Hey story fans! This is Pixel (well, duh, it’s my username) with another chapter that I hope you like!
“Take her to the Doom Room.” A white wolf grabbed her roughly by the hair. “Make sure she can’t get out.”
Two other wolves dragged her through a dark, foul-smelling sewer. Marina spotted a white shape in the darkness,…[Read more]
Wow a little mysterious at the end. Don’t forget to capitalize your I’s . Good job. 🙂
Ok i have not written in a while so this prob won’t be good
Marina stood, horrified, as the white stag bled to death. “No! Wake up! Please wake up!” But she knew it was useless. The crog had done too much damage.
“No….” She broke off as the leaves rustled behind her and six new figures stepped out. She glared at them. “What do you…[Read more]
Awesome job. But instead of putting who owned some of the characters in the middle of your story why don’t you put it at the end. Just so it won’t be confusing for readers. Nice job though.
Introducing our newest member of the SGE Debate Club, @demon7373 !
hey evs and nevs!!! a lot of people wanted to be in my story and their applications were all AWESOME. So I have decided that the characters in my tale (tail hee hee) will be:
congrats all of u and plez note that i look forward to hearing ur comments.
also my birthday is the 22nd…[Read more]
Yay! im so excited to be in your story!! Also you have the same b day as my friend!!
Ooh happy early birthday!!! Also, thank you so much for letting me be in your story!!! 🙂
Thx so much!! And happy late birthday. Can’t wait for your story!!
Ok, I have my song ready for you guys. Tell me what you think about my story-and song-so far and catch up @demon7373!! 😀
I was nervous. I didn’t intend on taking Terra with me. I could tell that Terra was a bit scared of seeing Trogin. But, she’s the only one who can help me, I told myself. I don’t really have much of a choice,…[Read more]
I have an update everyone! You can catch up @demon7373!
“An Evil demon that’s actually my father. His name is Trogin. He had married my deceased mother, Allera, and made her life miserable. The last words my mother ever said to me were, ‘Beware of your father, Jinx. Don’t let him ruin your Ever After.’” Jinx took off her ring and showed Terr…[Read more]
Hope you like it!! Oh, and do I have to make a bio for every character in my story?
So, for those of you who read my second update @demon7373 know about Jinx. I’m gonna make a bio for her so you know what she’s like, ok?
School: Good (but she has Evil powers, that she uses for Good)
Parents: If I tell you, it’ll spoil the story. But one of her parents is Evil, while the other’s Good. So, just wait a bit longer…[Read more]