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@elysianne I just wanted to say I’m really sorry about dropping off from the Untitled Rp thing. I know it was really rude of me but I’m a bit like that: I’m lazy and can’t commit to things. I know it’s a bit belated but I hope you can forgive me, because I consider you one of my best online friends ♥♥
it’s absolutely fine man!!! i too am lazy and can’t commit, hope we can stay in touch tho loolol i have social media/email/this site (yikes), take ur pick <3
just email me at [email protected] or smth looolol if you want any social media accounts thx ahaha
@elysianne, hiiiii. Sorry for falling through with that group RP project 🙁 . I was wondering if you’d consider writing some sort of OG story w/ me??? Sorry if that seems a lil crazy, and it’s no problem if you don’t feel like it.
Ok, I miiiight have some ideas but I’d like to hear yours first. Should we make a google doc?
Here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/108I6thEBSHvFeaTtOY2ydk-Ly6Hk6sFw2KWqCg3Pdbc/edit
oml I’m so HYPED. If you don’t mind, could you help like format the doc and everything and we could discuss worldbuilding and characters and everything??
U still here? XD
@elysianne, @prstncharlie, @shawnmendesfan, and @evilerruler845–sorry if I’m being a pest lol I’m just kinda psyched at the idea of having a group RP with u guys—my old friends from this site!!!! I’m posting this cause I replied to @/elysianne’s post about the potential group RP but that was a couple of days ago and I’m paranoid she won’t see it…[Read more]
That sounds totally bomb! I’ll have to research a lot about the theme, but I’m deffo in 😄 Just tell me when! ☺️
Ooooh and @elysianne, I just sent ya an email! 😄
Lol I feel as if this site of communication anymore xD A bit out of the loop lol
Dunno if anyone remembers me. Don’t worry, I’m just stopping by.
Gosh, this place brings back memories ahahaha. But that’s not why I’m here—my little sis @horseygal38 is writing her story on here and k i l l i n g it 😉😉🥰 I’ve read her story and,
I’d never say this in real life but here I am anyway it’s waaaay better than Scales of Power ever w…[Read more]
I REMEMBER YOUUU!!!! YOU’RE BACK!!!!! (im not on the tag list tho… 😕 )
Oh my gosh, @horseygal38, YOU HAVE A SISTER? I’m super excited for the tournament thing though, good luck!
I’m sorry I have no clue what Scales of Power is. Is it like Horseygal’s but different? I’ll happily read it!
Yeah, kinda. It was written way before COGE, but some of the characters were Inspo for COGE
WELCOME BACK HAHAHAHAA I MISSED YOUUUUUUU.
and no? your writing wasn’t as bad as you think it is hmph. i always enjoyed reading ur stuff looolol. i’m sure you’ve improved since then, but do you plan on writing anything else soon???
I actually scrolled way, way down my Activity to get to your page (yesterday, I think, or the day before yesterday?) !!! 😅😂 I’ve missed you and @elysianne so much (also all of the people I usually tag for things)! Hope you guys are well ❤💕
I’m doing fine! You? I really missed seeing you around hehe, you brought a lot of positivity + light to this place esp. when it was needed <3 <3
Awwwww @elysianne 😭 I’m doing great—at least, I’d like to believe I am hahaha!
@cuteypie1mint I haven’t continued with my fic for months 😅 I don’t think I ever will . . .? I’ve also had a realization that I’ve enjoyed writing about the world but ****** af with the plot 😂 If you’re starting with something, you can bet I’ll support it 1…
s u c k e d isn’t that much of a bad word geeeeez
Anyway, what I am sort of busy on by the way is the Evers Club with Uraza and whole bunch of others 😀
@Prstncharlie and @Cuteypie1mint, I MISS U SO MUCH LOVES. I’m working on a SGE-unrelated novel on the belle époque + ww1 (kinda) and i’m vvv busy ! I HAVE AN INTERNSHIP W UNILAB WISH ME LUCK. ill be working in their chem lab + at their plant, and ill get paid about 5 dollars a day (a fortune in the philippines) and have free meals. Unilab is my…[Read more]
Aaaaaaaaah! I am so excited for you, bebe! Both for your internship and your upcoming novel!
Your “Tita of Manila” was very busy about a month ago 😂 I’m on training but they gave us the whole month of April off, which was nice because our memorization skills were put to the test eVERY DAY *sobs*
Congrats @elysianne on your internship! And Charlie, what have you been up to? I’m doing my Junior Cert this year (the first state exam in my country, there’s another one called the Leaving Cert) and I am dreadingggg it. We have to do mock exams each week and it’ll only get more frequent 😭
@cuteypie1mint heyo! So incase you don’t know me, I’m Hesterjunior (on the process of thinking of a nickname), and I… write stories too I guess. Instead of scolling through your activity for five hours straight and looking for CHAPTER 1, can you post a link to maybe a google doc where you wrote your story in so I can read it from the very…[Read more]
Kay, @hesterjunior, just to warn you it’s an unedited mess that I wrote years ago, but ya asked for it xD also it’s the inspiration for COGE so…
thanks! It looks fine! Can’t wait to read the person who inspired COGE xP
Everything That Happened
Chapter 19–Mothballs And Threats Galore
There were far too many mothballs under the bed, there’d been one moment when she’d almost coughed.
Sciorta was gone. Lana Haeron was still there slumped on the ground. Her hair glowed dull-copper red in the dimness. Bernie was tempted to crawl out to her, only this…[Read more]
Giiiiiiiiirl hahaha! This chapter is amazing even though you said you were bitten by a lazy bug 😀 I love how complex all of your characters are, too, and how they’re just surrounded by all kinds of mysteries! I wish I could mimic that kind of depth <3 As for TV shows, I don't think that most of them will match hahaha! I don't watch a lot besides…[Read more]
I love ur chapters looolol
and I’m not rlly sure what TV shows would represent ur characters. I could see Angel and Sciorta tho as GoT, and Lana as Vikings???
the rest I have no idea though, given I haven’t heard much from them excepting bernie ((I’d really like to read about Sam tho))
I don’t even watch much shows these days really except…[Read more]
Everything That Happened
I’ve gotten really confused with my chapters sooo let’s say18–Lana is a naughty, naughty girl
— Lana —
I. Hate. You.
Lana Haeron, Second In Line to the throne of Jaunt Jolie, was ******* to the mast of Lord Sciorta’s ship, Queen Cecily. The name of the ship was one thing Sciorta and Ironheart argued abou…[Read more]
This was an amazing read! I love the mystery ******** in this chapter and can’t wait for it to come to light 😀 As for who the She-Wolf is (for me), isn’t it Angel? 🙂 It’s got her vibe all over it haha!
Amazing chapter!!! aaahhh i highkey prefer this over the previous one ;; the dynamic between sciorta and lana is so screwy and it’s perfect omg.
the she-wolf is angel. :>>> she makes angel look like a perfect little . . . angel, but she may be an alter ego???
Amazing chapter!!!!!! Again!!!!! The ending gave me the creeps!!!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Chapter Sixteen: Sciorta Should Be Grateful, Really
— Seventeen Days Before They Entered The Woods —
“Yes—Yes, sea, you, that’s right, you, blondie,” Bernie Ironheart roared. “Move your arse—no, noo!” She threw her hands into the air.
The Frog watched all this with a slight smirk on his face. Nobody seemed to kn…[Read more]
if there’s anything particularly lacking in your story right now, I would say it’s the character dynamics :<<< you had loads of them in earlier chapters, but I don't see the characters interact as much as they did before. you've already established the main relationships (sciorta and bernie have this squabbling sibling thing going…[Read more]
I love how all the elements that were put into this chapter worked together and created a smooth transition of the narrative 🙂 And you’ve worded them out so well that I truly did feel like I was part of the scene! I can’t wait for the new Angel and Lana 😀
Thanks for the constructive critique! I’ll try to implement it in my next chapter!
Everything That Happened
Chapter Seventeen—What a touching reunion
| Lana |
‘You know those secrets that seem so glamorous, like something out of a movie or something? Ours are like that. They are, just you wait.’—Bernie Ironheart, page 3 of the Red Book
Lana Haeron could feel the heat as Angel carried her out of the flames. Lana co…[Read more]
TAG ME FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE IN THIS RP.
Forgive me, I must now read chapters 1-16 in your activity.
Mmh- I guess angel would win in a brawn/and/or/argumentative fight, but sciorta would win in a brains fight soooo… I guess… Angel?