Luna kicked to the surface, gasping for breath, and pulled onto shore.
Rupert was there, teetering on the back of his turtle shell, wiggling his little turtle feet in the air.
Luna smiled and picked him up, hair lightening sky-blue.
A fairy bit her on the tail. “What in the–” she shook her…[Read more]
I love how you are using lines from the book to reference Luna’s surroundings, and I like your storyline so far!
I look forward to reading more, this is a great first few chapters!
Can Luna have a fedora? I feel like she is the kind of person to wear a Fedora. 🙂
WHY THE HECK DID IT CHANGE HOW I TYPED THE SCHEDULE?!? I had everything properly spaced out just like in the original book! Somebody has to complain to Soman about this! It is UNFAIR!
That was not a no. It was a comment on how the site changed up my writing in a stupid way. It had nothing to do with what you said.
I absolutely adore the descriptive language used in this story! I am also evidently the master of commenting way too late