dreamerdraws posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 4 weeks ago

    Greetings everyone! It’s come to my attention that a lot of people post their writing here. Now, while I’m not comfortable sharing the full extent of my work (my poems, my more recent writing, etc), I thought it would be beneficial, since this sight seems to be a good place to receive constructive criticism and a kind but honest viewing. This is a…[Read more]

        dreamerdraws replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        Ps. In case anyone was wondering, I have a few more chapters already written, that I had wrote months ago, when I first wrote this chapter. This isn’t all of the story!

          silver13 replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

          I think that this is really descriptive and if you post or continue I will definitely read it. I also like your plot, it’s very creative, and the airy light perspective it’s narrated from. I would just find words to replace ‘sometime,’ ‘somewhere,’ ‘something’, to make it sound a lil less casual, I also often use those words repeatedly

        dragonhealer replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        this is amazing

        book-lover77 replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        Cool! Your writings amazing! I started writing on the site, and I get good criticism, so its definitely beneficial!

        dreamerdraws replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        @/SILVER13 yeah, that’s definitely a habit of mine. I like to think that I’ve gotten better at not repeating words or phrases since writing this story, but the criticism is really appreciated! I always have to remind myself to be on the lookout for things like that, it’s such an easy habit to fall into, at least for me.

        eloiseruizpalma replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        So firstly, welcome back Dreamer! It’s nice to see you again! This is absolutely amazing but a few tiny things. At the beginning where it says ‘With skin dark as midnight’, I feel like it would flow better if it was ‘With skin as dark as midnight. Also, I don’t know, but I feel like it would sound better if it was ‘repetitiveness of life’…[Read more]

        clarad575 replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        This is great! I really thing that you should keep writing this!
        If you do keep writing this, could you please tag me for it!

        effie replied 10 months, 4 weeks ago

        I love it! If you end up writing more, definitely tag me!

        cocostar replied 6 months, 4 weeks ago