Here’s my updated bio.
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Name: Adora
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Mother: Millicent’s sister Andrea
Father: Prince Oliver, Millicent’s classmate
School: Good
Kingdom: Kyrgios
Appearance: Frizzy black hair, dark brown skin, hazel eyes, tall.
Backstory: She lived her whole life in Kyrgios,…[Read more]
Oops. I forgot to add it on the post, but comment your bio if you want to be Adora’s friend.
Tag me!
Here’s my bio, it’s from my story Camelot’s Princess.
Name: Celeste of Camelot
Age: Thirteen (She just turned thirteen)
Gender: Female
Mother: Queen Agatha of Camelot
Father: King Tedros of Camelot
School: Good
Kingdom: Camelot
Backstory: She’s been the princess of Camelot since she was born and she hates it. She tries to avoid her duties…[Read more]
Anything else?
Okay. I’ll make sure to include Celeste. I’m just going to tag you right now, @sydneywhite, that way I can read your story.
Tag me! Here’s my character! Love the name Adora by the way!
Name: Leala Catle of Gavaldon
Age: 12 now, turning thirteen
Gender: Female
Relatives: the Catle’s
School: School of Good
The Story: Leala was a normal girl back in Gavaldon, with long black hair and unusual bright amber eyes. She was friends with Arden, a boy taken a year before her…[Read more]
Great! My SGE characters are pretty dead rn so I might as well bring one of them back to life..
Name: Yaretzie of Woods Beyond (minor character)
Age: 13
Gender: Female and Never
Famous Relatives: She doesn’t have FAMOUS relatives, but she is the “middle” Elder’s granddaughter in Gavaldon.
Appearance: As for Yaretzie, she has ***** brown hair, w…[Read more]
I might forget some of that, but I can just come back to it.
Hi. By not friends, do you mean enemies or they don’t really notice each other?
I’ll make it so they aren’t friends, but they don’t hate each other.
Hi again. I’ve also got a story (the first entry, this is going to be her journal) for Adora. Tell me what you think.
Entry 1
I’m not saying I’m glad Aunt M was killed, but at least she got her name in a storybook. It’s more than my mom ever did. Mom didn’t even get into the School for Good ad Evil. She just worked on a farm and made enough…[Read more]
thanks for tagging me
thanks @effie you are such a great writer can you read my story
I’ll look for it @julianna910
Hi. I’ve got a bio, but it’s not very long. Can you tell me what to add. Thanks!
Name: Adora
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Mother: Millicent’s sister Andrea
Father: Prince Oliver, Millicent’s classmate
School: Good
Race: Black
Kingdom: Kyrgios
Hmm… Maybe you can add her personality, backstory, appearance, or friends? That’s usually what most people include. 🙂
that is a great start here are a few tips about replying
1-always reply kindly and positivly
2-when pointing out erorrs BE NICE
3-have fun
Okay. Sounds good @takan
hair,pet,flaw,rolemodel
Thanks! @julianna910
Hi. I’m new to this, but I love writing stories. I have a binder full of story starts. Here’s one I actually finished:
Hazel
The girl was not yet in her teens. 10, maybe. Her brown hair was windblown; curly, or maybe not. Her cheeks were red and her lips were blue with the cold. She was sleeping, but we could tell she was still alive.
Slowly, her…[Read more]
The ***** was drank. Sorry about that!
I like the story, especially the ending!! However, who is Hazel to these people? That’s what I don’t get. Also, I was confused when you kept on mentioning ‘we’ in your character’s POV (Point of View), since pronouns in first person POV are usually used as I, me, my, and mine.. Was there more than two people with Hazel at the hospital (besides the doctor)?
Yes, I was imagining a while group of friends. I should probably put their names in. Thanks!
Also, they felt sorry for her and decided to do something. They found her on the street on their way home from school.
Thanks for clarifying! I just found this in my motifs so sorry about that..
Here’s the second entry.
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Entry 2
It failed. I considered not writing this entry, just because of a letter I got today:
Dear Adora,
I admire your determination to get into the School for Good, but I simply cannot accept anyone of your skin…[Read more]
Oops 2 of my tags didn’t work. @bookworm87654321 and @takan. Hope it worked this time!
Nice!!! It seems that Adora has lots to think about…
I love it! Please tag me!
I didn’t read your first entry, but still I like it!
Anyways, thanks for tagging me? Is that what it’s called? Sorry, I’m new!
Thanks for the comment, I like writing story’s in opposite mode (where if the main character is a girl, I’ll make it a boy) or make the story about younger siblings of characters, you get the point!