demonz4life

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    demonz4life posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 9 months ago

    Hello guys! I havent made a POV in like forever. So could I do a collaboration with someone so I can ease my way back into this?
    Here’s the bio I made:
    Name: Adelina Asteris
    Age: 14
    Region: Jade
    School: Evil
    Plague: No
    Fairy tale parents: An elf(mom) and a villager(dad). The mom left while she was growing up.
    Finger glow: dark blue
    Talent: Intangibility (able to pass through matter, but she cant go through everything, otherwise she’d be falling through the floor Heheh)
    Weapon: Twin blades
    Personality: She is NOT a people person. She like to hang out by herself and doesn’t talk to people. She dosent care what she looks like, does’t care what people think of her, and doesn’t care what happens to every one else. She likes to hang out by herself, climb and listen to music. She doesn’t pay attention to people, unless its something incredibly important. If she tried, she could be great at school. If someone insults her parents, or makes the slightest comment about them, she will roast you to death. She doesn’t like when people talk bad about them and will make you regret it if you do. But she doesn’t care if you insult her, which people often do.
    appearance: She has brown/black hair and it is up to a little below her shoulders. When she is climbing or doing anything like sports, she puts it up in a bun. She has light freckles and she has blueish green eyes, but in the dark it is a Navy blue. She is a average height and weight (I’m not sure how tall your characters all so I don’t want to make her supper tall or supper short) She isn’t fat and she is kinda strong. She has a scar on her arm from being attacked from an animal infected from the plague. Anything missing? I want to make sure I have everything I need.
    back story: Her mom was an elf so she didn’t stay with them so she grew up with her dad until she was 3. That was when her village, hidden up in the mountains, got infected. It started with her dad but she and a few others, mostly grownups, escaped. She doesn’t really remember her parents or much until she was 10. That is when the group of people she hid with (from the plagued. I’m getting the vibe that everywhere is infected besides the school) Got attacked and then she had to run away again. While she was running she got attacked by a beast which is where her scar is from. And then she arrived at the schools.
    Weaknesses: She is not a people person. She doesn’t like to talk about her past, or her parents. Those are stuff topics for her to talk about. And other things she does’t want you to know.

        demonz4life replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        With the fingerglow the dark blue is a Navy blue

          demonz4life replied 3 years, 9 months ago

          And it got accepted before so… Ya

        sherlock replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Not being a people person isn’t a flaw. And having a completely apathetic character might get reeeeally boring for you to write. If all they do is scoff and ignore everyone, you’re going to get bored with her. My advice? Expand her personality. You can keep the ignoring everyone part, but make her more than that.

          demonz4life replied 3 years, 9 months ago

          Cool beans

        demonz4life replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        ☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣☣ Okay here is my fixed bio @sherlock oh and I swaped the gender cause I think ther’s a lot more girl characters than boy characters.
        Name: Cody Writtenhouse
        Age: 14
        Region: Jade
        School: Evil
        Plague: No
        Fairy tale parents: An elf(mom) and a villager(dad). The mom left while she was growing up.
        Finger glow: Navy blue
        Talent: Intangibility (able to pass through matter, but he can’t go through everything, otherwise he’d be falling through the floor Hehe)
        Weapon: Twin blades
        Personality: he is NOT a people person. he likes to hang out by herself and doesn’t talk to people. he doesn’t care what he looks like, doesn’t care what people think of him, and doesn’t care what happens to everyone else. he likes to hang upside down, the feeling of blood rushing to his head, even if it isnt the healthiest thing. he doesn’t pay attention to people, unless it’s something incredibly important. If he tried, he could be great at school, but he doesn’t care. he lets off a rebel vibe, but if you insult him, he just doesnt care. People often make fun of him, but why should he care? BUT insult his family/parents, he will roast you to death and make you regret meeting him. Also, when he is afraid of something he has this wierd thing where he has to over come it, no matter what, even it ends up with him getting seriously hurt. he puts herself right in the middle of danger so he isnt afraid of it anymore, which is when people start to relise he’s loosing it. When there is a task laid before him, he will complete it easily(if he cares), unless its school work…
        appearance: he has messy brown/black hair that always seems to be in his face even when he is climbing or doing anything like sports. He has light freckles and he has blueish green eyes, but in the dark it is a Navy blue. he is tall and super skiny, and is strong. he has a scar on his arm from being attacked from an animal infected from the plague, and burns on his skin(see fears).
        back story: His mom was an elf so she didn’t stay with them so he grew up with her dad until she was 3. That was when her village, hidden up in the mountains, got infected. It started with his dad but him and his little sister, and a few others, mostly grownups, escaped. he doesn’t really remember his parents or much until he was 10, but clearly rembers his sister. That is when the group of people she hid with Got attacked, his sister dying there, and then he had to run away again without her. While he was running she got attacked by a beast which is where her scar is from. And then he arrived at the schools. He doesnt really have anywhere else to go to, so the school allowed him to stay.
        Weaknesses: He is not a people person. He doesn’t like to talk about his past, or his sister. But he is seriously afraid of fire and hates it, but he puts himself near fire to overcome the fear, though he’s been afraid of it for a while, and ends up getting burned.

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