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I’m so sorry that I haven’t posted in forever…. Again…. PLEASE FORGIVE ME
Chapter 2: Light
The first thing I felt was pain. Pain so intense and searing that there was no way I wasn’t alive. I should be happy. I’m alive when so many people have died. But I’m not happy. I’m scared. My surroundings feel so incredibly different. I’m no longer on the…[Read more]
This is the first chapter of my WWII Story. I dunno what to call it yet. Any suggestions? I hope you like it! Also comment if you want to be tagged. 🙂
Chapter 1: Run
“RUNNNNN!!!!!!” Was the first thing I heard when I woke up. “Soldiers-Bombs- just- RUN!” Rose always wakes up at the first sound of a close bomb. I on the other hand, do not. Th…[Read more]
This is great!! Please tag me! and… do you need any bios?
Ummmmm… Here comes another story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Diana Lawson
(i’m gonna do the backstory first cause if I don’t, none of this is gonna make sense)
Backstory: Diana and her older sister, Rose, are Readers, but they live in Denmark during WWll. They are not religious, but they are hiding because they are against the *****. Their mom…[Read more]
okay so it doesn’t show the type of soldiers that are patrolling the streets but i’ll let you guess (hint: It ain’t the Allies). I don’t really care that it doesn’t show the name though cause I don’t like them. I mean, they killed innocent people basically (and probably) for fun! Who does that?! Wow I just realized this is a really weird ( and…[Read more]
Great job! My only suggestions would be, 1: Add a weaknesses/fatal flaw category to give your character more depth and not make them a Mary Sue (perfect character). A fatal flaw example is : Vampires melt in the sun.
And a weakness example is : A certain time of the week, month or day Diana loses her sight, or someone else can inhabit her body…[Read more]
Okay. Thanks for the tips! I haven’t done a bio in a while, so I wasn’t sure if I was adding everything. So here are the things you told me to add:
Weakness: Diana will do anything for her sister and on every full moon, she goes completely deaf for that night and it stays that way till noon the next day. She is also very stubborn and will let…[Read more]
Also, @tailteofportglenone why are you mad at the world right now? Sorry i’m being nosy, but I’m curious so… *nervous laugh*
One word politics, were I live is about to get messed up
@tailteofportglenone ohh I understand. America is messed up too. just look at our president…
At least Donald Trump isn’t doing anything , I’m half expecting to see riots in the streets , who am I kidding I am expecting they are threatening the peace of were I live I never wanted to be in the UK and now all of a sudden we are important in there government !!!
Okay. I’m really sorry but I forgot to add Scarlet and Finn’s talents in their bio, so here they are.
Scarlets Talents: She can teleport and she can go into the past and she can take a mental image of something and “zoom in” of them to get a better look
Finn’s talents: he can read minds
The moment Finn threw the rose to t…[Read more]
Scarlet was dragged into the air. She was dropped into a lake of black muck. And then she was looking for Finn. Then she realized he wasn’t there. She was alone.
Finn grew from the ground. He got rushed into the School for Good. He was engaged in swordplay when a teacher rushed them out, handing each boy a rose.
He scanned t…[Read more]
Did you just post that twice?
Sorry if it was a mistake, but avoid that mistake again please….
these two posts are the same… you could delete one of these.
Sorry. I just deleted it. My computer glitched and it said I didn’t post it so I posted it again.
What if Hort’s mom was a viking and his mom and his dad(Captain Hook I think, right?) meet on the sea and fell in love and Hort inherited his mom’s viking ship and he gets all hot and Sophie falls for him and they get married and they set of for sea and they have to come back cause there’s a villain that’s trying to kill Tagatha so Sophie and…[Read more]
That’s a cool idea. I really think there will be Vikings.
I do ship Hophie and that’s a super cool idea. I hope they don’t get married THAT quick and I hope they have time to get to know each other better first. I would looove to meet his mom! We don’t here enough about her. His dad isn’t Hook though it’s just another pirate on his ship
TAYLOROFZENOVIA I THOUGHT HIS DAD WAS HOOK???/ IM CONFUSED
I’m back!!!!! Okay to the story! (Did anyone miss me???:) ) Comment below if you want to be tagged in my next post!
Scarlet woke to a rapping on her tower window. It was the dead of night. She lit her lantern and looked through the window and saw exactly who she was expecting. She opened the window and leapt down from three stories…[Read more]
I’m going to keep going on Finn’s and Scarlet’s story, because I have hit a block in the road of Brinley’s and can not think of what to write after my latest chapter for her. Any of y’all can take it.
Finn looked out over the countryside from his second-story window. A knock sounded…[Read more]
OK. this the start to Finn’s and Scarlet’s story. Alright? OK. but before we start i’m making a change to scarlet’s bio. and sorry for my grammar and punctuation and stuff. i only do that for the stories most of the time. k? k. here’s the change: scarlet lives with the Enchantress, an evil witch who really hates everyone. K. that was the change.…[Read more]
Interesting…. good job. Also, it’s okay, not OK or ok.