dragondreamer26

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28th November, 2019

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    dragondreamer26 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months, 1 week ago

    Chapter one of who knows how many more chapters,
    BANG,BANGboom,nova wakes up with a crash,oh yah she remembers choosing day.something warm and shaking presses agenst her leg she bends down to pick up her small fluffy grey kittens.lets get you feed the cat meows questioningly you do know that I don’t need that food right now,the cat starts to devour the leftover fish,now how to hide you while I’m being sold.hmm I’ll put a pocket in my skirt so you can hide . A nock on the door rings in the silents hury up a rof voice called,hury now shade in the pocket here’s the leftover fish. I’m ready nova calls and she is lead on too the oction lot,the announcer mockingly says how I a lowly ***** thought that I might be picked by the school master the adence laughs all of a sudden a invisible shadow lift her up and all faded into darkness.

        dragondreamer26 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Part two?????

        catsforlife replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Maybe fix your spelling, punctuation, and grammar to make a bit easier to read.

          dragondreamer26 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Sry I was in a rush and made a few mistakes once again sorry 😐,but overall do you like the storyline it was my first.

          catsforlife replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          I think it could use a bit of editing and detail, but otherwise, you’re on the right track

        dragondreamer26 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Plus my cat thought that my iPad would look good on the floor. 😭

          dragondreamer26 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Oh and thanks I’ll try to do better in the future

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