claws; not at all like His u…[Read more]
Hm. That was VERY interesting indeed, I’m looking forward to learning more about Queen I. I’ll get on the next chapter.
Everything That Happened
Chapter 19–Mothballs And Threats Galore
—Bernie—
There were far too many mothballs under the bed, there’d been one moment when she’d almost coughed.
Sciorta was gone. Lana Haeron was still there slumped on the ground. Her hair glowed dull-copper red in the dimness. Bernie was tempted to crawl out to her, only this…[Read more]
Giiiiiiiiirl hahaha! This chapter is amazing even though you said you were bitten by a lazy bug 😀 I love how complex all of your characters are, too, and how they’re just surrounded by all kinds of mysteries! I wish I could mimic that kind of depth <3 As for TV shows, I don't think that most of them will match hahaha! I don't watch a lot besides…[Read more]
That is very good 😛
I admit, I honestly have no clue.
Great chapter!!! 🙂
I love ur chapters looolol
and I’m not rlly sure what TV shows would represent ur characters. I could see Angel and Sciorta tho as GoT, and Lana as Vikings???
the rest I have no idea though, given I haven’t heard much from them excepting bernie ((I’d really like to read about Sam tho))
I don’t even watch much shows these days really except…[Read more]
Yeeees, I’m definitely featuring them more in the next few chapters 🙂 😉 .
Everything That Happened
Chapter I’ve gotten really confused with my chapters sooo let’s say18–Lana is a naughty, naughty girl
— Lana —
I. Hate. You.
Lana Haeron, Second In Line to the throne of Jaunt Jolie, was ******* to the mast of Lord Sciorta’s ship, Queen Cecily. The name of the ship was one thing Sciorta and Ironheart argued abou…[Read more]
This was an amazing read! I love the mystery ******** in this chapter and can’t wait for it to come to light 😀 As for who the She-Wolf is (for me), isn’t it Angel? 🙂 It’s got her vibe all over it haha!
Amazing chapter!!! aaahhh i highkey prefer this over the previous one ;; the dynamic between sciorta and lana is so screwy and it’s perfect omg.
the she-wolf is angel. :>>> she makes angel look like a perfect little . . . angel, but she may be an alter ego???
Amazing chapter!!!!!! Again!!!!! The ending gave me the creeps!!!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Because my intellect has been going down the drain throughout the day, I will root myself along with the others. It’s probably Angel.
Lovely chapter! 🙂
This was amazing! I just powered through a chunk of your chapters, so my brain is still processing. Who does Lana like? Sam? To answer your question, I’m thinking Bernie, Angel, or maybe Sey is the She-Wolf. Amazing story so far!
Everything That Happened —
Chapter Sixteen: Sciorta Should Be Grateful, Really
— Seventeen Days Before They Entered The Woods —
“Yes—Yes, sea, you, that’s right, you, blondie,” Bernie Ironheart roared. “Move your arse—no, noo!” She threw her hands into the air.
The Frog watched all this with a slight smirk on his face. Nobody seemed to kn…[Read more]
Good chapter!
if there’s anything particularly lacking in your story right now, I would say it’s the character dynamics :<<< you had loads of them in earlier chapters, but I don't see the characters interact as much as they did before. you've already established the main relationships (sciorta and bernie have this squabbling sibling thing going…[Read more]
I’m going to have to agree with the above… Looking forward to the next chapter! 🙂
It’s still interesting, though….
I love how all the elements that were put into this chapter worked together and created a smooth transition of the narrative 🙂 And you’ve worded them out so well that I truly did feel like I was part of the scene! I can’t wait for the new Angel and Lana 😀
Thanks for the constructive critique! I’ll try to implement it in my next chapter!
aaahhh when will you update??? either of ur stories??? the suspense is killing me HAHAHAHA
Everything That Happened
Chapter Seventeen—What a touching reunion
| Lana |
‘You know those secrets that seem so glamorous, like something out of a movie or something? Ours are like that. They are, just you wait.’—Bernie Ironheart, page 3 of the Red Book
Lana Haeron could feel the heat as Angel carried her out of the flames. Lana co…[Read more]
Cool…
I guess…
Awesome! I think Sciorta.
I’m rooting for Angel – actually – Sciorta. Leaning toward Sciorta more… but good chapter!! 🙂
TAG ME FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE IN THIS RP.
Forgive me, I must now read chapters 1-16 in your activity.
I believe in Angel !!! 😀
Mmh- I guess angel would win in a brawn/and/or/argumentative fight, but sciorta would win in a brains fight soooo… I guess… Angel?
Thanks! Angel is probably smarter than Sciorta in sheer IQ, but it’s probably not a fair comparison since Angel is human and Sciorta’s… not.
Catch up: @cuteypie1mint
As you might’ve expected, Organised has a, well, organised way of keeping tabs on his fellow nations. I’ve managed to root up his files on the other members of Team Terra. They mightn’t be totally accurate.
Name: The R####### ## #######
Alias: Hibernia ‘Bernie’ Ironheart
Intel…[Read more]
Tag me
Oooooo detective skills on point 😉 😉
Interesting..
Dunno if anyone remembers me. Don’t worry, I’m just stopping by.
Gosh, this place brings back memories ahahaha. But that’s not why I’m here—my little sis @horseygal38 is writing her story on here and k i l l i n g it 😉😉🥰 I’ve read her story and,
I’d never say this in real life but here I am anywayit’s waaaay better than Scales of Power ever w…[Read more]Haha this is gonna be so good!
I REMEMBER YOUUU!!!! YOU’RE BACK!!!!! (im not on the tag list tho… 😕 )
Oops sorry xD
Oh my gosh, @horseygal38, YOU HAVE A SISTER? I’m super excited for the tournament thing though, good luck!
Wait waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?
I’m sorry I have no clue what Scales of Power is. Is it like Horseygal’s but different? I’ll happily read it!
Yeah, kinda. It was written way before COGE, but some of the characters were Inspo for COGE
WELCOME BACK HAHAHAHAA I MISSED YOUUUUUUU.
and no? your writing wasn’t as bad as you think it is hmph. i always enjoyed reading ur stuff looolol. i’m sure you’ve improved since then, but do you plan on writing anything else soon???
*peeks in*
Oh hello again! 🙂
This sounds good!! And your writing is amazing as well!!
I actually scrolled way, way down my Activity to get to your page (yesterday, I think, or the day before yesterday?) !!! 😅😂 I’ve missed you and @elysianne so much (also all of the people I usually tag for things)! Hope you guys are well ❤💕
I’m doing fine! You? I really missed seeing you around hehe, you brought a lot of positivity + light to this place esp. when it was needed <3 <3
O M G it’s great to have both of you back ahaha old friends
@prstncharlie, @elysianne r either of you writing atm? I might start up again, probs not..
Awwwww @elysianne 😭 I’m doing great—at least, I’d like to believe I am hahaha!
@cuteypie1mint I haven’t continued with my fic for months 😅 I don’t think I ever will . . .? I’ve also had a realization that I’ve enjoyed writing about the world but ****** af with the plot 😂 If you’re starting with something, you can bet I’ll support it 1…
s u c k e d isn’t that much of a bad word geeeeezAnyway, what I am sort of busy on by the way is the Evers Club with Uraza and whole bunch of others 😀
@Prstncharlie and @Cuteypie1mint, I MISS U SO MUCH LOVES. I’m working on a SGE-unrelated novel on the belle époque + ww1 (kinda) and i’m vvv busy ! I HAVE AN INTERNSHIP W UNILAB WISH ME LUCK. ill be working in their chem lab + at their plant, and ill get paid about 5 dollars a day (a fortune in the philippines) and have free meals. Unilab is my…[Read more]
Aaaaaaaaah! I am so excited for you, bebe! Both for your internship and your upcoming novel!
Your “Tita of Manila” was very busy about a month ago 😂 I’m on training but they gave us the whole month of April off, which was nice because our memorization skills were put to the test eVERY DAY *sobs*
I voted
Yeah, I’ve basically quit writing, I really want to focus on STEM xD, @prstncharlie. But I’ll probably force @horseygal38 to rewrite Scales of Power once she’s finished COGE, dunno if that counts lollll
O.O AND HERE I THOUGHT YOU VANISHED OFF THE FACE OF THE SITE
for good…I agree with @elysianne firstly, because your writing does not suck. Literally, I would absorb every smart thing you wrote that my dumb brain couldn’t comprehend haha. Can’t wait to see tournament unfold XD
Congrats @elysianne on your internship! And Charlie, what have you been up to? I’m doing my Junior Cert this year (the first state exam in my country, there’s another one called the Leaving Cert) and I am dreadingggg it. We have to do mock exams each week and it’ll only get more frequent 😭
@cuteypie1mint heyo! So incase you don’t know me, I’m Hesterjunior (on the process of thinking of a nickname), and I… write stories too I guess. Instead of scolling through your activity for five hours straight and looking for CHAPTER 1, can you post a link to maybe a google doc where you wrote your story in so I can read it from the very…[Read more]
Kay, @hesterjunior, just to warn you it’s an unedited mess that I wrote years ago, but ya asked for it xD also it’s the inspiration for COGE so…
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-IchJ4QBhr7SeQsicBHN5yAmcQltD35s7OHz3fMLtSY
thanks! It looks fine! Can’t wait to read the person who inspired COGE xP
I like it
Ahh, cuteypiemint , one of the few I know since my first few months in this site, I think it was almost 3 years ago. So glad to see you!!!!!!!!!!!