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Hey guys, so whilst I continue to work on draft 11 of ‘The Broken Heart’, I still want to provide other content. I found these two poems on my laptop, one from 2018 and the other in 2019, and I had a very different opinion on the subject of these poems in the year which passed between them. Since I found both poems extremely funny, I am going to share them with you.
HIS THRONE: 2018
Mind and heart have come to an agreement
That can’t be explained by logic alone.
This feeling I have is no achievement,
For I will forever bow to his throne.
And yet I see that he is nowhere near,
So I now find I want two things at once;
To be eternally by his side here,
And to be away from his brilliance.
My heart flutters and I feel hot
When I see him, but I know it can’t be
Because mine to love he is not.
He never was, it was a fantasy.
And so here I sit two years down the track,
Desperately wishing to turn the time back.
I no longer kneel before anyone
For I have learnt that kneeling leaves you sore.
I let my mind and soul be overrun
By thoughts of you which send my heart to war.
I regret the long time I spent kneeling
Before you and your ever-pristine throne.
Reflecting on those days, I am healing.
I have become a person of my own.
Now it is I who wears the golden crown,
Because now I am finally my own Queen.
And now it is I who sits on a throne
Adorned in jewels of red, gold, blue and green.
I mightn’t be healed, but I know what I need
I know when it’s time to pluck out the weed.
Draft 11. Wow, dedication. *claps hands and gestures to you* You are now my living example lol.
These were wonderful, and I love your content. Thank you for sharing! I love your poetry style, and I can see how you’ve improved.
” no longer kneel before anyone
For I have learnt that kneeling leaves you sore.”
Was just.. stunning, in one word.
Ha ha. Thanks, @Outdoorpoet! Oh, god, that’s so lovely, thank you. Thank you so much, I love to see that people enjoy my content. It was no problem, I thought you guys would enjoy them. Ha ha. Thanks. I love to write in sonnets, but iambic pentameter is a pain. I’m glad you liked that line! My 16 year old self was very proud. 😂
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