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HELLO PEOPLES! I AM A FISH! A AM FISH! TIS MY NAME! I’m sorry i’m crazy
So I was wondering before I start writing a POV, which hopefully will be by the end of the week(i ignore so much stuff), I wanted to create another character and make sure he is acceptable.
SO HERE IS ANOTHER PERSON WHO IS A PERSON:
Name: Cody Rittenhouse (written-house)
Region: Malachite, or is it somewhere else?
Fairytale relative: SECRETS! IM KEEPING SECRETS FROM YOU!
Plague (yes or no): yes
Appearance: Messy pitch black hair covering eyes, that are multiple colors of grey, like the world is in black and white. His skin is like it’s been skimmed by the sun, as it is slightly. He has dimples and extremely white teeth. He is skinnier than most people and is taller than the average. He has a cheeky smile and playful eyes. But he has a very strange marking on his back. It is like someone has burned a symbol onto it. The symbol is a bunch of jagged lines and swirls forming the shape of twin knives. In the blade of one there is a dark blue eye with lines come out from it, like blood tear drops. In handle of the other weapon, there is violent lighting, dancing around everywhere, destroying everything.
Finger Glow: The grey colors of his eyes
Talent: Intangibility? I don’t really know yet.
Personality: He seems to always have a better answer/plan for everything. He views the situation giving and thinks of the best plan really and surprisingly quickly, like he sees things before they happen. He is smart, but doesn’t rub it in. He seems to know things, but not remember where he learned it from.
Backstory: He can’t remember anything from his past like his memories have been stolen. One day he just woke up outside of the school, stuck in a bear trap, with only that burn on his back as a clue. He wandered into the school, no idea about anything of the plague, nor him being infected, or anything else about the world. After some confusing conversations, he enrolled into the school, still clue less about anything earlier.
weakness/flaws: Well for starters, he can’t say anything about his past or parents, cause you know, his memories have be stolen. This makes him the awkward bug in the conversation when people are talking about their past. He is VERY absent minded and is addicted to fiddling with his fingers.
This is a pretty good bio. You might want to put limits on his power, though.
oh sorry that’s not what I was really going for, he’s not that powerful.
Sounds cool! Do you mind telling me what intangibility is?
it’s where matter passes through you when you want. Like you can walk through walls and stuff.