jasminebeard123 posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 10 months ago

    @catofthewoods
    @fantasygirl12
    @demonz4life
    Here is my POV! Hope you like it!
    Mare’s POV
    (Plague RP)
    A chilling pain blasted up through my body as my nerves reacted to the tap. It was a girl named Arisa, Arisa Flame. Her touch was cold and hard. My body tingled with the unfamiliar feeling. “Could I Borrow A Pen?” Arisa asked. I looked at her and h…[Read more]

    fantasygirl12 posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 10 months ago

    Here is my bio UPDATED and here you go @demonz4life 🙂
    Name:Arisa Flame
    Age:14
    Region:Amber
    Fairytale Relative:Archer named Vic
    Plague (yes or no): no
    Summary of fairytale realitive:Vic is the kind of “parent” You’d barely ever see. He tends to always go out to hunt for food, but always comes back in within a year. He leaves Arisa to frnd for…[Read more]

        sherlock replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        You need to add personality, as well as more detail to appearance and clothing. Also, a summary of fairytale relative would be a summary of the parent’s fairytale. Here’s an example from one of my bios:
        Summary of fairytale: Somewhere out there, there is a well. If you passed it, you wouldn’t think it was a particularly interesting well. In f…[Read more]

          nightshade11 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Yeah, what Sherlock said. After you update your bio, you still have to get it approved before you can actually start RPing.

        jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        What color is her hair? and you need a lot more detail for Appearance

          jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Work on your bio, you can go last for our RP. You need to get it approved first

        demonz4life replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Hey, Um, can you change her finger glow and eye color? Its the same as my character.

          demonz4life replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          when I said, Dark blue, I meant like a navy color

          demonz4life replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Um and my talent for Angelina is invisibilty. Sorry. I picked a while ago, i just didnt really tell anyone

          fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 10 months ago
    jasminebeard123 posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi!!! I decided to continue my RP POV, before @demonz4life and her POV, so here it goes:
    Mare’s POV
    (Plague RP) PT.2
    The battle begins. Cody pulled out his long sword from his sheath. He decided to strike for my neck and I dodged the attacks. I ran toward him, with my rapier in hand and tried to aim for his thigh. He successfully blocked t…[Read more]

        sherlock replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Just keep in mind, we try not to POV twice in a row. We prefer to have one long POV to two short ones. Also, please don’t ship an OC with another one of your own OCs without creating a bio for the love interest. Although shipping your own character with another one of your own characters is allowed, it’s not too common because it’s not as fun or…[Read more]

          solarstar replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Yeah. The best ships on this forum – Opalairis, Cariana, Sherlockary, (these are all from the old RP *cries*) etc., etc., all happened naturally. It’s much more interesting for others to read and interact with, in addition to usually having better writing and character development, if you let relationships develop organically.

          jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          Cody Is @demonz4life POV character

          jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          And I’m Sorry About Making 2, but I had an idea, so I wrote another. I could take them both down and re post them together. (If It Matters That much.)

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Pretty much what @sherlock said.

        demonz4life replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        That was Good! I’ll write cody’s POV now.

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        *your

        What the others said. Nice job 🙂

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi guys! I’m @demonz4life, but my computer is weird and it’s not letting me in my account so Im using my friends. Sorry I haven’t posted my POV, i’ve been really sick, but I’m better now. This is my first POV so just tell me if any thing is wrong, if it’s to short, ect.
    Angelina’s Pov
    I didn’t talk to anyone during first period cause I was t…[Read more]

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome! Very good first POV.

        wenteo replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing!

        jasminebeard123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Very Good!

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I think that’s pretty good for a first POV 🙂 Just a few little mistakes like not having the ‘d in I’d for the second sentence or some commas instead of periods.

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi guys! I AM HERE WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER TO MY NEW STORY! I LIKE CAPS LOCK BTW! I don’t really know what the title of my story should be so if you could suggest some. I created some bios for my story that you could check out at @schoolofevil. Also, if you haven’t heard my friend, @demonz4life, has joined the ever-never army and she might post s…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        SAFE!!!
        I LOVE IT!

          theheartofgold101 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          SAFE! 🙂 That’s a funny term! 😉

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi guys! Just wanted to say my friend has joined the ever-never army and sometimes I might post under her name or she might post under my name because why not. She is under the username @demonz4life I think. Anyways here are some more bios to my story!

    HERE IS SOME MORE BIOS IN MY STORY I’M GOING TO MAKE PEOPLE! I AM THINKING OF A TITLE SO YA IF…[Read more]

        schoolofevil replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        OKAY YOU KNOW THE *****! IT”S NOT A CURSE WORD OR A ***** WORD BUT FOR SOME REASON IT CAME OUT LIKE THAT FOR THOSE YOUNGER VIEWERS

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Cool!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Love it!