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Hey guys! Hope you are all WELL and feeling GREAT! Here’s is Chapter 7 of “A Tale of Two Sisters”! I am SUPER THANKFUL for all the support you guys have given me, and I think the two girls will end up going to The School for Good and Evil in a couple of chapters (hopefully! XD)! Anyway, just lemme know if you wanna be tagged or untagged! Also, feel free to leave any constructive criticism: it would be really appreciated!
Tags: @elviaofcamelot (How ya doin, bestie?)
@anastasia32 (How’s your day been, bro? Lol…)
@annekam (You commented on my last chapter so I am unsure whether you wanna be tagged…Just lemme know if you don’t wanna be…)
Onto the STORY!
Chapter 7: A Tale Begins
Kaci landed with a loud “thump!” on smooth ground. Everything around her was black, not a single glimmer of light anywhere in sight. She had no idea where she was. The last thing she remembered was reaching for Skylar, then falling; endless falling.
“Kaci? Is that you?” a familiar voice called out.
“Sky? it’s me!” Kaci replied, her voice slightly shaking. She heard a sigh of relief coming from somewhere close.
“How did we get here? Where are we? Why is it so dark?” Skylar bombarded herself with questions.
“First off, is there something that can help us see?” Kaci asked in response.
She could hear Skylar ruffling in her pockets for something, grunts of frustration accompanying the sound of jingling keys.
“Here! Got them!” Skylar finally exclaimed in triumph.
A bright light suddenly filled Kaci’s eyes, causing her to squint until she adjusted to the change in light. She could see Skylar standing a slight distance ahead of her. She was holding the slightly rusty keys to their cottage. Attached to the keyring hung a small torch, their only source of light.
“I knew I would need this someday! I’m glad I attached this torch: we wouldn’t have been able to see without it…” Skylar started, “Kaci? Are you OK?”
“Fine,” Kaci responded, half-distracted by her surroundings. Carefully, she stood up, craning her neck to take in her unusual surroundings. She looked around, noticing that the floor was as dark and black as night, as if this place was endless. She then realised that it was also covered in strange runes, ones she’d seen somewhere before. The only problem was that she couldn’t remember where.
Skylar had clearly noticed it too, as she was staring at the shadowy floor, a curious and concentrated expression showing on her face. Kaci continued looking around.
“Hmm?” her sister returned, obviously still engrossed in studying the abnormal writing beneath her.
“What did you see in that glowing book? What happened?” Kaci enquired her sister.
“I’m not really sure. I was just trying to find a book that could help us, then, all of a sudden, I saw this glowing book. Its glow changed colour a few times. I reached for it, and I felt myself falling for what seemed like forever. That’s when I ended up here, and a few seconds later, I heard you come too,” Skylar recounted, gradually turning to face her younger sister. “Now that I think about it, I don’t even think the book had a name on it… But how did you end up here, Kaci?”
Kaci faced her older sister, “I saw you reaching for the strange, glowing book. It looked like you were in some sort of trance. I reached for your hand, then I felt myself endlessly falling too.”
“There’s nothing here though! How are we going to leave?” Skylar began to pace back and forth, confusion clouding her face.
“Maybe if we walk around for a bit, we’ll find a way out?” Kaci suggested.
“Let’s try it…” Skylar began to walk forward, Kaci by her side.
The two girls walked on for what seemed like an hour, but was only a few minutes; Skylar brandishing her torch, lighting the way ahead, and Kaci gripping her sister’s hand tightly, fear slowly taking over her. Abruptly, Kaci halted.
“Look, Sky! There’s something there!” she told the other girl, pointing to something glimmering in the distance.
“Let’s see what it is… Stay behind me, Kaci. We don’t know what it is or what this mysterious place is…” Skylar instructed her sister. Together, they began to run towards the glimmer ahead, hoping it was a way out.
A few moments later, the two girls stood in a long corridor, the supposed “walls” littered with playing scenes of a tale. A tale both girls knew very well…
“It’s scenes from the Tale of Sophie and Agatha!” Kaci remarked, spotting the well-known, former students of the School for Good and Evil.
“Wait… These aren’t from the storybooks from Mr. Deauville’s… This is what happened after they graduated, in Camelot! With ‘King’ Rhian and the Snake!” Skylar exclaimed, studying the playing scenes on either side of her. Multiple scenes were surrounding the two girls, each showing something different. They trapped the girls left and right, playing certain moments in time. This story had travelled through the Endless Woods and Beyond like wildfire, but mysteriously, no books had come from Mr Deauville’s on the Tale.
Kaci stood, her eyes glued on an unfurling scene of Agatha, Sophie and Tedros at the School for Good and Evil, preparing the school’s professors and first-years for the war against the Snake. Upon looking closer, Kaci realised there was one student who looked really familiar, but she just couldn’t put her finger on who it was.
“Kaci?” A voice interrupted her thoughts. Skylar’s voice.
“Yeah, Skylar?” she replied.
“Come over here-” Skylar told Kaci.
The younger girl stalked towards her sister, who was staring at a scene. It wasn’t beside all the others – it was at the front instead, facing them directly – and Kaci felt an odd feeling fill her stomach. Skylar turned to face Kaci, a look of confusion appearing on her face. Kaci looked at the scene her sister had just been staring at. The scene depicted a silver, round room, a table standing at the centre. Above the table, sat an open book, with a steel pen hovering over it. The Storian. It was covered in the same, mysterious runes they had seen on the floor; and Kaci thought it was certainly odd. Both girls gasped as the scene unfolded in front of them. Going dark for a moment, the scene changed, showing the pages under the Storian. A picture lay on the snow-white page. A picture of two girls watching as a story unravelled. Two girls that looked exactly like Skylar and Kaci. As the sisters watched this, a blinding light filled the space, sending them falling… Falling…
I hope you enjoyed! If you want to read all the other chapters, here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XX77tI41fKbQ8D2PChlVGe1XbVQTwsOrKpUtZUy3RmE/edit?usp=sharing
(I also edit on this link btw…) Also, you can just click @doublen! I have done some Bios for my characters if you wanna check those out too! See you all next time! (Hopefully, not that long ’til the next chapter!) 😁😉😊😊😅🥰🥰🤗🤗
This is out of context, but when I posted this, I got a notif saying that I mentioned myself… Lol… That hasn’t happened before! 😂😂😂😂😹😹😹😅😅
I LOVE THIS! Also unrelated but Elvia is a beautiful name, please may I use it for a book I am writing?
Thank you SO MUCH! 🥰🤩🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩 The things you write are AWESOME and I LOVE them too!
Thanks so much but the focus here is you! I love your writing, it’s really unique and balanced out-not too much description and not too much action either (too much makes it kinda hard to keep up) and plenty of cliffhangers
I wish I could go through my laptop right now and give you one of the biggest hugs EVER! You’re SO KIND and SO SWEET! 🥰🥰🥰💝💖🧡💛💚💙💜😋🥰🥰🥰🥰
I wish I could do the same, you’re like the most kind, sweet caring person I’ve ever met online! And everything I said about your writing is true! But I forgot to mention that your grammar is perfect! I’ve yet to notice any mistakes 🥰😊🤩🤩
You’re welcome and of course I’ll tag you:) (I probably shouldn’t say this but I think you will be a famed storm enchantress in hiding)
That’s so cool, I’ve always wanted to have my name in a book so I’m living out my dream here 😂
Aww thanks 😊Well for that you’re gonna have to thank some random celebrities daughter my mum came across in a magazine 😂
TYSM @cocostar! Sorry I hadn’t replied sooner: I was busy… But you really ARE so kind saying all those LOVELY things about my writing! And I’m sure I’ve made a Grammar mistakes! (Ask Grammarly: keeps saying I’ve made mistakes left and right, even though I ignore it… Lol) 😹😹😹🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺
Well you’re still an amazing writer, regardless of spelling mistakes!
Me rn: … 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺🥺🥺
Thx @cocostar!! You’re legit gonna make me cry… You’re so kind-hearted, sweet, thoughtful, amazing (I could go on forever at this point…) and you saying that PROVES IT!💝💖🧡💛💚💙💜
OK… Well, you are those things x∞ (Infinity sign… XD!)
*Whips out fingerglow and casts a spell on you so that you can’t say it (or anything similar) back!* 😅🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💗💟😻😻🥺🥺🥺💕💕
Nope! You are much KINDER, NICER and SWEETER! *Whips out fingerglow and casts a spell on you so that you can’t say OR WRITE it (or anything similar) back!* 😅🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💗💟😻😻🥺🥺🥺💕💕
*Lights fingerglow and writes it in the sky* Doublen is the sweetest and kindest person ever🥰🥰🤩🤩😃😄💖😃😄😁
*Lights fingerglow and writes it so big in space that it can be seen from any planet* Cocostar is the sweetest, kindest, most thoughtful, amazing, (I could seriously go on forever) person EVER! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩💝💟💖🧡💛💚💙💜
*crosses out my name and writes Doublen* Everything you wrote just proves that you’re the nicer one 🥰😃😊😁😄🤩🥰❤💖😁😃🥰🥰🥰😊😊
Nu-uh! You are!! I MEAN THAT!!! No BACKSIES! 🥰🥰🥰🥰💖💖💟💟💝💝🧡🧡💛💛💙💙💚💚💜💜
Okay if I can’t do backsies then you are the nicest, smartest most caring person in the universe no backsies.
UGH!!! Anyway, TYSM!!! LYSM!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰
I know! You are the kindest, sweetest, smartest, most caring, most talented person EVER! © That’s COPYRIGHTED! You can’t use anything I said!! 😏😏😏😋😋😋💖💖💟💝🧡🧡💛💛💚💚💙💙💜💜
NOOOOOO. Lysm and TYSM!!! Okay then you are the most clever, loving, positive, easy to get along with, happy person ever to exist. I can’t find the copyright symbol:(.
This has been a Looooong “Compliment War” (credit to @anastasia32 😁😁)
Let’s just call it a truce! *Puts out hand for you to shake it in peace and friendship* 😋😋✌🏻✌🏻🥰🥰🥰🥰
Hiii bestie, I’m doing good 😊😂 This is amazing, I love it soo much. You’re such a great writer and your chapters always suck me in
Good to hear that you’re doing good! Also, I LOVE your writing too! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! 🥰🥰🥰😋😋🤩🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺
Aww thank you lovely, your writing is so much better tho 🥰🥺💕
Nu-uh!! YOURS is!! You CAN’T say it back!!! *Whips out fingerglow and casts a spell on you so that you can’t say it back!* 😅🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗💗💟😻😻🥺🥺🥺💕💕
Nuuuuuu whyyyyyy *grabs @anastasia32 and gets her to undo the spell* YOURS IS BETTER NO RETURNS ❤️🥺😂💓💕
Lol… BUT, that doesn’t WORK cuz I said that you CAN’T and the spell that I cast is like petrification, and can ONLY be reversed by the person who cast it… 🕶🕶🕶😉😉😅😅😎😎😎😎😎😎
Noooooo, you evil child, I must unreverse it, ooh I know *writes down on a piece of paper your are better at writing than me* hehe, brainpower 100, I’m such a genius 😂🥰🥺😹😹
Hii tag me!! I know I am late but tag me!! I love it you are soo good in writing!! 😍🤩🥰😀🤩🤩😍
All your BEAUTIFUL comments make my day everyone! I just- THANK YOU ALL to Pluto and back! (I know that’s not the saying, but I wanted it to go further) You guys REALLY MAKE MY DAY!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺💝💛🧡💚💙💜
THANK YOU @DOUBLEN FOR CREATING THIS STORY! YOU HAVE SUCH A KIND A BEAUTIFUL SOUL!! I WISH FOR YOU THE BEST THINGS IN LIFE!! 😍😍🤩🥰🤩😁😀 like in your words “I say what I mean and I mean what I say” 🤩😍🥰
😍🤩🥰💜🧡💙💚💛💗💖💘♥💞AWW YOU ARE AN AMAZING PERSON DOUBLEN!! AND THANK YOU DOUBLEN YOU’RE THE BEST!! 😍🤩🥰🥺🥺😍💓💗💗💗♥
no offense guys but you are using an excessive amount of emojis 😉😏😂
Hey! This is totally unrelated to the emoji thing ( Lol ) but ( and this is random and weird so you don’t have to answer ) but how come your avatar looks different from ur face slap emoji? Again. Really really random and weird, I was just wondering lol
you can’t – there’s 2 versions 🤦🏻♀️for girls and 🤦🏻♂️for boys
huh weird those are the only ones i have… wait 🤦♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏼♀️🤦🏽♀️🤦🏾♀️🤦🏿♀️ yay!
Haha, I was about to be like, why do only I have those…..BUG, IM BEING HACKED 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😉
Yep, that’s what we were doing, I think it’s super cool, they should make you have like, more options with eyes color, And stuff lol. Or not, idc lol 😂😂😂😁😊😉❤️🤷🏼♀️