effie posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 7 months, 4 weeks ago

    Here’s the second entry.
    Tags:
    @julianna910
    @ bookworm87654321
    @ takan
    @evilerruler845
    @nefeli
    @katiebeau
    @sandstormtiger
    @sydneywhite
    Entry 2
    It failed. I considered not writing this entry, just because of a letter I got today:
    Dear Adora,
    I admire your determination to get into the School for Good, but I simply cannot accept anyone of your skin…[Read more]

        effie replied 7 months, 4 weeks ago

        Oops 2 of my tags didn’t work. @bookworm87654321 and @takan. Hope it worked this time!

        evilerruler845 replied 7 months, 4 weeks ago

        Nice!!! It seems that Adora has lots to think about…

          superdragon replied 7 months, 4 weeks ago

          I love it! Please tag me!

        evernever24 replied 7 months, 3 weeks ago

        I didn’t read your first entry, but still I like it!
        Anyways, thanks for tagging me? Is that what it’s called? Sorry, I’m new!
        Thanks for the comment, I like writing story’s in opposite mode (where if the main character is a girl, I’ll make it a boy) or make the story about younger siblings of characters, you get the point!

    effie posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months ago

    Here’s my updated bio.
    Tags:
    @julianna910
    @bookworm87654321
    @takan
    @evilerruler845
    @nefeli
    Name: Adora
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Mother: Millicent’s sister Andrea
    Father: Prince Oliver, Millicent’s classmate
    School: Good
    Kingdom: Kyrgios
    Appearance: Frizzy black hair, dark brown skin, hazel eyes, tall.
    Backstory: She lived her whole life in Kyrgios,…[Read more]

        effie replied 8 months ago

        Oops. I forgot to add it on the post, but comment your bio if you want to be Adora’s friend.

        sydneywhite replied 8 months ago

        Tag me!
        Here’s my bio, it’s from my story Camelot’s Princess.
        Name: Celeste of Camelot
        Age: Thirteen (She just turned thirteen)
        Gender: Female
        Mother: Queen Agatha of Camelot
        Father: King Tedros of Camelot
        School: Good
        Kingdom: Camelot
        Backstory: She’s been the princess of Camelot since she was born and she hates it. She tries to avoid her duties…[Read more]

          sydneywhite replied 8 months ago

          Anything else?

          effie replied 8 months ago

          Okay. I’ll make sure to include Celeste. I’m just going to tag you right now, @sydneywhite, that way I can read your story.

        sandstormtiger replied 8 months ago

        Tag me! Here’s my character! Love the name Adora by the way!
        Name: Leala Catle of Gavaldon
        Age: 12 now, turning thirteen
        Gender: Female
        Relatives: the Catle’s
        School: School of Good
        The Story: Leala was a normal girl back in Gavaldon, with long black hair and unusual bright amber eyes. She was friends with Arden, a boy taken a year before her…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 8 months ago

        Great! My SGE characters are pretty dead rn so I might as well bring one of them back to life..
        Name: Yaretzie of Woods Beyond (minor character)
        Age: 13
        Gender: Female and Never
        Famous Relatives: She doesn’t have FAMOUS relatives, but she is the “middle” Elder’s granddaughter in Gavaldon.
        Appearance: As for Yaretzie, she has ***** brown hair, w…[Read more]

          effie replied 8 months ago

          I might forget some of that, but I can just come back to it.

        effie replied 8 months ago

        Hi. By not friends, do you mean enemies or they don’t really notice each other?

        effie replied 7 months, 4 weeks ago

        I’ll make it so they aren’t friends, but they don’t hate each other.

    effie posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months, 1 week ago

    Hi again. I’ve also got a story (the first entry, this is going to be her journal) for Adora. Tell me what you think.

    Entry 1
    I’m not saying I’m glad Aunt M was killed, but at least she got her name in a storybook. It’s more than my mom ever did. Mom didn’t even get into the School for Good ad Evil. She just worked on a farm and made enough…[Read more]

        effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago
          julianna910 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          thanks for tagging me

        julianna910 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        thanks @effie you are such a great writer can you read my story

          effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          I’ll look for it @julianna910

    effie posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months, 1 week ago

    Hi. I’ve got a bio, but it’s not very long. Can you tell me what to add. Thanks!
    Name: Adora
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Mother: Millicent’s sister Andrea
    Father: Prince Oliver, Millicent’s classmate
    School: Good
    Race: Black
    Kingdom: Kyrgios

        takan replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        Hmm… Maybe you can add her personality, backstory, appearance, or friends? That’s usually what most people include. 🙂

          julianna910 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          that is a great start here are a few tips about replying
          1-always reply kindly and positivly
          2-when pointing out erorrs BE NICE
          3-have fun

          effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Okay. Sounds good @takan

        julianna910 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        hair,pet,flaw,rolemodel

    effie posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 8 months, 1 week ago

    Hi. I’m new to this, but I love writing stories. I have a binder full of story starts. Here’s one I actually finished:
    Hazel
    The girl was not yet in her teens. 10, maybe. Her brown hair was windblown; curly, or maybe not. Her cheeks were red and her lips were blue with the cold. She was sleeping, but we could tell she was still alive.
    Slowly, her…[Read more]

        effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        The ***** was drank. Sorry about that!

        evilerruler845 replied 8 months, 1 week ago

        I like the story, especially the ending!! However, who is Hazel to these people? That’s what I don’t get. Also, I was confused when you kept on mentioning ‘we’ in your character’s POV (Point of View), since pronouns in first person POV are usually used as I, me, my, and mine.. Was there more than two people with Hazel at the hospital (besides the doctor)?

          effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Yes, I was imagining a while group of friends. I should probably put their names in. Thanks!

          effie replied 8 months, 1 week ago

          Also, they felt sorry for her and decided to do something. They found her on the street on their way home from school.

          evilerruler845 replied 8 months ago

          Thanks for clarifying! I just found this in my motifs so sorry about that..