dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 weeks, 4 days ago

    The story of Reanna white
    Sneak peek on chapter 3
    Breakfast sneak peek
    Tags
    @carrot123
    @jellybean11
    —————–
    after pounding down the staircase I was at breakfast ,honestly it looks beautiful not in the tasty beautiful yummy, way one would expect but quaint and something I had never experienced .Real normal food ,not gourmet sausages not rainbow gal…[Read more]

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 weeks ago

    The story of Reanna white
    Sneak peek on chapter 3
    Breakfast sneak peek
    Tags
    @carrot123
    @jellybean11
    —————–
    after pounding down the staircase I was at breakfast ,honestly it looks beautiful not in the tasty beautiful yummy, way one would expect but quaint and something I had never experienced .Real normal food ,not gourmet sausages…[Read more]

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    Hi this chapter two of the story I am writing, I’ll temporarily call it Reanna white, any way summary from chapter one/bio : Reanna White, daughter of the famous snow white and Prince Charming hates life at the castle. So thirteen year old Reanna White runs away, fearing to be placed in good school, and have to be overwhelmed with royal duties…[Read more]

        dritten25 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Sorry it should be called chapter Two a leg no longer broken

        geek replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Really good!

        evisla123 replied 1 month, 2 weeks ago

        Great!

          dritten25 replied 1 month, 1 week ago

          Thanks

        jellybean11 replied 1 month ago

        oooo
        tag moi si te plait
        (tag me pls)

          dritten25 replied 1 month ago

          Of course!

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    Hi! This is a new story I’m writing, her bio is in my activity, hope you enjoy! because this is the first chapter please give reading it a try.
    Tag
    @carrot123
    Reanna White
    Chapter one, new beginnings and new disaster
    ————————————————————————————
    Water dripping all over me, great really great. I said sarcastically, I was about to yell I wasn’t…[Read more]

        i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        It’s kinda short but otherwise good

          lylaagatha replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          I really like it!

          i-am-a-tropical-avocado replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          And please work on grammar/punctuation/spelling etc.

          dritten25 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks for the feedback, yeah, this one is probably the worst of all my chapters, I had a few minutes on a slow IPad.
          I’ll work on punctuation too, I’m a dunce at it.

        sgesuperfan96 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        I loved it! A great start to a twisting bestselling book.

          sgesuperfan96 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          I do agree with @i-am-a-tropical-avocado tho.

          dritten25 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          No, it won’t be published, but thankyou for the support.

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 months, 2 weeks ago

    Hi! This is a new story I’m writing, her bio is in my activity, hope you enjoy!
    Tag
    @carrot123
    Reanna White
    Chapter one, new beginnings and new disaster
    ————————————————————————————
    Water dripping all over me, great really great. I said sarcastically, I was about to yell I wasn’t going to be…[Read more]

        carrot123 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        Good job! But try to work on the punctuation a little more.

          dritten25 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

          Yeah, thanks for the feedback, I’m a dunce at grammar, punctuation is not my strong suit

        carrot123 replied 2 months, 2 weeks ago

        That’s okay

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 months ago

    here is my bio for a new story i’m doing,
    crittisisim and feedback welcome.
    if you want to be tagged for the story just comment what you like or dislike about this bio.
    BIO
    Name: Reana White
    Nickname: Rey
    Parents: Snow white and King Walter Charming
    School: Evil
    Likes: her mother, playing sword battles by herself in the royal castle garden, and…[Read more]

        carrot123 replied 3 months ago

        Nice! Tag me for the story!

          ladyofthebooksge replied 2 months, 3 weeks ago

          Oooh that sounds interesting! I look forward to it

    dritten25 posted an update in the group Book 6: ONE TRUE KING 4 months, 2 weeks ago

    My ONE TRUE KING Thoughts
    (I will try to post this weekly,)
    Ok, so if Sophie has to marry jabeth, who is evil enough to kill his own brother. HIs own BLOOD!! And only Agatha’s team and Sophie know that jabeth is pretending to be Rhian. Then Sophie is about to be married to a murder! And technically Sophie was partly responsible for Rhian’s…[Read more]

        everimagine replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

        I think Japeth is keeping Sophie alive because he needs her in order to look like Rhian. If townspeople noticed ‘Rhian’ killed Sophie, they could start getting suspicious of who he is

          evergirl73 replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

          Also he needs her blood to keep him alive

        everimagine replied 4 months, 2 weeks ago

        Do you mean how her blood healed him in ACOT?

        lilystarling replied 4 months, 1 week ago

        My thoughts exactly

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 5 months ago

    So I am making a story, I have all the info about the characters but I need a bio template to start with, could someone comment one, thankyou

        sofiaishazel replied 5 months ago

        ok hi @dritten25 I can give you a bio template but in your next story can you tag me please, @sofiaishazel ok so anyways
        ____________________________________________________
        Name:
        Special talent:
        School:
        Fingerglow:
        Pets:
        Element:
        Appearence:
        Backstory:
        Family:
        Personality:
        *anything else you want to add here*

          dritten25 replied 5 months ago

          thankyou!

          sofiaishazel replied 5 months ago

          ur welcome also come check out my stories by pressing my avatar then pressing activity

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 6 months, 3 weeks ago

    Hi! This is chapter 5 of Avalona of rainbow gale enjoy!
    Other chapters are in my activity!
    Tags
    @lovergirl
    @brightstar
    @crazycatlady101
    @emilyy
    Chapter 5
    Win or lose
    As I went to bed that night I dreamt of professor sader, and his words in the gallery of good. His soothing voice boomed through every inch of my head. The word echoed like a word…[Read more]

        raventhebad replied 6 months, 3 weeks ago

        OMG this is really good words can’t tell me who good it is its a ten out of ten for sure

        good-or-evil replied 6 months, 3 weeks ago

        This is awesome! Like, the best! 👍!!!!

    dritten25 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months ago

    This is chapter 4 of Avalona of rainbow gale enjoy!
    Tags
    @lovergirl
    @crazycatlady101
    @bright-star
    And our newest tag
    @emilyy
    Chapter 4
    Flip side.
    As soon as the welcoming was over we were sent to class. So we all went, sadly every class I took the more eager I was to shut down the school. Every teacher judged me because I didn’t have perfect…[Read more]

        lovergirl replied 7 months ago

        Great!!

        emilyy replied 7 months ago

        Amazing!!

          dritten25 replied 7 months ago

          Aww thanks

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